sunrisesunset posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 8:28am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

I wasn't sure where this story was going from the first chapter, but it has really evolved since then. Thank you for being realistic - for giving a true, believable account of two teenagers in love.

You're doing better at releasing chapters when I've actually got the time to read them. I only missed studying for one test this time around (last time it was three ^^).

I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it coming! And please don't kill the generic readers. They're cute, in a very stupid sort of way. Cuteness should be preserved. (Feel free to abuse them all you like, though)

xohorsegal752ox posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 7:59am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

This story is great as are all your other.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!


~L-Dawg<33

wxnut posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 7:58am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

Well, for an experimental writing piece, I'm enjoying the story very much. Keep the experiment going!

CRose posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 7:52am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

Good luck with the story. The Relationship aspect of this story is to overt for me. And nods to your Authors note.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 7:13am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

While i really do not want to end up in the hole next to, or on top of Generic Reader #6 - This is an excellent chapter.

I thoroughly enjoyed the humour and interplay between Harry and the others - holding Mcgonagall over the swimming pool is a priceless image.

Love the journals - i occasionally travel on the company dime - and would love to be able to go to bookspace with my beloved when I a physically away.

Like the marauder out pranked by a mere muggle - (please do not treat me like a Weasley - its a joke)

I have never, in 40 yrs of reading, found authors better at handling emotional conversations and keeping them balanced..
thanks for sharing your talent.

???No sidebar newspaper story about a person dying in the cellar of a house and a missing baby???

Must be a setup for the next chapter.

Warm regards

jessiecross posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 6:51am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

my opinion won't bring anything new, i just want to read more... ;)

goddessa39 posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 6:40am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

Engaged. Sirius Black. Sirius Black is engaged. WHat?! Now all we need is someone for Moony. TOnks anyone?

Ravenfur posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 6:34am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

This is a fantastic story. I love the newly discovered annoyingus revenueus. I also liked how you showed the Wizarding World's view of Muggles through the Weasley's. Wonderful work on this chapter, and I can't wait until you update this again!
-Ravenfur

Prodipan Sengupta posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 6:26am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

good chapter.well,i will read just about anything by you at this point.i am addicted.

is Wizards Fall done?i was hoping for some more of that universe.

iluvchocs posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 6:20am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

Thankthee very muchly for the updatedness xD I've really enjoyed the realistic way you're depicting Harry and Hermione, and Sirius' proposal was hilarious. Great job xD Will you spend a lot of time on Harry's NEWT year, or will you get that over quickly so we can see what happens with the hunt for Horcruxes and Harry being in Hogsmeade?

millercommamatt posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 6:19am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

"...surfer's suit..."

Is this swim trunks, speedos, boardshorts, a wetsuit, etc...?

Ronnie McMains posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 5:45am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

As always, I love this story. I don't mind at all that you're writing this as character-driven, rather than event-driven; I actually prefer it that way. I'm a big fan of the H/Hr ship (also H/L, H/T, and pre-HBP H/G, as well as a few odder ships).

One minor...quibble. In this chapter, Ginny says the Quibbler prints at least one Harry sighting a week. I thought (and the Lexicon confirms) that the Quibbler is a monthly. Unless these Harry sightings are bringing enough revenue in for them to turn it into a bi-weekly?

Other than that, great story, and I'm so looking forward to Nagini finally making it into the Chamber, only to find Harry there. "I'm sorry, Nagini, were you looking for someone?"

texasranger_10 posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 5:37am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

oh i agree it is different in how you wrote your other stories. but i love and keep it up. i love the part in this chappie when they talked thier at the end. then harry made the first and i do hope not the last move to thier relationship. keep it up your doing great.

i just wished you had dropped the professor in the pool. would love to see her as a wet cat. she would deserve it in my opion (because of the books book 1 mainly then again book 5 too)

again keep up the good work

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 5:35am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

I still remember one of my first reviews "You are a good riter." Boy did that give me mixed messages.

Nice chapter. Loved the prank war between Cindy and Sirius. Poor Remus, he could use a significant other. Loved the image of Professor Kittycat suspended over the pool. Harry should have just released her to make her own way over to the chairs for a talk.

I can't get past that Nagini is going to a basilisk, but the one in the chamber is dead -- unless Voldie doesn't know that!

Good story. I like character driven tales. Keep up the good work. Needs more llamas, though.

Tom A.

Memory King posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 5:21am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

Nicely done! I liked how you dealt with Umbridge, and the look at British magical society was refreshing. The romance didn't make me close the window, so good work. Looking forward to more!

beauty01021 posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 5:00am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

yeah great chapter can't wait for more so please update again and soon.

Jason Karr posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 4:44am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

this a truly a lovely chapter. Looking forward to when looking forward to when volde's pet snake gets to hogwarts, and finds the really big snake dead.

Chiyo posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 4:41am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

Mah heroes! This story is great and I have no problem with the deviation from the usual fare with you guys.

Great work so far and keep it up... want to read more! :D

Teresa Lynne posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 4:39am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

I loved this chapter! It was great seeing the toad Umwitch get caught, and finding out that besides being a racist and a sadistic torturer she was using lust potions on students didn't suprize me at all. Just how long was Malfoy in St. Mungo's recovering from that? Lavender also deservered that well played public smackdown....it was beautiful! Here's hoping that if she makes a play for "Evan" when he visits Hermione in Hogsmeade she ends up with another public hosing. As for the Weasleys and the British magical world.....well, it's their loss. