RavenKnight013 posted a comment on Monday 23rd January 2012 9:14am

... wow...
I like it, lol. Not very often you see a Manipulative!Dumbledore get his own game turned back around on him like that. Good work and keep it up...

Dashusik posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2011 7:28am

nice! I thought there'd be something like that in the end, but it was fun reading and finding out what EXACTLY you chose for the explanation! I couldn't stop laughing!

noreenklose posted a comment on Wednesday 31st August 2011 6:13pm

Excellent!
I really enjoyed your story.
Thank you for writing it.

At the end, Harry could have ranted more at Dumbles and the Order of the Idiots. He had every right to lay into Dumbles about being stuck at the Dursleys, and their criminal treatment of him. And also to protest Dumbles ordering his isolation every summer.

KUTGW,

Noreen

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Tuesday 9th August 2011 12:06am

Good story!

Asharra posted a comment on Wednesday 27th July 2011 6:20pm

That was just... brilliant! I might havee hammered a bit more on the inconsistencies like google (Voldemort who spent a decade as a spirit might not even know what a computer is, much less what google is)

I would have also liked if there had been more letters. There are so many things that could have gone before Snape in a leather bustier (BTW, YUCK!!! That's nightmare material and I have to sleep within the next year.)

Well, keep the madness alive!

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Friday 10th June 2011 4:32pm

I loved that. It was perfect.

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Thursday 24th March 2011 8:52pm

Wonderful! Very cute and very Marauder! Actually I would love to see this carried into more chapters as Harry deals with the backlash of this but also deals out his own brand of I am tired of being manipulated and shows the Order and possible the Wizarding World how dark Dumbledore actually is. After all now Harry has access to the Potter Family Vault. He should also make it clear that the things he wrote about his family treated him were not lies.

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Thursday 24th March 2011 7:58pm

Wonderful! Very cute and very Marauder! Actually I would love to see this carried into more chapters as Harry deals with the backlash of this but also deals out his own brand of I am tired of being manipulated and shows the Order and possible the Wizarding World how dark Dumbledore actually is. After all now Harry has access to the Potter Family Vault. He should also make it clear that the things he wrote about his family treated him were not lies

thaumologist posted a comment on Friday 18th March 2011 2:59am

Brilliant. From an outside view, it was incredibly obvious what was going on, but you could see how it would look from the inside.

As per usual, well written, and no complaints.
DFTBA
C

lwj2 posted a comment on Wednesday 9th March 2011 4:34pm

buwahahahhaha

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Monday 17th January 2011 10:47am

Awesome! I really enjoyed it! I love stories where the order gets outwitted by Harry.

rajvir posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd November 2010 5:49pm

that was so hilarious nice job

Abraxan posted a comment on Thursday 12th August 2010 2:10pm

That was a hoot! And I loved your disclaimer. A fun read all around.

Abraxan

Deborahsu posted a comment on Friday 25th June 2010 5:31am

Read it again, still love it! LOL!!!

cybergades posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd June 2010 4:14pm

i Just can't get enough of this story. it's just too good. Absolutely loved it guys. Keep up the amazing work. I also look forward to seeing your next chapter of Mutant storm. I don't think i've read a better crossover yet. You just keep knocking them out of the park.

PolarUnicorn posted a comment on Sunday 6th June 2010 12:55pm

Absolutely love this story :)

Just what the order needed

Thaks again for a great story

fallenhunter posted a comment on Saturday 29th May 2010 7:41am

cute and points out the logical problems with the Wizarding world.

Love to see other such snippets (I dont even consider this a short story, sorry, I like novel length stuff).

Cheers!

VIRUS452 posted a comment on Thursday 22nd April 2010 11:32pm

that was good love it i guest it was a trick of about 2 letter and there is the connect that Harry & Vold have talk to each there in there minds there was a one that was good

lipasnape posted a comment on Saturday 13th March 2010 2:16am

Well done. Though, it was more interesting while I expected a bigger scheme.

LynnTerald posted a comment on Tuesday 9th March 2010 3:42pm

I suspected by the fourth or fifth letter. That would have been great in the original books.