By Bobmin
Reviews
Abaines posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 1:41am
Loved it! I agree with many others that Harry has to be careful after he wins because so many will try to use him for their own gain. I loved the stuff with BLI!
Sonicdale posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 1:34am
Nice. Very nice.
Had some cliched elements, but approached them at different angles and didn't belabor the point.
Good.
Now. Get back on the hobby horse and finish SOB.
And I'll send you a box of sugar-free chocolate. :)
Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 1:26am
Nice. Love it when Dumbledore and Snape get theirs.
Good story. Thank you for sharing it.
Tom A.
Pai posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 1:26am
Very nice one shot. Tho i do wish it was a "lot" longer. You could have gotton a lot of chapters out of a plot like this.
uthamm posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 1:25am
Nice. Love the one shots and I know that I can always get a bit of DUMBledore. Thanks for sharing!
KLGreen posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 1:24am
I give it to you that was excellent
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 1:21am
Great story, thanks for sharing it with us.
Crys posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 1:21am
Some pretty standard stuff for a Indy!Harry and some unique stuff.
Being an offshoot of the McG clan is new. I expected her to turn on AD at that point. Your story, though.
Actually having goblins and house elves in classes is different. Good idea, though.
But a house elf in Slytherin? Okay, that one is just blowing my mind . . .
All in all, thoroughly enjoyable story.
atlantis-rob posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 1:18am
Excellent tale of what would have been nice for a shortened 6 and 7. hehhe. I especially liked the epilogue with the kids. Also his pranking of the order, handling of the DE families and the goblins were great ideas. The trick in the beginning was awesome. Hopefully fred and george got pictures of we are harry potter day...hahhaha cheers!
noahshonor posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 1:11am
Awwwww
That was FUN
harrysfriend posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 1:10am
Excellent story. I, personally, like Ron and usually am upset when authors bash him but even I can't deny a good story.
lionsgate posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 12:52am
In one word : GREAT ! : Thanks .
kcgx23 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 12:48am
Fabulous story, I loved it, too bad it wasn't longer however, I would have loved to read more.
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 12:45am
Awesome. Brilliant. Wonderfully fun! Thanks, guys, for giving free rein to the bunny and writing it for us!
David D. Smith posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 12:31am
Wonderful story.
kenny posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 12:22am
awesome awesome i love it i love it very well done and i can't wait to read more frm u
Jarrod posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 12:17am
Very cool...hehe, are you sure you two aren't talking to Dr.T on some of the social issues ;-)
Really in the end good stuff, can't wait for more of sunrise.
Treck posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 12:11am
Bravo! This was a pleasant surprise. I wasn't expecting you to post anything other then your Sunrise/Sunset series until they were complete.
I loved the way you handled a !Super Harry. It's the first time I've seen a fic of this type where it didn't take 25+ chapters to do what could have been done in the first.
Criticism? Well the only thing that I was left with came to me after the story hit the 20 years into the future mark. that was just a question of "What became of Ron."
Well done.
Treck
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 12:00am
A nice little story overall, I'd have liked to seen what Albus's plans were fleshed out a tad bit more, and really would have liked to heard more of what happened to Albus after. I could have stood to heard if Ron cleaned up his act or not as well. Still a great story, thank you.
Dave Harris posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 2:17am