oldescript posted a comment on Saturday 2nd January 2010 3:45pm for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

I've enjoyed your writing for years but was skeptical when you first approached this work...I'm really impressed...you're pulling this off quite convincingly...I think it's as good as anything you've done...you two are really good...thanks!

AnnaTigg posted a comment on Saturday 2nd January 2010 5:18am for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

Happy New Year Bob & Alyx. I have been away and only able to catch up with fanfiction today, and what a joy to have a new chapter of Mutant Storm to savour. As always, this was a brilliant chapter. I loved Harry's interaction with the goblins, the prefects taking matters into their own hands regarding the school's marked Death Eaters, and Hermione & co making their plans for Snape - Madam Pince's naivety in that scene was particularly amusing. Xavier's neat manipulation of the Minister and Aurors was excellent, although obviously we would prefer Harry not to have been in the hospital wing to make that scene necessary...I can only say keep up the great work, as always, and thank you once again for the quality of your writing.

Stella Sebarron Black posted a comment on Friday 1st January 2010 8:38pm for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

Quick question. Was the Slytherin 3rd year in the previous chapter, you know, the one who talked about "knuckleer weapons", was his name, by any chance, George W. Bush? If it wasn't, maybe it should have been. ;P

Stella Sebarron Black posted a comment on Friday 1st January 2010 8:06pm for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

I quite enjoy your story the way it is. I particularly enjoyed how you killed off Bellatrix. A fitting end in my opinion. An interesting way for Malfoy Sr. to die as well. It would probably annoy you if I said update faster, and I know that if your life is anything like mine, your lucky to find ANY spare time to write, so I'll just say, "Keep up the good work." ;D

vhemacha posted a comment on Thursday 31st December 2009 1:55pm for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

Great chapter! The tension seems to be ratcheting upwards with each chapter, and it's really interesting to read. I look forward to the next chapter.

CamilleF posted a comment on Thursday 31st December 2009 12:24am for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

Personally, I think all of your stories are awesome and I'm just grateful you post them for me to read. Thanks for the latest update!!

Scott Sakraida posted a comment on Wednesday 30th December 2009 10:16am for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

I am going to go with the enjoy part. Each chapter you write gets better and better. I'm just curious if Jean is going to go into Phoenix, that would be interesting to see in the wizarding world.

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Tuesday 29th December 2009 8:56pm for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

Every time you update this story get better and better! I almost feel sorry for Harry with the stuff you put him through in your stories (Currently in the middle of rereading Sunrise) but I can't wait for more. The more you torture him and the other toons the happier I am. I wonder what that says about me? I should probably seek help but who does it harm besides some fictional charecters and small animals.

LuffyLaxer posted a comment on Tuesday 29th December 2009 5:43pm for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

This Story is so epic!!! Good job guys. Keep the chapters coming. You got One loyal Reader on your Hands.

AntJohn posted a comment on Tuesday 29th December 2009 1:03pm for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

I do appreciate the effort that you [u]both[/u] have put into this story! (Yes, Alyx, I do appreciate the efforts that you put into keeping Bob "stable" A loosing battle no doubt, but still a worthy effort)

I do wonder if you have completed introducing the X-MEN / Mutant characters that will be included in this story, because I still think Political!Beast vs. Dumbasadoor would be an interesting matchup.

I do like well written romance, be it Ginny, Hermione, Luna or whomever (well not slash) so I dont care about the shippers bleating but thank you for writing well developed plots and romance scenes.

I wont offer any bribes or threats or "pleaze update moor" comments, but I will offer to write up a scene or three if you would be willing to read them and possibly make any notes you feel are appropriate. I would drop them on your yahoo site.

Anywho, enjoy WoW (Been playing EQ, EQ2 and WOW for 12 years.. Nice way to spend a decade), and make sure that you hurt any unsuspecting gnomes along the way.

madrymon posted a comment on Tuesday 29th December 2009 10:49am for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

Another excellent chapter

Mac Xavier posted a comment on Tuesday 29th December 2009 5:51am for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

I found your penguins. Please come get them, they're mucking up my backyard. And if I have your penguins does that mean you have my otters?

In any case, I love this story and your both brilliant. Thank you for sharing with the rest of us.

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 29th December 2009 1:09am for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

Dear Alyx and Bob, Thank you so much for a great addition to this story. I was looking forward to Christmas because I thought you might update about then. Thank you so much for the Christmas present. This story is moving right along and I really enjoy the way you are developing the characters. The scene with Harry and Ginny was great. Thank you so much. Of course Harry has to suffer and he did big time on this one. The fight at Grinhalt was fantastic. You have such creative minds. I don't know how you come up with all the different scenarios that you do but I really enjoy them. Thanks so much for a great additon to your story. I look forward to more in the future. pms

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 28th December 2009 5:45pm for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

WOOGLY

and forget jaina she a stuck up lil thing. Hook up harry with Sylvanas.

Good story guy and queen. damn good so far. although yer driving me nuts waiting to see snape get snerked. Ohhh and nice ending for rita there one of the better ones ive seen.

Seriously though you doing a wow/potter crossover alyx? that would so freaking ROCK!!!!111!!1!1

Zeta_One posted a comment on Monday 28th December 2009 5:04pm for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

I [u]still[/u] am enjoying this story. I hope Harry can "deal" with popping a few evil heads! Finally, Ginny and Harry hook up. YEAH! Thanks for sharing your story with us.

darkleaf posted a comment on Monday 28th December 2009 11:20am for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

A good chapter. Can't wait to see what Harry's friends have planned.

on another note... Was 'Evolutionary Revolution' the basis for this story? I've noticed that story listed as 'coming soon' on your fanfiction.net page for a while now, and the summary seems to fit Mutant Storm's.

esenez posted a comment on Monday 28th December 2009 8:57am for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

hi! i just read your entire story this far and wanted to say i LOVE it! im obsessed with Harry Potter and X-men and have never found a story that puts them together in a way that seems at all possible. you finally did it! yay! cant wait for the next part. 10/10!!

Melissa posted a comment on Sunday 27th December 2009 9:01pm for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

Excellent! I do so love your stories!
As for the penguins, check Northrend, just west of ToC. I've heard that the Occultists have an entire herd on their hands and all they do is stand around and look pretty. May as well put them to work! XD
Looking forward to the next installment!

Jeremy Adler posted a comment on Sunday 27th December 2009 8:35pm for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

Good chapter!

I'm still curious. Is Dumbledore in this story like the one in the SOB series, or like the one in "Dumbledore's Army"? He seems to care about the students here, but he still manipulates some people.

Keep up the good work.

bonzo86 posted a comment on Sunday 27th December 2009 8:02pm for Chapter 9 - A Pleasant Surprise and First Blood

Best Skeeter exit ever. Really enjoying the story even if I've only ever seen the Xmen movies.