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rmcclain124 posted a comment on Wednesday 16th November 2005 9:48pm for Chapter 3 - Harry meets English

I had a feel that that one wouldn't last long. It was a bit too lengthy for me as it is.

One question: Under-over or side-by-side?

-- PK Fan

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Wednesday 16th November 2005 9:28pm for Chapter 3 - Harry meets English

Ouch, that was hard to read. I have seen so many stories written like that.

MPF

Tim Henderson posted a comment on Wednesday 16th November 2005 9:14pm for Chapter 3 - Harry meets English

God yes, RELOAD!!!!! Sorry, 'tis one of my pet peeves too. Bad English burns the eyes.

Jamie46 posted a comment on Wednesday 16th November 2005 8:28pm for Chapter 3 - Harry meets English

Go Alyx :) Save us! :-D hehehehe

nurray posted a comment on Wednesday 16th November 2005 3:24pm for Chapter 3 - Harry meets English

Ouch!

Unfortunately I have seen and read too much fanfiction that is exactly like this chapter. Though no Angel of Mercy to put the author out of my misery. A shame really. A few of those authors have had good ideas and the poor english really lets them down. Its gotten to the point that when I read one now, unless its idea is very good, I stop reading, too much effort for too little reward.