Rowan Mikaio posted a comment on Sunday 22nd March 2009 6:23pm

"You're an unconvincing liar, werewolf. Lily Evans nee Potter was the adopted daughter of the Evans. As it turns out, my mother was born Lily McGonagall, part of an obscure branch of that family that had emigrated to America. Her real parents were killed by accident. She was adopted by Frank and Rose Evans and brought back to England.

Née is a French word meaning 'born' and is used to refer to someone's maiden name-- the name with which they were born
For the purposes of this story, it should have been "Lily Evans nee McGonagall"
I don't know how I missed this when I read this last time :/
Just figured you should know. I'll keep reading now ^_^

As always, lovely writing. Of which, by the way, there should be more soon!
~Rowan Mikaio

Houseki posted a comment on Sunday 8th March 2009 2:47am

yay

Elfguard48 posted a comment on Thursday 29th January 2009 4:39am

I have read this story many times.Like all your stories I love it. I like the way Harry got justice on the Death eaters. Thank you Bob and Alyx for sharing your stories with the rest of us.

ShatteredRhapsody posted a comment on Sunday 25th January 2009 3:39pm

Oh, this is genius. I loved the pranks on the Order and Dumbledore. ^_^

Lathena posted a comment on Friday 23rd January 2009 3:06am

Good fic if a little to sweet for my tastes.

princess ducky posted a comment on Monday 27th October 2008 4:12pm

This story was not as I expected. It was absolutly brilliant and the plot was something unexpected.

Keep Writing

Princess Ducky

Gaurav posted a comment on Sunday 26th October 2008 1:44am

beautiful mate
just perfect, it was a really good story and i sure as hell wish u had detailed it more (more juicy more episodes and pranks and more details) and made it longer , but anyways ur the author and u know best

all the best, may u never face writer's block
and may we keep reading ur works

regards
gaurav shah

Simply-Hugs posted a comment on Thursday 25th September 2008 11:49am

*gives you both hugs and triple-choc cookies*

awww, that was vaguely romantic...the story that is =P

you are both true visionaries...or somesuch =P

sayena posted a comment on Friday 29th August 2008 5:37pm

Another masterpiece, keep listening to the llama.

Sarah9 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 6:23pm

heh! I love it. Just have to mention though, when I did my first aid course the teacher said that if you don't break someone's ribs when you do CPR, then you're not doing it right. Still, this is a story so you get creative license. :) Good job.

SpringCherryBlossom posted a comment on Thursday 24th July 2008 8:32am

I like it but I don't really agree with you on letting Goblins and elfs in the school that IS suppose to be for witchs and wizards. Werewolfs, vampires, veela or any other magical creature that has witch or wizard blood in them. Though that is my opinion because Goblin and elf magic is different the wizard.

pav posted a comment on Monday 21st July 2008 10:02pm

A MASTERPIECE

Darksnider05 posted a comment on Wednesday 25th June 2008 6:26pm

Can't really review this so I'll just say it the best way I can


OWNED!!!!

cliviussum posted a comment on Monday 16th June 2008 8:56pm

Another wonderful story that I thoroughly enjoyed; truly entertaining, interesting and without malice [(apart from Snape of course, Dumbledore is just duplicitous:-)].

Long may you continue

Tibi grates ago fabellae mirae.
Ave atque vale. Cs

Odelia Riddle posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 6:00pm

That is such a sweet story.

potterfrkintx posted a comment on Thursday 5th June 2008 10:33am

YAY!!! A more romantic, fun filled, adventurous fic I have never read!! :)) This was GREAT! Hope to read more from you in the future. :D

Jamr posted a comment on Friday 16th May 2008 6:32pm

bravo

MARIDEE posted a comment on Tuesday 13th May 2008 1:25am

I loved this story! It was great, the way you took everyone down was just brilliant. This is going down as one of my favorite stories.

metrobluejay posted a comment on Saturday 10th May 2008 11:03pm

I really enjoyed this fic.

Truely my only complaint was the fact that Remus and Tonks were complete dicwads. But I understand why you did it. You had to have Harry feel he was completely alone on his little journey, and if anyone in the order was for him he wouldn't have felt that.

Keep on writing.

JessicaBlack02 posted a comment on Thursday 10th April 2008 12:14am

very good story