ladysavay posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:39pm

Loved it! I am of the school that thinks any ff story in which Dumbles gets humbled is a good one.

Hurray for you!

aschmitzbwp posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:38pm

Very cute story! Love the idea of Voldemort as a paperweight! Too bad JKR didn't have you guys' imagination! Hope all is getting better for the two of you and look forward to more stories soon!

ily.the.cat posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:18pm

Nice, short, not very detailed, but still good.

princess ducky posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 11:59am

Loved it :)

This is a good take on the Harry Potter series, and I love how Hermione was still included.

Keep Writing

Princess Ducky

Victoria Bollman posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 11:57am

I love it... It was wonderful to see Harry take charge with help from the goblins right from the beginning.

thank you for sharing this little tidbit with the rest of us.

luvs ya lots

Alleykitten posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 11:36am

.... *rolls around on the floor laughing* omg... i reckon this should of been the plot of the actual books ^_^ would of been more interesting and probably closer to the truth with the way harry reacted! good on ya, bob & alyx!
alley

MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 11:05am

As for the free floating phantasm of Voldemort, he was encased in Lucite and functions as a paperweight for Head of the Department of Mysteries and Puzzles.
-Hah! Made me laugh.

Colpinky posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 10:50am

Good work, that was fun. Its good to see you all back again.

Jujuberry posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 10:29am

Awesome, super fun bunny :D

While it would have been just as fun to read chapters upon chapters of this idea- it worked just great as a short story as well.

Thanks so much for sharing!

DaZZa posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 10:19am

<chuckle> You guys *really* don't like Dumbledore, do you? So many possible endings for him, so little time to read and admire. :-) Glad to see you back! We all missed you and your unique style - especially the disclaimers.

94caddy posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 10:19am

Interesting story. I would've liked more info on Ling and family with Harry.

at a loss for words posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 9:58am

Once again, Bob and Alyx, that was amazing. I've been a fan since "Sunset" and eagerly await any publications from the two of you. I don't suppose that you'd consider adapting this into a full-length feature would you? Again, kudos to an amazing story.

~At a loss for words

Mark Blaine posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 9:47am

But much less exciting. Of course, you left out the side stories, except for Hermione and Ron. What of the twins? Ginny? Luna? Neville, even?

Philip Jacobs posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 9:43am

I can see why this bunny kept gnawing on you. It makes way too much sense that if Harry got a constant refrain about Dumbledore's actions, he'd come to associate the man with everything that was bad about his time with the Dursley family. Given that, I can easily see him taking the first chance that came up to slip out of British society altogether. And once that happened, Dumbledore's entire house of cards would come tumbling down. Again, an excellent shortfic. Thanks for sharing with the rest of us.

blue artemis posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 9:24am

That was great. I love what happened to Dumbledore.

jilumasam posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 9:00am

Very nice....not often 7 years gets covered in a one shot. Any more bunnies hopping around????

Liz :)

romero posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 8:56am

A very satisfying tale.

ears posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 8:55am

Awesome job at fitting his life into 4500 or so words!

noylj posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 8:47am

put the paperweight and a note through the veil

Gaurav posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 8:30am

BRAVO!!!!!!BRAVO!!!!!!!!!
pure genius guys
it could be taken as a synopsis for the complete series of 7 books instead of a short condensed story

its cool, now tell me are u planning on the long version of this story with 100 chapters and complete detailed story for the whole 7 years?
;) :D