Tlcatlady posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 11:50am for Chapter 1

I am so glad to find a new story from you two! Sunset & Sunrise were the very first fanfics I ever read, and I still consider them the absolute best, and have told multiple people that I prefer them to JK's last two. I miss the crazy intro's and the the well written stories when I don't have one of your stories to look forward to. Please post more and often! TLC

Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 11:44am for Chapter 1

About what I would expect of Harry in a Ministry plot to mess with his life, after he had taken down Big V.

Nicely done, with just the right amount of Slytherin|Harry coming out.

On the other hand, I have trouble believing that there are enough totally stupid people ,even in the wizarding world, that if Harry had boiled Zabini in Oil in the middle if Diagon Alley, that after the first 50 or 60 Aurors or others who tried to arrest him and just disappeared into the Twilight Zone he found, that there would be any impetus to even TRY to try him, much less put thim into Azkaban.

And don't tell me Harry would suddenly surrender in a fit or remorse and go willingly. , not the Harry you have painted here.I don't think so

morriganscrow posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 11:39am for Chapter 1

An excellent addition to the body of work known as 'Obligatory Marriage Law Fics'. Your personal touches made for a great read, even if it was Harry and Ginny, and I enjoyed it muchly

Anthony May posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 11:17am for Chapter 1

Oh it's great to have the Mighty BOBMIN back!! I have you two to thank for bringing me in hook line and sinker (whatever that means)into the wonderful world of fanfic! I think Dumbledore's Army was one of my very first, if not THE FIRST fanfic story I have ever read and, as the saying goes, "The rest is history"! Obligatory Marriage was alot of fun. I loved the transfigured pony! Just wish Harry could've eliminated Fudge and Wainright - it would've been great for Harry to use some last minute magic to have the plane or train delayed for maintenance so his Clause 18 could have come into effect!(Scrambled eggs anyone?) Keep up the great work, You two are Brilliant and I miss reading you! - Anthony E. May

Jamey posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 11:17am for Chapter 1

I have to admit, though I cannot pin down why, that I found this story somewhat dis-satisfying. My first reaction was to say that it was because it was a H/G story, but then as I thought about it, I have enjoyed quite a few stories with the Harry/Ginny pairing. My next reaction was that I couldn't see Harry going along with the Ministry even so much as to end up marrying a pure-blood, but then again, Half-Baked Plot and Deadly Ho-Hums locked into canon both the H/G ship, as well as the fact that Harry really just wasn't that great a wizard. He just happened to be the subject of a prophecy, and therefore the poor soul picked by Dumbledore for atrocious abuse.

I think you're right, at least, to be somewhat disdainful of the Marriage Law meme in HP Fanfic, but then again I did think it was a decent challenge, and your handling of it was quite different from the others I've read. In that respect, it was excellent.

And yet... I still find myself not particularly liking it. I will be re-reading this over the next couple of days, to see if I can pick out where my disquiet originates. Nice touch, though, turning Harry's place into Castle Perilous!

Lottii posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 11:15am for Chapter 1

Beautifully done as always. Glad to see your back!!! Look forward to more when its ready...

coronal posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 11:14am for Chapter 1

Welcome back you two! It's great to see you writing again.

This story is definitely amusing, and you have now fulfilled your requirement of the obligatory ML fic.

If I may, on a side note, there is a moment where Harry says to Daphne "I am only human and mostly definitely not gay." Typo or joke?

James Barber posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 11:12am for Chapter 1

Hey welcome back...and as usual your story is outstanding! although at first when I saw it was harry/ginny I was thinking of not reading it, I have long since left that ship and like either harry/hermione or harry/luna or harry/daphne or harry/hermione/luna or harry/hermione/daphne or even better harry/harem with those three and others...

but anyway great story and I'm not certain what happen to cause ya'll to be gone from writing so long...except that I think I caught a nippen of you were either sick or had been in a car wreck...? in either case or another again welcome back, and yes I do hope you get back to mutant before to long...

P.S. I sure hope your disappearance from writing wasnt cause of that idiot on fanfiction who put up your first chapter of sunset and which caused all that hoopla over supposed plagarism, when in fact he had a author note wanting people to read your story and since you refused to post it on ffnet he was trying to advertise it, of course the author note was I believe at the end of the chapter instead of being posted at the beginning which is why I beleive most people didnt see it....

anonymous5 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 10:42am for Chapter 1

awwwwwwwwwwwww.

Refreshing twists on a tired cliche. Well done!

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 10:23am for Chapter 1

This was a fun read. Thank you for posting it.

jdcox61 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 10:04am for Chapter 1

pretty sweet, pretty sweet. I especially enjoyed all the times when Harry was kicking some ass. I love you guys' work, but it just seems to me like if Harry was in a funk then his getting back with Ginny was just a bit too easy. I dunno, I expected more conflict out of that. But, still a great story. I think you guys should work that line Bruce Willis says in Die Hard into one of your stories: Yippee-ki-yay, motherfucker! Like when Harry's taunting moldieshorts right before he sets off a big explosion that nails him. It'd be great

lazypr posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 10:04am for Chapter 1

Definitely loved it...of course I love all of your stories. Bravo!

Infin1x posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 9:49am for Chapter 1

Very nicely done. You took an absurd premise; but unfortunately one that is entirely possible with the demonstrated stupidity of the Wizarding World; and did it in one of the few ways that is both satisfying and believable.

Very happy to see new words from your keyboard. I just checked the ffa.net homepage yesterday and realized how long it had been since we had heard anything.

Malchior posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 9:03am for Chapter 1

I love your stories and I'm glad you're back. Does this mean you two will be writing some of the cliches? I'd love to see your comedy applied to the standard "Rich beyond all imagine shopping trip" or a time travel, just for kicks. Will there be another chapter or are you just leaving it open for future exploration?

Albus Brian Dumbledore posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 8:52am for Chapter 1

Nice!
Will there be a second, third,.... chapter? You wrote finis, but your story is posted as "work in progress".

IssaBissa posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 8:27am for Chapter 1

Wow wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved this so very very much!!!! You are awesome writers and this was a true joy to read! Well Done once again!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 7:53am for Chapter 1

Tch, they really shouldn't have pissed Harry off. If he was powerful enough to off Tommy the way he did and kept growing, they should've known he'd be more than "difficult", likely "downright impossible" to control. As 'tis, Wainwright, Fudge, and Zabini (to say nothing of Percy) are finding out that crossing Harry Potter, or those he considers family, is contra-indicated if a long life is desired.

Robert Peeples posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 7:52am for Chapter 1

Loved it! Loved the twist on the marrige law.

Glad to see you all back in the game, looking forward to more stories as you get them out.

DaBear

blue artemis posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 7:46am for Chapter 1

That was different, and enjoyable.

Michael10 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd April 2009 7:25am for Chapter 1

Great story, glad to see you both pulling out of oblivion. Keep it up and know you both are favs.
Mike