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MartinEB72 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd November 2016 12:59am for A House Divided

I really like this story, but you seem to portray Hermione as scizophrinic. She keeps getting on Harry's case about some stupid things. It is worst than canon Hermione getting upset about a book, but there she stayed upset here she keep getting upset at seeming random things then lets go until something else. Frankly I wouldn't date her because you can never know when she gets upset again, I would be walking around on eggshells with her. Then to do that to an abused boy it must be hell for him.

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Monday 25th June 2012 6:18pm for A House Divided

Most excellent! Did Snape and Bumbles really think no one would miss Harry and come looking for him?

amsev posted a comment on Friday 30th March 2012 11:11pm for A House Divided

Bwa-ha-ha-ha! Snape and Dumbles stuck to the ceiling. For a few days. Let's hear it for bodily functions! That'll learn 'em. (As much as I have a hard time separating the incomparable Alan Rickman from Snape, your Snape is a bona fide ASSHAT! And deserves everything he gets.)

ranman posted a comment on Friday 16th January 2009 9:49am for A House Divided

Well, there was a hurricane where I lived recently and I've been meaning to read this story for years, so I downloaded it all before the storm. I read it on my ipod, computer, and then when the batteries finally died I got out a magnifying glass and a candle, opened up my hard drive and started transcribing the story onto paper. I finished a chapter before the power came back on.

So, yes, aside from a few spelling errors and grammar oddities this story flat out rocks my socks. I'm wearing sandals so that is quite the accomplishment.

I blame you two for the following: broken hard-drive :P, high electricity bill, lack of sleep, failed tests.

That is all!

brock posted a comment on Thursday 11th December 2008 5:23pm for A House Divided

Have you ever thought that a person could slowly fly by levitating an object they hold, or are sitting on? Harry could fly by levitating his staff, and take weight off his leg.

however, since the story is written, that doesn't much matter now. plus, the leg is a major plot element.

I love your wonderful grammar and word choice. Excellent work.

RockBiter posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2008 10:14am for A House Divided

This is going very well . . . but you knew that, didn't you? I like your portrayal of Draco. Poor boy deserves a break.

I've seen several mentions of grammar and spelling amongst your reviews and comments, and, I have to say, I do appreciate your efforts on that front. Nothing is more annoying than reading something--or trying to read something--filled with more errors than my garden is with weeds. With spell and grammar checks built into every computer, there really is no excuse.

AntmanReed posted a comment on Monday 12th May 2008 12:50pm for A House Divided

Excessively long update periods.

Why pray tell does seem to take some authors MONTHS to write a 3K word chapter? I don’t get that at all.

I can beat you there. Fan fiction that was released after 4th book. Was going strong just like yours. VERY good plot. a H/Hr (All I read)
Middle of the 3rd arc the lad went 3 years with out update in middle of a VERY suspenseful moment and then updated a 1.5k chapter telling where she had hoped the story would go and that she was abandoning it.

ROBERT_1958 posted a comment on Friday 29th February 2008 8:55am for A House Divided

Why did Harry not get all his thangs befor he left Hogwarts?

Hayleyrules101 posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd January 2008 12:51am for A House Divided

You've written an exceptionally good novel, that being the only word to describe it and despite your amusing disclaimers, having read the last three books i think you are excellent authors, who deserve recommendation and publication. Well done!

Marvin posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 7:08pm for A House Divided

:)
Thanks!

hogwartsprincess posted a comment on Thursday 4th October 2007 3:19pm for A House Divided

Again, great chapter, but I am a little confused on something I just realized, how can Hermione be a Seeress, a trait her Grandmother had, if she is a muggleborn. Also when Remus says Harry has spent 43 or 45 million galleons, did that take most of his money, or is he still one of the richest wizards in the world and the money he has spemt barely scratches the surface of his wealth?

Utopia posted a comment on Friday 28th September 2007 7:42am for A House Divided

Lol I love you books, you two really take JKR's stuff and give it a fantastic new life. But sorry you are about to be blamed again I should be packing now not reading!

But really great work I look forward to reading the sequel.

Utopia

Lillith Desiree posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 11:05am for A House Divided

Regarding your pet peeves.... It is one of my own but I also get horrible writer's block or don't like how I'm writing something, or I get distracted by something else. I hate losing ideas so I sorta just go with what I think of at the moment. I have a very short attention span but I love writing. Mind you my chapters are longer than 3K, short chapters annoy the heck outta me

dolia posted a comment on Saturday 1st September 2007 1:44am for A House Divided

this is one of the best story i have ever read.i stayed up till 4 in the morning cause i didn't want to stop.great work.

katelyn posted a comment on Saturday 7th July 2007 9:21pm for A House Divided

Oh, i read them stories on fanfiction.net :]
i loved them, i could fond this story on fanfiction.net, why is that?

GryffindorDragon posted a comment on Thursday 31st May 2007 10:53pm for A House Divided

Lily's contraceptive charm was just too funny. And I love the Bowel-Loosening spell. You're doing a good job with comic relief.
That should have been a permanent sticking charm that only Harry can release. It would serve The Evil Professors to be stuck as the students return from holiday (might give a few Gryffindors, among others, pause).

ella1983 posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 10:02am for A House Divided

hey i've read (and loved) both Dumbledore’s Army and Spiritus Crystalus but i never realised that you two wrote them (how dumb do i feel? lol) i have too say i'm loving this story just as much as i loved those :-) btw just thought i'd let you know that even though some people complain about long A/N i actually love reading your's because while it is true that some peoples A/N are pointless and annoying your's are actualy really entertaining (as are your disclaimers) and they add more personal feel to the story.

james27 posted a comment on Thursday 1st March 2007 2:27am for A House Divided

I had no idea you guys wrote Dumbledore’s Army and Spiritus Crystalus! Those are are of my all time favorite fanfics!!

Selma Flamel posted a comment on Saturday 17th February 2007 10:51am for A House Divided

At last, an ISS with actual punishment. Excellent descriptions. I could completely picture the Great Hall.

Dragen posted a comment on Saturday 6th January 2007 12:22pm for A House Divided

What another great chapter;

I do like the start of this chapter when Peeves shout out “Oh, go bugger Dean Thomas, Weasel!” quiet funny if I say so myself. :D

I like how Harry reacted when he found the contraceptive charm on Hermione’s bed, and found out it was done by his mum. :D

Dumbledore is a fool to change Ron’s mood like that, in making him more in Defense could be a bad thing for the future.

:( The Gryffindor house as become a lot of wankers, to bet up one of their own.

Poor George, Fred and Bill, finding out that their family are no good, is not good. At least they don’t bream Harry and is willing to help him.

LoL… Harry really can be a Slytherin at times, no wonder the hat wanted him in that house.

What the hell is Harry planning?

I love the enchanted snowflake, nicely done.

Draco and Luna, who would have thought if that paring, I won’t have. Never under estimate Luna, as she’s more then she looks. :D

*sigh* Harry did warn Dumbledore, now he is seeing what Harry can do.