Mutant Storm
Chapter 02 - Explanations
By Bobmin
Reviews
Damon Ring posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 6:04pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
Hey guys,
don't let some low-life with no imagination of his own and the integrity of a snail bring you down. I have been a fan of your work ever since i read the first chapter of D.A.
Your stories have helped keep me sane in some of the most dangerous places in the world (Iraq, Afghanistan and Wales, ok maybe not Wales) and with an upcoming deployment in the wind again i will once more be relying on your updates to escape for an hour or so. So please, please don't stop...or i'll be forced to send the boys around for a word, and not even Alan Rickman could save you!
On a serious note (no, really) I am really enjoying the first two chapters and am looking forward to where this is going, just one question, are you planning on killing Ron off again? You seem to be setting him up to be Reductor bait. And will you be featuring any of the other x-men? My favourites are Nightcrawler and Shadowcat. That was two questions, sorry!
Damon
archean posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 6:00pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
Another awesome chapter, i love it. Especially the latter part about dual citizenship and all. Giving HP something he never had .... choices and a normal family life
Thanks for sharing.
ginnyrocks posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:56pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
I absolutly love this story. It was to the point that I was chcking three or four times per day to see if you guys updated. I know you have written a lot of this story but I would have liked to see other Xmen.especially Kitty and Kurt being that their powers are similar to Harry's. Oh well, those two are members of Excalibur(the UK Xmen) so they could conceivably meet up when Harry goes home. Who am I to complain. Just keep writing, you are too good not to.
ps Email is on the way
Nicholas Baldwin posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:56pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
Please don't be disheartened by thieves, FF.net's admins may sometimes be a bit lax, hypocritical, stupid, etc, but the people at FFA.net are awesome... Now a days i pretty much stick to FFA, and only stray to other sites on recommendations. Im just trying to remind you that even tho there are bad eggs out there, there are also apparently 7000 registered fans (and no doubt thousands more un registered) ready and eager for your (and bob's) next piece of work.
Bferbear posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:42pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
Email duly sent. A passive harassment campaign is always fun ;)
Excellent chapter. I am very much looking forward to the direction you are taking this.
carlelonex posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:33pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
we will all do our best in my class to help
Albus Brian Dumbledore posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:30pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
Best story I've ever read. Always wanted to read about HP/Xmen. GREAT
MadMax666 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 5:08pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
An excellent story, and I do hope that you will not allow the mess over at fanfiction.net to curb you from writing further.
What I find strange about the whole matter is that, usually, ff.net is very quick to respond to complaints about violations of their TOS. Too bad you didn't include any song lyrics in the story, as that would have made ff.net pull it immediately...
Please keep up the good work.
MM666
Stoppelchen1977 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 4:49pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
(Sorry for bad english, but i am an german Fan. ^^) Hi there, i really like youre style of writing and enjoy each story of you. If anyone takes one of youre storys, rename it and repost it at FF.net, i think this would speak for the weakness of the "thief" himself.
Please don ´t let this stop youre great storys. I think, youre Fans (like me) help you and write to the Admin(s) of FF.net.
My mail should entering their Mailboxes now. ^^
Greetings,
Stopellchen1977
Drake posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 4:47pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
Message Sent: Stolen Fanfic
The staff at fanfiction.com has always been the bane of many good, and some not so good, authors. I myself was slighted a number of years ago, and never retained the love of fan fiction that I use to hold.
Another great story by the way. Wish I had a donut to wash it down with )':
Oldwolf posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 4:38pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
On the subject of writing, I hope you keep it up. I look forward to every new chapter very eagerly.
Now, as to the story itself, I'm glad to see Harry responding so well Professor X. After Dumbledore, he'd be entitled to be a bit paranoid about old men. I'm also glad to see Harry reacting so well to Logan. Wolverine may be foul mouthed and surly, but he's very honest and upfront, both of which Harry needs at present.
I wonder how long it will be before Snape outs Harry's location to Tommy. It's pretty much just a matter of time.
Why would Fudge think Harry would do anything for him except curse and hex him? Maybe Lucy implanted a compulsion or suggestion. Oh well, it's going to get interesting if nothing else.
Rufus posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 4:33pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
Dear Bob and Alyx,
Of course we'll use that address...
In regards to your motivation to write, I can understand the blow. I just ask you not to stop writing those fantastic stories you brought us so far. I've read Sunset and Sunrise five times each... And I recommand it (without the need to steal it and publish it under another name) to every person looking for a good fic and not knowing you exist...
In Re: Mutant Storm, I just want to say that this is the beginning of something of equal quality as sunset or sunrise. I'll be waiting (patiently) for the next installment.
Rufus
Peter_Clarke posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 4:22pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
I have to agree with you about people who steal anothers work they deserve to be committed to the deepest and hottest part of hell. I had a quick look at the link. At the bottom of the chapter the poster gives all credit to you and suggests that to read the rest of it we come to this site.
A/N: So, this is a story that was deleted from fanfic cuz it had extremely long authors notes and some guy got all pissy and flipped out. To read the rest of it, go to Bobmin356's profile and follow the link. Just trying to creat awareness for the best story out there! :-) P.S., on their site it's called 'Sunset Over Britain"
So far I have enjoyed every one of your stories and this one seems to be heading the same way.
Yunaine posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 3:54pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
Thanks for the update, loved reading it further.
Sending Hagrid was indeed the best way to go further since everyone else would be "circumcept" (?)
Damn I really need to learn some more words in English, school has been too long ago xD
I sent a mail to fanfiction -again-. I'm starting to wonder what criteria they do use to remove stories.
I once reported a story over three times because of blatant rape of 7-9year olds, in the story it was eventually glossed over and nobody was even punished for it. I finally gave up, those admins really need to grow a brain. I'm starting to wonder when they'll ignore the wrong person that won't stop at mailing and take it to court. Oh well, their problem.
Tuomas Heikkinen posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 3:47pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
I Will certainly be posting a complaint to fanfiction.net after i have posted this review. You two are best active writers in current fanfiction and new chapter from you always brightens my day
tony s posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 3:25pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
Well, i've already sent three notices in system and to support about the idiot who likes to steal shite. regardless, i think that if you stop writing, you'll be letting them win. you two are excellent writers and you works have motivated me to start writing my own works. When i finally get a ways into it, maybe you can look it over and tell me what you think.
Anyway, another chapter down and despite it being harry/ginny its pretty damn good so far. keep it up, k?
jilumasam posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 3:20pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
A word regarding your author notes and the plagarism...That sucks!
Having said that, this is a brilliant story!
Many thanks for writing it
Lizzy :)
Mrs.TiffanyPotter posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 3:05pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
Great chapter. I find Professor X's stricter moral code and his refusal to abondon his beliefs a refreshing change from Dumbledore who on the surface seems like a paragon of virtue but is willing to chuck his values out the window at the drop of a hat.
I hope that Harry can come to somekind of understanding with his friends. The hate that Harry feels now can rot the soul if left to ferment to long. It would be a pity if Harry turned in to a MIni-Snape.
I'm headed over to send my email now and I hope that what that bastard did doesn't keep you from doing something your so good at and obviously love.
shimbot42 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 3:05pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations
Again, Brilliant. I have an idea that may make fanfiction.net take notice. I say we SPAM BOMB THEM!!!!!
sunrisesunset posted a comment on Thursday 3rd July 2008 6:28pm for Chapter 02 - Explanations