Roguedestiny posted a comment on Wednesday 14th October 2009 10:23pm

Chapter 22 beginning, paragraph 4:

While it was all excellent news for Mr. Blair, it left him with several undeniable facts. The first was that the fact of his country rested in the hands of a group of...

Just noticed that...

Wonderful story!

jariuth posted a comment on Tuesday 13th October 2009 1:00am

The first plain is the plain of spirits, that's where you go after you die to be jugged.

Who am I to comment about being jugged. Just don't jug these authors too harshly.



not only that, but isn't it "plane" of spirits?
I personally don't think a plane of spirits would be very plain, do you?


Love the works you two have put together for us fans!

J

Sov posted a comment on Wednesday 7th October 2009 6:45pm

I must say I enjoyed this chapter immensely, but I have to ask. Do one of you have a serious leg injury? You seem to quite enjoy dishing them out to main characters.

Alice Zecco posted a comment on Tuesday 6th October 2009 2:36am

All good things must in. These have to be the best stories I've ever read. You are both talented and takes something to bring me to tears and you did in this chapters an others. Congrats in you published works!!! Now the rest of the world know about you!!

Alice Zecco posted a comment on Monday 5th October 2009 10:36am

Loved this chapter. It was very very fitting that Pet AKA Cho got to kill Snape and destroy everything he had worked on!!! Poor Moldy Voldy!!! He'll have to have someone start from scratch!!!

lantana posted a comment on Sunday 4th October 2009 7:36am

Lovely story (as was its prequel, of course). One little question though: what is a "dinning" room, and what's happening there to make it so noisy? ;)

Alice Zecco posted a comment on Sunday 4th October 2009 2:46am

I wish someone would kill Amhar! I just hate that guy! Great story.

Alice Zecco posted a comment on Saturday 3rd October 2009 10:27am

So Dumbly has gone around the bend, isn't that just too bad??? NOT!!! So enjoyed your last story and mow this one!!

Alice Zecco posted a comment on Saturday 26th September 2009 10:56am

Wonderful chapter! Loved the disclaimer! I was hoping you would be twisted enough to use Haus and Snape together!!!

Alexis Rinaldi posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd September 2009 5:16am

The day I found your website is a bright day in my world. I have enjoyed reading your work and look forward to wherever your writings will lead us to next. Bless you and thank you for all of the time and energy and heart that went into writing these two stories.

Tammy Driver posted a comment on Monday 21st September 2009 8:55pm

Another little gem for your "Updateless List".

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1984912/1/Stone_Angels

Something happens during the summer after sixth year leaving Hermione a shadow of her former self. Can she move on with a little help or will the halls of Hogwarts be haunted forever by stone angels. HGSS, HPDM, RWLL, and GWNL.
Harry Potter - Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 17 - Words: 102,384 - Reviews: 437 - Updated: 12-4-07 - Published: 7-28-04 - - Hermione G./Severus S

mage_slayer posted a comment on Monday 21st September 2009 10:03am

Thank you, words can not describe this tale, i've read everything you posted except for the the crossover fic and it is all professional quality.

Once again,
Thank you, 4 days without sleep and so worth it.

sarahgirl12384 posted a comment on Friday 18th September 2009 1:28pm

I absolutely love this story. I think I have read it completely through 5-6 times. It is great!!! By the Way, I copied both Sunset and sunrise and they are 799 and 1,505 words respectively.

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Sunday 13th September 2009 8:58am

Do you have Azkaban off the coast of Wales as a deliberately anti-canon aspect of this story or did you forget it is in the North Sea?

