Shannon posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 11:51pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

I have enjoyed all of your stories and can't wait to read the next one. Shannon

katrina posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 11:49pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

I found your stories on ffnet just as you started writing Sunset, so I had the pleasure of reading your first two stories complete and they were a fabulous. What can I say about Sunset first of all, disappointment cos I had to wait for updates, bitten nails waiting for those updates but it was well worth the wait. It’s great, its fantastic doesn’t do it justice. Just like your other stories it’s so well written and when you reach the end of the chapter you want to beg for more (I always checked in case 2 chapters were loaded) and being so disappointed when there’s no weekly update. I should have registered earlier and left a review. You have written such wonderful stories and they should be recognised.

Also I just loved your pet peeves how many times have I started reading a story and then noticed it was last updated 2 years ago eekkkkkkk.

Looking forward to reading Sunrise (where’s chapter 1), and I promise I will review. If you can write goodness knows how many word’s in a chapter then I should be able to thank you for your efforts.

nonjon posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 11:45pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

I do like it, so I'm leaving a review.

My questions or comments will more than likely be answered in the next story, so I have little to say other than I greatly enjoyed this. This storyline arc feels far from over, so it's lacking the conclusiveness of the end of a story, but I'm sure the sequel will be coming soon, so I'll just eagerly await more.

Thanks for writing and sharing this with us.

kcgx23 posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 11:06pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

I loved this story and I can't wait to read the next one in the series and see what happens, please write the next one soon.

Jennifer2 posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 11:05pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Cannot wait for the "Sunrise." By the way, I have always wanted a Harry/Hermione pairing. Thank you so much.

Joe Ritter posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 11:01pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

A very moving story from the beginning through to the end.

I enjoyed Harry arming Peeves. I particularly like the idea of the Grangers becoming magical and causing all the havoc. It was a nice fun piece in the middle of a rather heavy story.

But as much as I enjoyed it, when I read your final author notes, I thought, "Your idea of dark is pretty weak." Don't get me wrong you have some pretty serious events occurring. But the way you painted some of the more serious parts is very clinical. Also, how often does Harry really need to be passing out in one story?

Oh well, I've said before, ignore us whiners and keep writing your vision.

Snapesmistress005 posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 10:56pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

awesome awesome awesome ending!!! now i know you need a break, but don't keep us waiting too long for the start of the new story. i think you did an excellent job of conveying the intensity and seriousness of this story, yet you were able to give us some light hearted moments. so as i laughed and cried my way through this story, i thank you for giving me something that was a great read. the stories like this are so rare nowadays, that it is truly a pleasure to read and enjoy something of this upstanding calibur. so thank you bob and alyx and get some rest, the next story shall be a challange which i know you can face. oh yeah, btw, no little pink alan rickman's shall be sent your way. they are currently plaguing another author! much love!

Bringhimup posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 10:52pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

That was a wonderfull story. Really unique, with the in my opinion perfect shipping and I'm really looking forward to your sequel. Can't say much more, but I don't have to say more. This story is one of the best I have ever read; fanfiction or not! Great!

Greetings
Maik

Carolyn1 posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 10:44pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Hi, I liked, I liked. I really look forword to the sequel. Thanx for all the hard work.

Dave Harris posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 10:29pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Marvellous. I look forward to the sequel.

So what happenens to Dolohov and the other DEs now? If they go back to Britain I assume they are stuck there. If they stay in Ireland I bet they'll be a pain in Harry's arse (but at least they can't get any additional support from V.

patrik svensson posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 10:00pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

grejt story,
keep upp the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

Jamie46 posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 8:43pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

oh, nevermind. I just saw on Jeconais' page how they added the "Mature" bit, and you had to login for it. :) lol, not your doing. ;) ok then. ;) hahaha

btw, really loved how Harry got the Hogwarts ghosts in on things. :) I'm curious what the Baron meant by "gather the others", though, if Myrtle, Binns, Peeves, and the 4 House ghosts were already down there in the Chamber... interesting....

Jamie46 posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 8:40pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

wow. just...wow :) Perhaps not the best (as in "most exciting, more fast-paced, most heart-racing) chapter, but certainly a damn good one. :) Awesome. :) I like what Harry did to the Grangers ;) hahaha.... Looking forward to the next SOB, but also to the little intermediary story as well :) ...

Just curious: how come I had to become a member in order to read this chapter? What did you do when this was finished? (I couldn't read any of the other chapters, either...)

Kingpin posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 8:20pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

that was a good ending to the story. The Epilogue was good. I could actually visualize it and that was some good imagery. I could see it in my minds eye. I do have one what did that quote that Harry told Nearly-Headless Nick mean? The one that McGonagall asked him to say?

japanese_jew posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 7:46pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

hmm.... I started reading this when it was on fanfiction.net, so I'm not sure if I missed anything... (if you removed it from ff, then I did.) Oh well, either way it'll be fun re-reading it. Solid writing.

fanofdrows posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 7:20pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

It certainly has! Sunset Over Britain is a very good story written by two excellent writers. I just wish more people were able to write as good as you do.

Harry may be very powerful but that seldom shines through and he doesn't know everything. It's very hard to write a SuperPower!Harry story without Harry becoming pathetically powerful (I assume as I have yet to read another one.) or botching the story in some other way but you have succeded masterfully and recives a standing ovation from me.

*reviewer gets up, does a one-man wave while cheering and finally sometime after the end of the third millenia stats clapping and then sits down*

Paul Ellison posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 7:19pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Superb final chapter, just gonna have to sit here twiddling thumbs til the sequel is out! Yawn, boredom comes fast so please hurry!

Yours a loyal British reader, hoping for relief from the oppression you've submitted us to! ;-)

Paul

jdekke posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 6:46pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

I love this story.

And i can't wait for the sequel.

solar1 posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 6:33pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

thank you for this amazing fanfiction! i've spent a great time every week reding your story! i'm quite sure that the sequel will be as good as this one!

Chomas posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 6:16pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Nice, Nice. I liked it.
It's one of my favourits stories.

I'm looking forward to Sunrise over Britain and don't hurry. For quality I can wait!!!!:)

Cheers Choma