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Sunrise Over Britain
Chapter 29 - The coming dawn

By Bobmin

Reviews

Tracey posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2007 4:56am for Chapter 29 - The coming dawn

"You may not believe in him, but I think he believes in you,"

Seen the Count of Monte Cristo lately, then? :D Paraphrased, but almost word-for-word from Abe Friara tells Edmund Dantes. And, again, later what Jakapo tells Edmond.

Good chapter. Shame to see it's coming to an end though. Will you be giving an epilogue, showing a decade or two down the line for hwo the "new" wizard world exists? ((As nice as these war-fics are, we all know Harry will win, as the traditional hero!))

rippergirl posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2007 4:45am for Chapter 29 - The coming dawn

Just finished and am glad to see that I am the first or one of the first to review. Glad to see that the poltergiests are still going strong. Love the Flaming Flatulence potion. ""Is there three?" "I have three!"." What a way to go.And the goblins are going to help in the war.That should help a lot. Also loved the name of the camp for the soldiers. Camp Outhouse. Can just imagine all these small buildings with the half moon all together in a field. It's a good thing that it isn't the olden days when everyone used one or there would be some awfully confused people. Good to see that Arthur and Melinda are getting married. Can't wait til the next chapter. I imagine that there aren't that much more if the are getting so close to the big attack on moldyshorts. Write fast and if you do I will send you some of those low carb low everything chocolate cookies. A whole bushel full. Oh and if you don't I might just have to resort to using the voodoo dolls again.