aperkins posted a comment on Tuesday 27th September 2005 6:39am for A False Sense of Security

i love your story guys, keep it up!

Minerva McGonagall posted a comment on Tuesday 27th September 2005 4:06am for A False Sense of Security

Hi!

I love your story and I can't wait for the next chapter. How long do you need for a new chapter? I'm wondering to know, so I can check regulary.

Thanks!

Minerva McGonagall

Professor Maddy posted a comment on Tuesday 27th September 2005 2:28am for A False Sense of Security

Hey - I'm a complete newbie to your stories, and this is the first I've tried, but seeing as I've reached your so-far stopping point I'd like to say that I love what you've done with pre-HBP canon! HBP seemed a bit... sickly sweet for my liking, especially with the Harry/Dumbledore relationship, but yours? I can definitely say it's one of the best stories I've read, no matter what I may think of various developments (whilst I never thought much of Dumbledore, I would never have had him go to such extremes in my imagination). You've made it all flow well from OotP, and I'm really enjoying the ride!

Thanks for introducing me to another, far less cliched, side of super!Harry - much appreciated. I hope to see some more updates soon - I'll keep my eyes open (and meanwhile take a look at your other stories!).

Maddy. xxx

Michelle posted a comment on Tuesday 27th September 2005 12:22am for A False Sense of Security

This story is totally awesome! Its a one of a kind, totally uncliche. Most of the harry rebel stories out there have harry teamed with snape, lupin and ron against dumbledore. This is cool also because though harry is super-powered, there is a credible explanation for it, and the story portrays his emotions, instead of his godlike qualities. Keep up the good work!! =)

beauty0102 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th September 2005 12:05am for A False Sense of Security

yeah great chapter can't wait for more so please update soon

Tanydwr posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 11:22pm for A False Sense of Security

Great chapter!
God, the wizarding world is stupid, isn't it? Will I be right in guessing that there are going to be some people pulled from Hogwarts now there's a Death Eater in charge? Or will they all flock to Hogwarts?
Anyway, keep up the amazing work!
About those 600 000+ words of stories - can we see the other two *complete* ones up here? They're fabulous stories, and I want to reread them!
Lol, Tanydwr

Tim Green posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 10:49pm for A False Sense of Security

Amazing... Astounding...

I have just spent the past night reading this story and I love it. I am now upset that I have to wait for the next installment :)

Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

Tim

Jamie posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 9:51pm for A False Sense of Security

ER, and by "updates", I meant "reviews".... :-/ Sheesh, I really AM tired...

Jamie posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 9:43pm for A False Sense of Security

Sorry I didn't do my "regular" updates for chpts 16, 17, 18. Real Life has really kicked me in the rear these past few weeks. (Although if you were to ask me what I did, I'm gonna take a leaf from my Dad's book and say, "I don't know what I did, but I sure did a lot of it!" hahaha) This chapter was really good. Not as fast-paced (sometimes) or as angsty as other chapters, but that's good. ;) hahaha, thanks for not putting a cliffie in right now ;) lol... I thought Harry dealt really well with those other students; Hermione's right, it IS a worse punishment. Oh darn, DD is gone. I wish him and Snape luck on their wild-goose-potion chase... That bit with the Chunnel was sad, but obviously we have now seen some of what the military equipment was for. Yay for Harry saving the House Elves! And that was a good way you had Draco circumvent Hermione's SPEW campaign... I noticed that skanky Apothecary guy mentioned how newly-come in those Basilisk parts were; I wonder if Dung will mention it offhandedly to Snape...perhaps while DD is in the room?... And 10 bucks says that you want everyone to think that Kingsley is your spy... But since I can't think of any other character who is tall, black, and bald, who would be "good enough" to also be in the Order, that's who my money goes on, as well. ;) hahaha.

gah, I'm so tired. I've gotta go to bed. Thanks for another great chapter. Please have fun writing the next one!

my one critique: in the Quibbler title "Death Eaters Captured Hogwarts", you sorta forgot "in" ;) hahaha. Oh, so Hogwarts has already fallen, has it? :) sorry. I'm sure someone else has already pointed that out...

