Selma Flamel posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 9:30am for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Initiated with chocolate...that's my kind of initiation...though....hmmm

What does ‘the Lion’s Pride is roaring’ mean?

Excellent story.

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Friday 23rd February 2007 3:30pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Wow - Just finished the story and I can't wait to begin part 2. It's a good thing I can get an internet connection from my ambulance or I would be very upset.

Rob

Dragen posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 10:06am for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Oh I love your Standard Disclaimer, they are truly funny.

I have to say a great end to a great story, I love that Peeves is going to prank Voldemort and his Death Eaters. And that Bloody Baron and the rest of the ghosts are going to help Harry.

So because of the old witch-hunts, the Grangers block their magic, which meant that Hermione’s who have their magic block too, but somehow it didn’t work for Hermione, but his means that Hermione is a half or pure blood. Nice.

I can't wait to read the sequle to this story...

marcelhm posted a comment on Wednesday 24th January 2007 3:48am for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

well I just finished it in a 3day read (been ill so had enough time) and I must say. I officialy LOVE this fic. my compliments. the only note of critique I have is the fact that the entire start of the fic is about the criminal investigation and how harry can't do this or that because of it and then in the end it's all just forgotten because of the profecy. oh and loved this luna!

Sarah B. posted a comment on Monday 22nd January 2007 10:18am for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Well, I have to say that this is one of the best novel-length HP AUs I've read since I got the chance to read some of LightningOnTheWave's massive AU HP series! I look forward to being able to read the sequel, once it's complete! I will definitely be coming back to this site off and on to check on the sequel, so I'll be able to start reading it when be complete. I hope you continue to write more in this fandom. By any chance, do you write in any others? (I ask because of references to other fandoms in the hilarious "Standard Disclaimer" headers.)

Kleo posted a comment on Friday 19th January 2007 1:35am for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

I really really liked this story! I am going to start reading the sequal right now!

I especially liked the opening scene and the lovely creative ways Ron and Snape got killed. Keep it up!

Mr.Zemme posted a comment on Wednesday 17th January 2007 7:16am for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

I have to admit, this is much better than most 'real' books I have read. Do either of your write to get published, I think you would do well.

Mr. Zardehar Zemme

nycginny posted a comment on Sunday 14th January 2007 9:16am for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Absolutely loved it! Just started reading it a week ago and just finished it. Loved the A/N's section...bloody marvelous!
Keep on the good work!
Now to the sequel....

NYCginny

mordanne posted a comment on Tuesday 19th December 2006 10:46pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

By far, this is the best. Thank you.

Tracy0652 posted a comment on Sunday 17th December 2006 12:35pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

This was a great story. Forget the critics - you changed some areas of the canon into truly unbelievable scenarios, and then proceeded to write so well that they became believable. I think my favorite part of the entire story is Sirius' grim tattoo. Thank you both for a wonderful, enchanting (although dark) fiction that was enjoyable from first word to last!
Tracy

cream435 posted a comment on Sunday 17th December 2006 8:37am for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

LOVE IT! again, i'm not a constructive reviewer, but oh well... great story, plot details, EVERYTHING! i love your stories, they're just so believable!! ♥
**cream**

mekareami posted a comment on Sunday 17th December 2006 4:15am for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

I loved this story and can't wait to start the sequel. Thank you guys very much for writing. Most of your pet peeves were things I myself get miffed at. It was nice to see I am not alone ;)

KenF posted a comment on Saturday 16th December 2006 1:04am for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

It took 3 days, but I've finally managed to go through this. Good story, and rather unique, which is hard to come by in fanfics.

I enjoyed the disclaimers, and the "I'm thinking of breaking up with Hermione" was just delicious.

Oh, and Harry's animagus form should be an amoeba. :)

Thanks for the excellent stuff, now I've got to dive into the sequel.

Eagle-Eyes posted a comment on Monday 27th November 2006 1:38pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Bob and Alyx --

You are truly talented authors. You compliment each other through your writing. It is well thought out, well planned, and extremely well written. If all fanfic authors were as good as you, I'd never leave my computer. And then, my husband, my boss and even my grandson would be very mad at me.

I look forward to reading the sequel to this story and thank my son for showing me where you moved to after ff.net.

Linda

Thorfinna posted a comment on Sunday 26th November 2006 4:29pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Brilliant.

Humorous disclaimers, fantastic storyline and oh so familiar pet peeves!

Glad I followed the bread crumbs.

T

HarbringerLady posted a comment on Saturday 25th November 2006 5:15pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Can say that it's cool story!

Darke Gray posted a comment on Thursday 16th November 2006 1:28am for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

Hey, just thought I would let you both know that this has to be one of my favorites if not my favorite HP fanfic. This is the third time I've read it and I still love it. Also I have been reading the sequal and love it as well. Some of the plot ideas have been great and there seems to be just enough humor in it. Great job and I look forword to you completing the sequal.


DG

chris13 posted a comment on Sunday 12th November 2006 7:43am for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

this is the first time that i have finnished sun set, i have thurally enjoyd it and cant wait to start sun rise. i have sat hear 4 3 days, i need to trim my beard and take a pee b4 i start on ur next book. you should offer free refreshments with your storys! :)

Gianda posted a comment on Tuesday 24th October 2006 12:41am for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

I cannot help it but after reading this story for the 5th time I still think it is fantastic.
well I am now going on reading sunrise as i love that one as well and start from the beginning again

Sera

Superdd posted a comment on Monday 23rd October 2006 6:23pm for British Lockup and Brotherhood Reborn

That is, undoubtedly the most intelligent, witty and well written AU story I have ever read - Bob/Alyx, words cannot express just how much I have enjoyed Sunset - I have been glued to my PC to finish it! Thank you so much for finishing it - I can't wait to get my teeth into Sunrise!

Cheers and keep up the marvelous work,
Superdd (Steve)