GryffindorDragon posted a comment on Sunday 3rd June 2007 5:36am for The Breaking Storm

Where was the chapter where the students attitude toward Harry changed? Those he's rescued might think he's a hero, but where did the student start expressing such thoughts, let alone accepting him as not dark?
'Computer confirms analysis' -- Wasn't it the computer that gave the alert? Perhaps it should be 'Computer analysis confirmed'?
'Professor Pussycat' -- great line for Dobby!
'the final two minutes of the football match' -- does soccer (football anywhere but the US) have a two-minute warning?

Donald Deutsch posted a comment on Monday 23rd April 2007 12:01am for The Breaking Storm

You can use me in one of your stories, please. If you want to read some of my stories, I am at the dreaded fanfiction dot net, under the author name donalddeutsch.

Selma Flamel posted a comment on Sunday 4th March 2007 9:05am for The Breaking Storm

You saved the library! Wonderful!

Favorite line: "After tonight, that young man will be a legend, whether he wants it or not."

Dragen posted a comment on Saturday 20th January 2007 8:02am for The Breaking Storm

Who would have thought that Dean would be a spy for Voldemort, he is a Muggleborn, and we all knew how much Voldemort hates them.

Com e on, the only one who can kill Harry is Voldemort himself… no-one else. But ‘killing’ Harry is one way to really piss him off big time. And with the help of ‘Padfoot’, Harry tired down MoM. 

So everyone at Hogwarts are going to Haven.

Yeah, Harry is going to be a legend, whether he wants it or not.

I hope Harry will be ok

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 10:58am for The Breaking Storm

Outstanding.

gunny

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Thursday 23rd February 2006 4:44am for The Breaking Storm

The Ministry destruction and the face off at the Hogwarts wards were brilliant.

Nice use of the Grim named Padfoot.

Marvelous house-elf tactics.

Just grand all around.

AJ4 posted a comment on Monday 6th February 2006 8:28am for The Breaking Storm

"Hi, Tommy! shouted Harry Potter as he waved cheerfully at the Dark Lord. Hermione just flipped him the bird." that sentance is absolutly wonderful!!! I love that very much. it's my favorite line for this entire story!! --AJ : )

ThunderGod posted a comment on Sunday 1st January 2006 9:41pm for The Breaking Storm

So many stories come to mind when ever I read your Pet peeves..and since I've read it the first time, I now look for those things and then ignore the fic..unless its great...:}

Now for something really silly...and on the DR Dolittle them..and I wonder if anyone would use it..The Giant Moon Moth:}..I remember reading the original books way back when I was a kid..30 years ago...

Got A extra silly Animagus for you..Godzilla!!!

WEll back again to reading...

ThunderGod

anonymous5 posted a comment on Friday 16th December 2005 1:02pm for The Breaking Storm

"I'm going to chastise a few people."

Without any possible doubt, that phrase has the most amusing potential for understatement that I have [i]ever[/i] read in fanfic. :D

harry85 posted a comment on Monday 5th December 2005 10:28pm for The Breaking Storm

This was great, especially the teasing to Voldemort. It was just wonderful!

Lanthir posted a comment on Sunday 20th November 2005 7:30am for The Breaking Storm

Hello, I am from germany. Sorry for mistakes!
Your story is exellent, very good. I hope that you ´will write a second part.
Bye Lanthir

ThunderGod posted a comment on Saturday 12th November 2005 7:17am for The Breaking Storm

YAY..no more grey box's..and the review thingy works..might be cause I fixed my system or ran th diagnostic thingy...

anyway..Great Chapter, and I don't believe Ron is dead..no body..which means..oh come on..everyone knows what that means..a villian thats died but left no body?..thats the oldest cliche..he will come back..as Lord of The Spiders!!!! bwahahahahahahahahaha *cough* bad on the throat that is...

will be continueing to read..some interesting things to see..like What has happened to Albus..where is he?..I wonder....

anyway..I like saying that anyway..hmmmanyway..of now to read the next chapter

ThunderGod

chris13 posted a comment on Thursday 10th November 2005 6:07am for The Breaking Storm

another grate chapter guys, well done!

Joanna posted a comment on Wednesday 9th November 2005 11:54am for The Breaking Storm

Oh come on!! Why does the black man have to be the evil one? It's not fair!!! Whatever...Tom does need to get laid. He's just...ugh. Lucius would be totally cute if he wasn't such an ass-licking asshole, yet I digress. Draco is enough. By the way, I think Draco and Luna are just the cutest thing. THey are so funny! I

Thelvyn posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2005 11:45pm for The Breaking Storm

Excellent fic, I'm looking foward to the next chapter (and all chapters after that of course).
I have noticed the odd little nitpicking error, but I can't remember the details of any of them so they obviously aren't worth bothering about.

Manatheron posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2005 3:51pm for The Breaking Storm

Actually, I rather liked this chapter. I can't wait to see how good ol tom reacts to an empty school... Um... I know that I should remember, but what Happened to dumbledor again? I know he was killed, but I can't rememeber how.

Bill Robertson posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2005 1:53pm for The Breaking Storm

Hey. Your story is amazingly well written (your plotline shows). I started following this story about a month ago, and haven't looked back since. Keep up the great fiction, i really enjoy reading your updates!

James7 posted a comment on Sunday 6th November 2005 10:24am for The Breaking Storm

wonderful story!! I've been reading almost non stop to get this far!!

I've read a few that claim to be novel lenth but arn't even half this lenth finished...

Wonderful, and I can't wait for MORE !!

Thank you
--James

Joseph Fritz posted a comment on Saturday 5th November 2005 11:51am for The Breaking Storm

How about making Harry a platypus animagus;) Great story! Please post more soon!

John Pinkston posted a comment on Saturday 5th November 2005 7:15am for The Breaking Storm

Hey,
I think this is the first time that I have reviewed you all, even though I have been reading for a while.
I appreciate that you are writing a superpowered Harry story, and its actually good and believable!!
Anyway, keep up the good work.