By Bobmin
Reviews
reimanr06 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 9:02am
ah, once again, the tired old use of Dumbledore as an egomaniacal control freak, as well as some of the less common wooly suppositions. Other than that, a lot of this was pretty good and pretty original, so i give a 3.5 out of 5 stars
ace posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 8:59am
what a way to end a very bad day. with a good story. i liked it. the pranks were uniqe and delightful. another hit from the delightful duo.
texasranger_10 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 8:27am
oh i love what you did at the end. goblins and house elves as students. masterfully done. and it wouldn't surprise me if that was the case in jk's universe that most of the more wealthy families had loans trying to fund the war for snake face.again masterfully done.
John Fitzgerald posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 8:24am
this is a great story. Thanks.
Mark Blaine posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 8:23am
I liked it
bigd55104 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 8:14am
Hi Bob and Alex!
loved potters revenge. had your distinct fingerprints all over it( we get it, YOU HATE RON)lol;) but really it was good and a fun diversion for an afternoon. i really liked
BFI and the goblins, very Slytherin of you.
well, gotta go, the dogs attacking the neighbors again.why can't he just poop in their yard like i ask? oh well,see ya.
bigd55104
p.s. would it be ungracious to ask when the next installment of sunrise over Britain is coming out?
bigd55104
Vincent posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 7:55am
Nice story, as usual
erc127 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 7:01am
I really liked this story.
James Barber posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 6:54am
WoW another outstanding story from the duo of bob and alex (wrong spelling I know, I'm lazy tonight) but hey it had everything, power, wandless magic, my two favorite elves, hedwig as a white phoenix, always a plus and my fav ship of all time harry/mione! and now nobby got into slytherin, ole draco must be rolling in his grave not to meniton ole snakeface
The Resident posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 6:49am
Even with Dumbledork getting the axe in HBP, I still see him as a manipulative old bastard and I just love Powerful!Harry and Dumbledork and Snape bashing. I also, regardless of JKR & HBP, like HPHrG pairing. (I also like to see unconventional pairings as well for a change of pace.) Anyway what all this is leading to is that I was thoroughly entranced by your story and enjoyed it immensely. (There were a couple of editing errors (quite unusual for you)). Take good care of yourselves and keep up the great work.
jdcox61 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 6:38am
A most excellent story, I liked the premise, that Harry was finally pissed and gave it to everyone who sucked ass. Except that this story wasn't as dark as some other stories are. It wasn't overly angsty and had a nice fluffy romance.
I love you guys' stories, they're always fun to read and well written. Keep it up!
A great story with a little bit of everything for the discerning reader.
Rob Clark posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 6:28am
Great story, I really enjoy the 'Harry vs manipulative Dumbly' stories, and this was a fun one.
Rob
gaul2000 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 5:57am
great story, enjoyed it, byes
xohorsegal752ox posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 5:10am
Very Cute!!!!
Chris Williams posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 3:57am
Nice enough, but it seemed a bit "write-by-number" to me. You seemed to hit most of the cliches, but an entertaining read anyway. I still don't really see the point.
This is just my opinion, sorry if it offends anyone to the point of mayhem.
Christopher Patton posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 3:51am
Nice story, I only wish that JKR could come up with something that will make me feel as good inside when she's finished with book 7 as this story has.
Thanks for another great story.
Michael Foerster posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 3:39am
In short: Worth every word. Esp. the explanation about the Dursley's and the behavior charms. Good idea. Thanks.
Melferd posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 2:36am
Yeaaa!!!!
Dear god, I sound like Kermit.
This is *awesome* thank you for writing this!!
Does this mean there's hope for more fic after the sunverse??
*bounces on toes like a wistful fangirl**
Thanks for this...and points to Bob, no testicles or sape-bits were harmed in the making of this story..a new personal worst, no best..
Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 2:36am
An interesting independent!Harry story with the quality of plotting, characterisation and presentation that I have come to expect from Bob and Alyx.
I loved Harry's comment about "neutering" Dumbledore's "pet dog" and his Darth Vader impression. Wasted on wizards, of course, who never saw Star Wars .
The whole story was compelling and kept you reading. Although it used many of the independent!Harry clichés, it did so in a way that was interesting and more than acceptable. Harry as a grey/dark force of justice is a concept that I've seen used many times and it was used well here. I particularly liked the degree that Harry used his Slytherin side to deal with his enemies rather than take them down by brute force.
I have only one question: What happened to Ron? Did he get his head out of his butt or did he end up bitter and alone?
BenRG's Rating: 8/10
john2 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 9:18am