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Jason Karr posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 5:58am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

I for one am looking forward to how you are going to deal with the deatheaters the school.

Mariposa posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 5:41am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

Great chapter! I reread this story every few weeks because it seems when I do you update and I love it regardless. I love the chapter name! It's just perfect.

Lillias posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 5:33am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

I have been reading your stories since you first started on this site, and yet again, you deliver a story that is well written, well thought out, and incredibly entertaining to read. Your writing style has evolved since Spiritus Crystallus and Dumbledore's Army (excuse me if they're in the wrong order as I'm sick and a little bit delirious with a moderate fever)making your stories read smoother and the flow of the story more believable. If ever you have the intention of writing and publishing original fiction, let me know and I'll start keeping an eye out for your books. Once again, I enjoy reading your stories and being whisked into your vision of what MAY have happened. I prefer to ignore the last 2 books and thoroughly enjoy your entertaining versions. Cheers, and keep on writing!

Lillias posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 5:32am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

I have been reading your stories since you first started on this site, and yet again, you deliver a story that is well written, well thought out, and incredibly entertaining to write. Your writing style has evolved since Spiritus Crystallus and Dumbledore's Army (excuse me if they're in the wrong order as I'm sick and a little bit delirious with a moderate fever)making your stories read smoother and the flow of the story more believable. If ever you have the intention of writing and publishing original fiction, let me know and I'll start keeping an eye out for your books. Once again, I enjoy reading your stories and being whisked into your vision of what MAY have happened. I prefer to ignore the last 2 books and thoroughly enjoy your entertaining versions. Cheers, and keep on writing!

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 5:07am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

Yes yes i do expect you to answer

DO IT NOOWWWWWW Bobble

damn good chapter i loved how dawlish got put down

Orion posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 4:48am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

Great, thanks for the update. I'm happy that the rest of the world will finally be clued in to how off Britain is.

Thanks for the update!

gadriam posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 4:45am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

Thank you for making my day a bit brighter. There's nothing like overcooked angst percolated through a magical adolescent mind to make me feel normal.
*kowtow*

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jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 4:30am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

Outstanding chapter!!!! I want to send a knuckleer device to anyplace you want to send it!!!! Will we be seeing Harry decide to fight for himself and his family???? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!!!!

Kruste posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 3:51am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

Now, thats a Kick Ass Harry.

Jamey posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 3:48am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

Wow! Just WOW! HOLY WOW!!!

And what happens if Harry reveals to the Americans that there are a couple of dozen, at least, marked Death Eaters attending Hogwarts as students, and one *TEACHING*, and that Dumbledore has known about it since the beginning of school, and done nothing about it?

Sooner or later, the question of phasing vs. Unforgivables is going to get tested. Truthfully, the way this is going, I'm going to have to expect the Crucio, and because Harry phased to let it go through, it'll hit Ginny, which will result in Harry going past fission and fusion, and straight to macroscopic quantities of antimatter. A few kilograms will do.

mwinter posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 3:15am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

Ah, it was time she was setting up the mail box for the mail man instead of the Llamas. Realy thats good to know. I truely dislike the USPS. Hey Alyx, anyway I can send you in your struggle against the USPS?

Great Chapter!!! Really liked the fight sequence at the end. I think Harry just learned that from now on at the first spell through to just phase and cast and stay phased until everyones down. If not he'll end up hurt.

kellygreenpassion posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 2:50am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

that was one hell of a chapter. It was about time Janie told Harry the true about both things.

Wolfric posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 2:47am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

Great chapter. Guess Umbridge must have gotten a new wand, pity. Seems to me that Harry needs to spend more time with his dragon friend. I am interested to see what happens to the JrDEs, somehow I don't see Ginny, Hermione, Neville and Ron making a preemptive strike. Logan, maybe. There may be a slight inconsistancy about whether or not Black castle is concealed or not, it seems like the story says it is concealed and then has student assembling in the courtyard... Even if true such a minor thing hardly diminishes my enjoyment of your efforts. Thanks for writing. W.

whatareyouevensaying posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 2:46am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

Pretty interesting update, it's nice to have a reason for Harry behaving so emotionally. Gotta let his bratty, average teenage behavior slide under these circumstances.

Looking forward to more.

coronal posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 2:43am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

Pfft. Your stories are better than any knuckleer weepans anyway.

I really, really like this story. What fun!

Watching the Embassy put the smack down on Scrimgeour was most amusing, and I'm looking forward to seeing what may happen next. Perhaps a visit from storm, to show people just WHY angering a mutant is a bad idea? It's been a long time since Scotland has been hit by a hurricane. :)

Carol Layland posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 2:33am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

I know that you really do not care about the reviews that we your faithful readers submit. Still, this reader wish to say that she is very glad that you two to write and update your current story every so often and that she is already very eager to have a read at the next chapter and she hopes that you break your established pattern and post the next update much sooner that you have in the past. This reader is so much a fan of your stories (note not you two) just your stories that she will read and re read and re-read to infinity
Respectfully Carol Layland.

Bobmin356 replied:

Actually we do care what the readers have to say. Its just that there are so many reviews that we've pretty much given up all attempts to respond to them. Hence in this author's note, I put a note, from me to my co-author. Making it therefore a valid author's note. :)

Milarqui posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 2:26am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

That was a good chapter! I really enjoyed how Scrimgeour got a good beating - figuratively speaking -, that Umbridge was sent to Azkaban and that Harry may be getting better with the always adorable Ginny! Please continue writing on this!

nth_x posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 2:09am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

The ministry is seriously screwed up. How do they not see their hypocrisy. If he's such a dark creature, why would they want him to help with Voldemort? Wouldn't they be more likely to want to kill him, thus ending the prophecy?

Actually, it would be interesting to see that happen as a backlash to him "defending himself" from the aurors in Dumbles' office. On the other hand, there's only so much he could take before just teleporting away forever. And that could sort of end the story, I guess.

Anyway, I enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for writing!

Michael10 posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 1:34am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

I am not ungrateful!!!! (sweatdrops) Am I?

(shakes head)
Always appreciate the great stories that you present to us, your loyal and humble minions. (Will work for Ramen)
Keep up the great work.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Monday 12th October 2009 1:30am for Chapter 08 - Minister Stupid

Another great chapter, but I'm not too impressed with Jean as a parent, she's still coming across as an X-man first.