Coty Jorden Scott posted a comment on Tuesday 1st September 2009 1:14pm

I feel like I should review as I've read most of your stories and never reviewed. Yes I know unusually cruel of me but that isn't the point. You seem to have a penchant for taking legs as ways of disabling your characters. I feel their pain I strained my IT Band a while back and it's about a 10% disability and it does hamper me but nothing like Harry's but Superman has Kryptonite Harry has a bum leg from a spider. The story flowed beautifully and really introduced characters I could connect with and see more personally than JKR ever did I feel the last two books were rushed and terribly written so I substitute fanfiction for those atrocity's that JKR calls novels. I really did enjoy reading and will continute with The Wizard's Fall story I believe it's called. I do enjoy your writing and I'm sure I'll enjoy your other works. Honestly though come up with some better snarky remarks some of Harry's shirts were horrid. I really do believe you did a good job in writing a super power Harry without falling into every cliche DESPITE the reviewers trying to make you and I'm glad as it would've cheapened the story. I bid you good morrow sir and hope to continue to read your excellent writings for as long as you will write.

PEBKAC1981 posted a comment on Tuesday 1st September 2009 10:29am

I didn't actually print it, but i converted this together with Sunset, and all total they come to 2,990 pages. Now to start reading . . .

cap red posted a comment on Saturday 29th August 2009 1:02am

Well this is an amazing story and I am glad I was recommended it. I'm just sorry it took me so long to review, but I got so into it. I especially like the fact that you have crippled Harry. It quite nicely offsets his huge powers. The conflict in prophecy was also a very nice touch.

Now for the constructive criticism. I love how you have portrayed Hermione, and I think you have got her personality spot on. My only problem is that there are times when Hermione does something stupid or lashes out in some way and Harry just rolls with it. There are times when I think Harry needs to push back a little, otherwise their relationship could have some pretty nasty bumps in the long run. Hermione does tend to dominate him a little in some things. Although I admit that the bonds help and Hermione is beginning to overcome this fault of hers.

Second criticism. OK... I am not going to Britpick everything. Quite frankly I am sure if I was to write something based in America, I would get an awful lot wrong or messed up. There is one thing though that is a personal pet peeve of mine, which I can't help but point out. It really is minor but I can't help it.
The monarch actually still has an awful lot of authority. They can't really exercise that authority in the current climate, but it is still there. Most of the Prime Minister's powers are devolved from the monarch. Laws still have to have the monarchs approval to be passed, and probably most significantly, the monarch invites the government to form after the general election.
Like I said they can't really use their power, but it is still there. In the context of your story, when Britain has been overthrown, the government is in exile and the Queen sacrificed herself, I imagine that the power and popularity of the monarchy would be significantly higher then what it is now.

In any event, it really is a minor fault on what is an incredible story. There have been times when I have been absolutely horrified; the nuclear bomb going off was one of those times, and the complete destruction of a persons soul the other. Personally in some ways I found the second more terrifying, because there is something about just ceasing to exist that I can't reconcile.

I'm off to read the rest of the story now.

Cheers, for the excellent read!

Cap ;)

Radical7 posted a comment on Wednesday 26th August 2009 6:12pm

I just finished the sunset series and I'm amazed by the level of detail that you managed to put in. The war and fight scenes were very planned out. Unfortunately, there are quite a few grammatical errors which can be cleaned out. But on the whole an excellent read.

Antoniusan posted a comment on Monday 24th August 2009 7:26pm

I've been reading this over and over since it first started here, and I can honestly not remember any other HP fanfic I've read more than this one.

You are the elite and I bow to thee.

Keep Up the Good Work and know that Antoniusan hails thee as his superiors.
(Hint: just a bit misty-eyed in the brain at the end of such an awesome story, hence the weird speech)

NikL posted a comment on Sunday 23rd August 2009 4:11am

After reading your other, very long, story that began with Dumbledore's Army i couldn't wait to read more. Then you moved over here. Never commented before, just wanted to say you two are brilliant, and your stories very engaging. whilst i dislike Author Notes in general, i find myself unable to scroll past yours. Pet Peeves always make me smile. Hope you keep writing more wonderful stories, and that the rest of this holds up against such a clever first half. This chapter just makes me want to read more, an thankfully there is alot more to read. I'm very grateful that you two are the sort of Authors who post long chapters, as it feels more like an actual book. keep up the great work.