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Cassandra30 posted a comment on Monday 25th June 2012 6:43pm for Plans Revealed

I love it! I do truly hope that they bring Arthur along as well.

darridle posted a comment on Saturday 17th December 2011 11:31am for Plans Revealed

yeps, still love it...

and I keep nodding to your pet peeves.

Makes me want to cry, when I find a story with a good idea, that holds within itself each n every one of them *sniffs*

Razzi2010 posted a comment on Saturday 12th March 2011 4:05am for Plans Revealed

this story has been brilliant so far and the suspense is killing me, don't usually get that from most fanfictions, shows skill in the writer(s) and i'v got to mention the disclaimers, ahh the disclaimers , never have i seen disclaimers done like this , there masterful and filled with humour, better than the drab(we own nothing) approach most fic writers take, keep up the amazing work you two ;)

brackattack posted a comment on Friday 7th January 2011 2:52pm for Plans Revealed

Ahahahaha crossing streams. well done

and you did a really good job with draco/luna. so i withdraw my protests

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Monday 3rd January 2011 6:07pm for Plans Revealed

I totally agree! Too much detail makes me skip paragraphs sometimes, and when it gets really bad, stop reading the story entirely. How did you guys think of the second and third prophecies? I'm trying to write one but am having trouble. Any tips?

cello posted a comment on Monday 6th September 2010 4:45pm for Plans Revealed

nah, that'd be MELF, which is far more advanced than SPEW-

You guys had me howling at Dan, Harry and the brandy. Drunken characters usually send me racing toward the 'next' button, especially when they're used as a lazy excuse to promote intimacy. This was a riot-- from the first gulp to the hangover!

Finally, Arthur grew a pair. Took him long enough to figure out that what he thought were freckles were peck marks.

Can you tell I am thoroughy enjoying this tale?

VickiiMadd posted a comment on Saturday 21st August 2010 1:16am for Plans Revealed

Bloody hell i love this line:
“Imagine every atom of your body exploding outwards at the speed of light,” muttered Harry.

“Total protonic reversal,” quipped Hermione.

hahaha
reminds me of A very potter musical
hhahahahaha :P

misto713 posted a comment on Friday 6th November 2009 4:21am for Plans Revealed

"Ragnok said with a toothless smile." Did I miss something? Did you beat all goblins teeth out of them somewhere in a disclaimer I oversaw? ANOTHER toothless goblin? :D You don´t like them all that much, do you? ;)

misto713 posted a comment on Friday 6th November 2009 3:57am for Plans Revealed

"The goblin smiled toothlessly. “Follow me.”" Why are all your goblin toothless? Goblins have sharp pointy teeth of cruel wild bloodthirsty beasts, as much as I know. Besides, have you ever seen a ruthless banker without some sharp fangs? :P

Every sentence with a goblin has the goblin without their teeth. Their smiles are always toothless. Please, don´t torture them anymore, give the goblins back their teeth, I´m sure the will behave. ;) (as much as they can, anyway.)

malfoie posted a comment on Saturday 13th June 2009 10:52pm for Plans Revealed

I just got why you don't have Harry charge in and kill and the DEs and Voldiemort. I like how you made a belevable super Harry but make it so he needs to what for the Dark Lord to get up to his level. It Works Keep it up

kinkade0001 posted a comment on Wednesday 13th May 2009 12:17am for Plans Revealed

NICE!!!!

Tammy Driver posted a comment on Monday 16th February 2009 1:35am for Plans Revealed

What did Abraxan and Old Crow say, when they read you were using them as potions ingredients?

kryptikk79 posted a comment on Friday 5th December 2008 4:20pm for Plans Revealed

while a cigar is sometimes just a cigar, it can also be a joint. or a grenade. or a lighter that just looks like a cigar. or a magic wand.
i think you get the picture.

smile-like-u-mean-it posted a comment on Friday 11th July 2008 10:22am for Plans Revealed

Where are you shopping?!?! Cause I really need to get some of those donut spewing buttons!! haha

Prongs1977 posted a comment on Monday 28th April 2008 12:44pm for Plans Revealed

OK, please tell me there won't be a 200 foot tall stay puffed marshmellow man in this story!

ROBERT_1958 posted a comment on Friday 29th February 2008 11:36am for Plans Revealed

I hope all the elfs are told, and all the other animals, and some muggles.

Brian Donnely posted a comment on Thursday 7th February 2008 5:58am for Plans Revealed

I'm so proud of Arthur. ;_; That was some great writing with his scenes. :)

Marvin posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 7:49pm for Plans Revealed

nuclear submarines.
You are definitly a bit crazy, aren't you?
:)
Great! Thanks!

mathiasgranger posted a comment on Tuesday 18th September 2007 3:14am for Plans Revealed

Probably the only little writing habit I've found in the reread of this story are how often eyes widen with pleasure or some similar facial expression involving pleasure...

How does one's eyes widen with pleasure exactly....eyes widening with surprise I can understand...but pleasure...well you lost me.

Thanks for writing,
Matt

HHrfan17 posted a comment on Thursday 13th September 2007 8:36am for Plans Revealed

i have red this story before it is a grate story and i allways love a good Dumbledore/ron\molly bashing story there so much fun