GryffindorDragon posted a comment on Sunday 3rd June 2007 3:19am for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

Oh, the Weasleys' fixing things in the British Museum is just too much. . . . and then stealing a whole ship -- just great.
Tonk and Remus eating out was just obvious. But I guess some stupidity is necessary (just as Super Harry doing very little).
The Underground Railroad part was excellent; the scene shifts worked well.
Very clever with the change in the Ron-potion incident. It was finessed well.
'finished his chapter' -- finished this chapter??
'Now, make a bunch of errors in the paragraph ' -- uh, there are already several errors in the paragraph.

morao posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd May 2007 6:18am for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

lol theres already an error in that paragraph

Luna was stumped for the first time in her life. She knew she had to jump over the river to follow Ron, but she also knew she couldn’t get her feet wet. ==She quickly searched the riverbank and was surprised to find a rope, tugging on the rope released a rowboat from the far shore.== (grammatically incorrect)== The row boat glided magically across the river. With a very un-ladylike leap, she jumped into the rowboat for the trip to the other side.

Selma Flamel posted a comment on Tuesday 20th February 2007 8:45am for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

They repaired the Rosetta Stone! What else did they repair? (you have captured my interest again)
Caring and comfort speaks louder than the press.
Favorite lines: "A rude adult is a result of not being taught manners as a child" and "Hello, werewolf here! Heightened senses remember?"

Dragen posted a comment on Saturday 20th January 2007 6:21am for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

The fools, trying to arrest Draco; whilst Harry is around, that isn’t going to happen. I like what Harry done to save Draco.

Poor Tonks and Moony, I hope they’ll be ok. Tonks is a fool to go out, and I understand why Harry acted like he did towards her.

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Thursday 19th October 2006 3:36pm for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

Hi I've been reading this awesome story since monday and I figured I would review this chapter because some of the things you said made me laugh like when the Weasley's take the: Scotland Yard, with help from the Royal Navy and the Coast Guard, were unable to locate the 2196 metric ton sailing ship anywhere in the area. that made me laugh so hard I bout pee'd my pants, some of your Author Notes have also almost caused me to do the same thing, I know its supposed to be a Sirius story but I don't think I actually know how to be serious. I did however take your advice and I did join your wonderful yahoo group, such helpful people on it. Do keep up the good work, you two are great writers, you should think about writing your own book, just a thought.

Cky Raes posted a comment on Thursday 13th July 2006 5:49pm for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

Excellent, Excellent. Now, where are my nits? I have a sudden rge for picking them. X|

Sterling posted a comment on Wednesday 14th June 2006 1:56am for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

This story has been quite entertaining. I'm still not all that thrilled with how you've treated Ron and Molly in this story but it's not that big of a deal. However, I think your goal of creating a "believable" Harry and Hermione romance is in fact hampered by the way you've slaughtered Ron's and Molly's characters.

knellst posted a comment on Saturday 20th May 2006 6:06am for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

At some point in this chapter (Theivery, Surprises and Noodles) you refer to Prince Philip as the 'Prince Consort'. While this is a pretty accurate description, it's not his official title. Camilla Parker-Bowles, who married Prince Charles, will have the official title 'Princess Consort', but that's only because people objected to her one day being the Queen when she was Charles' mistress and broke up his marriage with the beloved Princess Diana. It's more usual to call Philip the Duke of Edinburgh.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 1:03am for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

Good story.

gunny

Highschool Nerd posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2006 10:48am for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

Great chapter!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Thursday 23rd February 2006 2:48am for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

Based on your disclaimers, I have the feeling you two make a living writing horror tales to scare children to sleep at night.

You are creating a scenario where Lord Potter-Black may be a world wide, Muggle and magical hero - the man who save England.

Can't wait to get to hurt Ron, Snape, and Dumbledore. But let's embarrass Snape and Dumbledore first in front of all the magical world.

Cheers!

Tildessmoo posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 8:43pm for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

And now I must apologize for accidentally commiting one of my own pet peeves: double posting. I'll be more careful with my space bar in the future.

Tildessmoo posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd January 2006 8:42pm for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

On the pet peeves:
Actually, I noticed a syntax error in the pre-error-ridden paragraph. Does this mean I can be a beta?
Just kidding. I'm good at proofing and fact-checking, but don't ever ask me to make plot or characterization suggestions; I can say if I think something is good or bad, but I generally can't say why coherently.

Rick Peterson posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 2:55am for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

I found this story recently and was intending to wait until I had finished it to review. However, I couldn't pass over the Weasleys 'fixing' all those priceless relics. That scene was... (wait for it)... priceless! And then stealing the Victory. I'm still chuckling over that one.

I'm glad that Mr. Weasley has come over to the good guys. Somehow, it was harder to see him as one of the bad guys than Molly or Ron. And I have to say that what you do to Ron in the disclaimers is just plain mean. Funny, but mean. BBQ Snape... hmm... I don't think it'll catch on.

harry85 posted a comment on Monday 5th December 2005 2:44am for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

I liked this a lot. I guess when they'll find the enchantment on Ron, theyy'll take it off him, sohe'll sart going after Hermione again...

Natasja posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 6:05pm for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

With sated apathies we will soon retire.
Further annoUNcements can wait until laTer.

Professor Dumbledore sat down as the students rose to there feEt.

Ron, who had just wrestled his trunks to the bottom of the stairs, turned to see Harry effortlessly levitate his own trunk down to the living room.

He watchED the emergency personal trying to put OUT the fire.

Jimmy posted a comment on Friday 28th October 2005 3:11pm for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

Very good work. But I gotta tell ya, you're both evil!!!! Now, I was wondering, would it be ok for you to beta read a novel my friend is working on getting published?
Please reply.
Jimmy.

Zero Blitz posted a comment on Monday 24th October 2005 3:38am for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

I've just started to read this fic and I think it's really good so far (and although I'd prefer H/G than H/Hr it still seems to work well). I think that Fawkes should return as Harry's phoenix which could prove that Harry isn't 'dark' (maybe he could get/do something that shows his perfect grey (grey is how the colour is spelt in England) personality, strength or 'grey lord' status) and/or they should get animagus forms soon (but seeing the power of Harry in this fic, Harry would probably be able to turn into just about any non-magic animal and a couple of magical that depict his personality) and I think you should show a couple more things Harry can do with his power soon (oh yeah I think it would be stupid if Dumbledore and Snape actually succeed with a ritual that brings them upto power with Harry since Dumbledore would have thought about it during the first war). Also why don't all of the important members on Harry's side have a multi-mirror (or some other form of quick communication) or Harry should have something like Hermione has which heats up when one of them gets hurt (a different object per person). And one last thing: I think Harry should find out he can kill dementors soon (or as soon as they start fighting back for England). I don't mind if you don't implement any of my ideas but maybe you could consider them?

jb238 posted a comment on Monday 24th October 2005 1:29am for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

Fascinating story, I'm very curious how it continues. I like the humour to lighten the story as well as Harry taking things into his own hands instead of just getting manipulated and pushed around.

Eric posted a comment on Sunday 23rd October 2005 1:57pm for Thievery, Surprises and Noodles

I love your story i usually don't like Harry/Hermione but you pull it off wonderfully This story should never have been taken off ff.net but that website has given me so many headaches lately. Well just wanted to tell you i loved your story.