Mariposa posted a comment on Friday 4th July 2008 12:07am for Chapter 02 - Explanations

Wow! I have spent a very enjoyable hour reading this chapter! There was so much in it I don't know what to say! The part where Scott offered to adopt Harry was so sweet it made me all teary! I hope they can get that expedited and I hope he takes Summers as part of his name. I love this story so much! I can't wait for another update already!

JaMeSmUrF posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 11:47pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

It looks like the story has been removes as when i typed the address into my browser, a message appeared stating no story was found. I guess they removed it.

As for Mutant Storm...im loving it. Are you going to start updating on a monthly basis? Will the wait for the next chapter be longer due to 'a blow to your motivation'? I hope not, but understandable. Again, good chapter, great story. Later dudes.

Wolf550e posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 11:14pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

RE: [b]Sarahb[/b], FFA has atom feed auto-discovery and you can subscribe to have it email you when a story is updated.

Story: It was neat, but I don't want Harry to forgive and forget. I want people to die. All the Death Eaters, all the corrupt ministry officials, Dumbledore and Ron. I don't even care what happens with the British government and people. But Harry being satisfied with "living well" as revenge is crap.

Rob Clark posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 11:11pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

As usual a fine chapter. Nice to see Harry getting a bit of healing. Almost a pity they are talking him into going back to Britain. Really would be best for him to stay in the US. Course that would be kind of boring; at least until he makes some enemies on this side of the pond. :)

BTW congrats on finally getting the @#%(*$# stolen story taken down. AT LAST!!!!


Rob

candace1 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:58pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

loved the chapter!! I also sent 10 emails from different addresses to support@fanfiction.com for you guys. Please don't be discouraged!!! I don't think the idiot who ripped you off will add anything to their so called story.They will get their cupuppence(sneaks up behind copy-cat author and wacks it on the head multiple times with and iron spiked mallet). Love you guys to bits(squeezes Alyx and Bob till their eyes start to bulge) :) later

Sarahb posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:57pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

once again a great chapter,

sorry to hear about the theft of your story, i did try and find it, but i couldn't, so either I'm not good at finding things on ff.net, or it has already been taken down (I hope for the later)

I really enjoy this story, and hopefully this episode hasn't taken away all your motivation.

I liked the way you made Hermione explain the whole mutant thing, and I liked the reactions of the different characters.

I was wondering one thing though...If you either tell us how often (approximately) you'll update the story, or maybe use the front page to put out info, like this episode with the theft, so that I can convince my self not check your site every day. I'd really appreciate it.

well, good luck with the next chapters and I hope you are enjoying the summer

jenks posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:57pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

(I sent an e-mail to fan fiction.net) Please don't let the twits out there to stop you from writing and posting.Your works are one of the few that are enjoyable for me to read.

genkaku posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:35pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

Good story, always enjoy reading your stuff. Also it seems to have worked for "Britain's Darkest Hour" I went to see if story was still there and its been removed, I also searched so it seems they finally got off their duffs and did something to someone who deserved it. Anyways look forward to the next chapter and hoping you still write it. Thanks

Mihir posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:32pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

Finally! Another killer chapter from you guys! I've been waiting for a LONG time! The wait was worth it though ... When's the next one? hopefully it won't be too long ... I hope that Harry will stay on in the Wizarding world though and improve it
As to your request at the end of the chapter, i will happily contribute
P.S. one more thing ... the black library having over TEN THOUSAND books!!!!! a bit unbelievable but, I'll take your word for it ... itIS fantasy after all. I wonder how Dumbles will react when he finds out who is taking them ...
Anyway, update soon

Iriai88 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:21pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

Good news, "Britain's Darkest Hour" seems to have been removed. At least, it's no long under the same address you provided.

morriganscrow posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:16pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

It seems the bastardized version of your story is either down, or under review.
I have still sent a complaint, as per your eminently reasonable request, so NEVER, for a moment, think that we, your loyal fans, won't take up our torches, pitchforks and keyboards in your defense.
Alyx - what size slippers do you take? I can replace the llama-loved ones with real Aussie Ugg boots.
Excellent chapter, full of juicy, chewy chunks. Harry is nicely portrayed, as is Hagrid. You also write the X-Men very well.
I am, as always, keen to read more.

charlotte posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:16pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

Very good chapter, but please don't make Harry too warm toward his former friends. From my own family experiences, while you can care about someone, emotional space barriers help manage relationships.
I did as you asked and e-mail the fanfiction.net site to remove the offending title. I reviewed it a few weeks ago. Sheesh they could have at least changed a few things. Bad Manners all the way around. Please do not stop writing. I enjoy your excellent tales very much.

charlotte posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:15pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

Very good chapter, but please don't make Harry too warm toward his former friends. From my own family experiences, while you can care about someone, emotional space barriers, help manage relationships.
I did as you asked an e-mail the fanfiction.net site to remove the offending title. I reviewed it a few weeks ago. Sheesh they could have at least changed a few things. Bad Manners all the way around. Please do not stop writing. I enjoy your excellent tales very much.

Magnificent the Destroyer Lord posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:10pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

Damn, that sucks. I'll take a look at both the first chapter of your works and the other guy so I know what the hell I'm doing; it's probably one of the worst crimes out there in my books - especially since there's no real way to nail the suckers other than yanking their stuff from the web sites like you're trying.

Hope this goes well

M*T*D*L*

Lon Huey posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 10:02pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

We may have broken ff.net. I tried to send an e-mail. It got returned as undeliverable. Glad to hear they took the story down.

Don't normally like crossovers. Love this one.

Kathleen posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 9:51pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

I sent fanfiction.net an email.
I also very much enjoyed this chapter. I love the fact that Harry's broomstick flying translated so well to jets! I'm hoping to see some jet flying in the next chapter...and maybe that miniaturized jet idea? That would be SO cool!

bmatsea posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 9:40pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

Another wonderful chapter. I continue be amazed at the detail that you bring to each and every chapter that you write. I look forward to more from this story and hopefully many more other stories in the future.

Thank you

Bmat

silentjackal posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 9:23pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

please keep up with the writing! I enjoy your stories immensely and will miss you horribly if you stop writing.

your information makes me glad that I have moved all my own attempts at fan fiction over to potterheadsanonymous.com

silentjackal

Laura8 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 9:17pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

I am a huge fan of Sunset and Sunrise. Mutant Storm has all the hallmarks of being just as wonderful as those stories and I think you guys are very talented writers. After reading your author's note at the end of Ch. 2, I went to ff.net to read Britain's Darkest Hour and lodge a complaint against it. To my surprise I couldn't find the story under either the link you provided or the story name. I don't know whether ff.net finally removed the story or if the so called author changed the title again. Please don't let the actions of some untalented person that believes others are as idiotic as themselves, and the administrators of one site, make you not want to continue your wonderful works of genius. Those of us that love your work read it on fanficauthors.net and will stand behind you no matter what.

NateGold posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 9:12pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations

Another excellent chapter, although I would have liked a bit more about Harry's first days there as well as what was going on back in Brtain. I anticipate eagerly a confrontation between Snape and Jean/Professor X. Looking forward to a Major mental beat down.

By the way, I tried to access the plagiarized work after filing a complaint..looks like it has finally been yanked, as it couldn't find the story.

Hope this eases your mind a bit, and looking forward to more.