WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Thursday 18th August 2011 7:29pm

It seems that Luna may have forgotten to let the information about the bonding that Harry and Hermione are capable of to become known to Hermione, or at least hinted at. Will that ever happen..the bonding? If anyone is stupid enough to attack Susan and Terry, I hope they enjoy death...and that Frog that sold the newlyweds out as well.

ninjastars posted a comment on Monday 4th July 2011 11:37am

WOW!!! Once again I am amazed by your writing abilities (both of you since, I'm guessing, you write every chapter together..?). I am so happy that I found Dumbledore's Army all those weeks ago. I am also glad to see a very well written Harry/Hermione story. The way the characters are portrayed shows much more of their true character then J.K shows in her books. And while you did veer extremely hard away from the actual HP books, I think your portrayal of the characters is much more realistic. I loved that you turned Dan and Emma magical. I also loved how you showed the couples being intimate. Too many stories are filled with excessive smut that takes over the actual plot of the story. The way you faded out once the reader had the general idea was brilliant. It was neither 'in your face' obvious nor was it too vague satisfying (hopefully) all readers.
In short both Sunset and Sunrise were wonderfully well written stories. I am so glad that I had the chance to read them. You both are amazing authors.

~NS

ray74656 posted a comment on Friday 6th May 2011 8:15pm

Great story. I was very impressed with the way you showed the love between Harry and Hermione. Says a lot about the authors.

willboon posted a comment on Monday 21st March 2011 9:48pm

i loved this story

hpfirecracker posted a comment on Thursday 3rd March 2011 8:31am

I don't know which I'm enjoying more. Your wonderful story or your disclaimers. Thank you for sharing your wonderful stories.

Starman800 posted a comment on Tuesday 8th February 2011 7:23am

Wow. Is all i can really say about this story, well both of them really. Wow. This story was great 1 of the best i have ever read, it took me like a week or so to read them but what a read. I loved it.

griffonsperch posted a comment on Tuesday 8th February 2011 3:26am

I love your story! Here are 2 minor mistakes that I found while reading chapter 27.

"He ought to, love. He does have seven wives and twelve concubines," he replied smugly. Then he snickered as she watched the grin slip from his wife's face.
I think this should be "he snickered as he watched"

"You were sent on a diplomatic mission to France. Would you explain to this court the purpose of that mission as it was described it to you?"
And I think this should be "Would you explain to this court the purpose of that mission as it was described to you"

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Sunday 16th January 2011 3:35pm

Wow. You two wrote a masterpiece. I laughed, a lot, teared up a little, but most of all, this series made me think. My way of judging whether a story is good is how much it stays in yours thoughts after you finish it, and I can honestly say this one will be in my thoughts for a very long time. In one of my first reviews of Sunset, I said this might be one of my top 5 favorite fics. It's not. It IS my favorite. Well done.

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Sunday 16th January 2011 1:55pm

Very nice chapter, as always. :) I'm hoping that my fic, when it's done and posted, will be half as good as yours. If it is, I'll be satisfied. I'm looking forward to reading DA and the SC.

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Saturday 15th January 2011 7:36pm

I never would have thought of using Voldy's spell for Ginny. Smart!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Saturday 15th January 2011 6:33pm

Now THAT'S karma! Personally I'm glad Harry has a bad leg. Heroes without a weakness aren't interesting or realistic. I'm not sure what I'm going to do to the heroes in my story yet, but they are nowhere near perfect and that makes it easier to write about them; they're more real. Anyway, great job on the final battle! I enjoyed reading it.

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Friday 14th January 2011 7:07am

That's a good strategy for retaking Hogwarts. Can't wait to see how it plays out!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Wednesday 12th January 2011 3:43am

Yay! Dilly got off! Phew now I don't have to send you any hate mail! ;) Amelia seems harsher in the last few chapters. Maybe the war is getting to her. Or she needs to get laid XD

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Tuesday 11th January 2011 10:27pm

My interpretation of Hermiones prophecy is before Aries gives way to Taurus one or more of the brotherhood will die in battle. There will either be another weasley fight, Malfoy fight, or Harry vs. Voldemort. The Hogwarts ghosts will be exorcised and the muggle and magical worlds will merge before Aries gives way to Taurus or before mid-April. I'll have to keep reading to see if I'm right. :)

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Tuesday 11th January 2011 9:57pm

Aw I was hoping to see Luna outwit the French Minister... Oh well.

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Tuesday 11th January 2011 9:02pm

It's too bad Hagrid wasn't invited to the Council. He probably would've liked to see Madame Maxine.;)

tcl7189 posted a comment on Tuesday 11th January 2011 6:45pm

OMG....All I can say is "What a GREAT Run!!!" I just finished reading SoB and SoB (lol) over the last week almost to the point of not sleeping...Thanks both of you for all of your hard work and sleepless nights...and now on to the next!!!!!! Tcl7189

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Tuesday 11th January 2011 2:29pm

I always thought the French were a few pawns short of a full chess set. How stupid do you need to be to go up against the rest of the world? Pretty damn stupid. Good riddance to Amhar, although a bit of torture would've been nice. Glad to see him go though!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Tuesday 11th January 2011 1:12am

Minerva lives and Peeves multiplied? And here I thought you were a pair of bloodthirsty writers who like killing off characters!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Tuesday 11th January 2011 12:24am

I thought the killer only killed muggleborns? Is McGonagall a muggleborn in this fic?