MarinePotterFan posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 8:20pm for A False Sense of Security

I just wanted to add to my prev. review, what is Bones and Tonks are going to have to quit the Ministry now. Just when I thought you have made Harry's life hard, you both throw in something even worse. You are both so evil. Just have Harry go kick there Ass and get it over with.

MarinePotterFan

Charmaine Ong posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 7:10pm for A False Sense of Security

Trident Fun!
Have you watched Yes Prime Minister?
They mention Trident and Polaris many a time. It's rather amusing.
Anyway, good chapter and I shall give you a hug.
+hugs both Bob and Alyx+

Iain Neilson posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 5:12pm for A False Sense of Security

And so the destruction of the muggle British way of life continues. Perhaps a quarantine will be put in place in the near future, after getting many of the foreign nationals out of the country.
How soon will someone turn up to arrest Harry, for deliverance to Voldemort? Next chapter, or the one after?
Nice work with the House elves. Maybe Harry himself might need to turn up in the kitchens to talk to them.

Here's a challenge for you: Is it possible for you to put the next chapter out on October 1? I think it would be a nice birthday present.

Keep up your great work.

FenrisWolf posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 3:09pm for A False Sense of Security

Very good chapter, but with all the action going on, I think my favorite part was Draco and Luna's discussion about the differences between having sex and making love. Two protoplasmic organisms undergoing mitosis can be said to be 'having sex', it takes the interplay of emotions between tow people who care for each other (regardless of gender) to change that into making love. I always try to differnetiate that whenever I have written a love scene betwen Harry and Hermione, trying to focus on the emotional, and yes, spiritual aspects over the mechanics. Well done!

Sam posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 2:50pm for A False Sense of Security

great chapter.

Kathleen posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 1:22pm for A False Sense of Security

Wow, a lot happened in this chapter! I'd worried that the prophecy said Harry had to flee because thins got REALLY bad everywhere, making all of England unsafe, and now I see I was right. Damn, if dementors are invading, they may need to rescue the families BEFORE April.
I like the idea of the staff too. Very nice chapter. Keep up the good work. I'm totally in awe of your writing abilities. Maybe it's easier if there are two people writing? :)

M. R. Moore posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 12:39pm for A False Sense of Security

that anonymous review is mine i forgot the name. So i apologize for this too, but you know the old saying 'give credit where credit is due'.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 11:33am for A False Sense of Security

Another great chapter in an excellent book. I have been enjoying this tremendously since reading a recommendation on jeconais's yahoo group. Since then (about a month) I have read all of yours - forwarded the word files of DA and SC to my brothers and sons - and have begun reading old crow and abraxan - I think that it is cool to reference real people in your fic - i thought that JKR had with fenriswolf until I was told that that was one of the norse baddies from mythology. If your marriage works as well as your writing does - you are very fortunate people.

minervakitty posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 10:26am for A False Sense of Security

Kingsley's the traitor? Why am I not surprise at that. I wonder how many more DE's going to be confessing. Does this mean that Snape and Dumbledore will be in Hogwarts, when it gets attacked? What will tip Kingsley's hand to the Brotherhood? Is Kingsley wearing the dark mark? How fast is things coming along? I do hope that everybody can escape. What will happen to the books?

MarinePotterFan posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 10:24am for A False Sense of Security

WOW! It is about time DD got what he has comming to him. I cant wait to see the Board of Gov meeting, when Harry tells them that DD has been taking his money and all of the other crap that DD has been doing to him all of these years. Oh! Luna!!! I need her to teach my wife that trick, talk about shooting star.

MarinePotterFan

AcceleratedGlass posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 10:21am for A False Sense of Security

good chapter, update soon