Sunset Over Britain
Padfoot, Betrayals and Curses
By Bobmin
Reviews
JJ posted a comment on Wednesday 26th October 2005 6:26am for Padfoot, Betrayals and Curses
Avada Kedavra? Fair enough, I said it. I was hoping for more Ron, but if he dies, he dies. LOL for Ollivander's wand and Weasley's Wizard Wars; I hope the Victory can be fixed up. ISTR an irritated Admiral who disapproved of one of his senior subordinates flying his flag on something that couldn't move. He called her a superannuated bath toy. Nice to know he was right...
KUTGW and can we have the Final Attack soon? That was a horrible place to leave us and Doom has been Impending for about five chapters now. No complaints from me, mind you.
David Thacker posted a comment on Wednesday 26th October 2005 6:16am for Padfoot, Betrayals and Curses
That was great and I all ways thought that Ollivander used wandless magic.Ron's death was a shock thoought he die fighting Harry or something like that.And what Harry did to Moony was great.Reply where ever it would be easier for you if you need to repy fast use the reply in the reviews then.
Jim posted a comment on Wednesday 26th October 2005 6:12am for Padfoot, Betrayals and Curses
notice that ron's death hasn't been confirmed! just suspected ....
Will he be making a return?
excellent chapter
Zero Blitz posted a comment on Wednesday 26th October 2005 6:10am for Padfoot, Betrayals and Curses
Well there's three things that I can think of straight off of my head after reading this chapter: either Harry goes into a kind of semi-dead state and ends up going back to the living, as soon as he saw/heard Dean fire he made an illusion of himself that gets hit(and possibly McGonagall too)/as soon as he notices anythings wrong he gets all of the students and staff out of the way and the whole fight was an illusion or when the curse hits him he either gets knocked unconscious or fakes it. I suppose he could really be dead and Fate decides to kill everyone or something because the prophecy didn't come true... but that's not very likely. Romany seems like an alright character, it will be kind of sad if she actually died. I wonder if any of my guesses are correct? Probably not but if I could be bothered to think for a bit I may have gotten right. Please update soon! I don't like cliff hangers.
Christopher Estep posted a comment on Wednesday 26th October 2005 6:00am for Padfoot, Betrayals and Curses
Something is going to happen. (Yes, I know Harry got hit with the AK. *Again.*) However, for some rather odd reason, I think that it's only going to *extremely* piss him off (maybe because Moldy didn't do the casting?) and that Lucius and Dolohov are going to pay dearly for that screwup.
m posted a comment on Wednesday 26th October 2005 4:39am for Padfoot, Betrayals and Curses
you always leave a bit at the end about what annoys you most in stories so i thought to share what annoys me most with you that being authors who hit harry with an ak curse then end the chapter and if other authors are anything to go by dont update for a week
Crys posted a comment on Wednesday 26th October 2005 4:15am for Padfoot, Betrayals and Curses
*blink*
Somehow I can't believe you just killed Harry. Romany, perhaps, but Harry?
Okay, things have officially gone to hell. DD as the wildcard trying to track Harry down (nice job getting him out of England, btw) after betraying Snape.
I like how intricate you're making this. Something from several chapters ago (fixing the items they're taking from the museums) comes back.
Looking forward to more!
Adam posted a comment on Wednesday 26th October 2005 3:43am for Padfoot, Betrayals and Curses
Now that is a nasty cliffhanger, all in all though another very good chapter, and personally I think Ron got what he deserved. Ahh so Dean was the traitor. Ok so you have killed off Harry (boo, hiss) I always wonder why authors do that before the end of the story, as it just means they need think of some clever way to bring him back or leave him dead and have it no longer Harry Potter, but only based in the HP universe. Well you now have an upset Hermione, and a couple of prophecies that need to find a new chosen one. Oh well I really hope you update soon as the end of this chapter has just annoyed/frustrated me.
Mark posted a comment on Wednesday 26th October 2005 6:26am for Padfoot, Betrayals and Curses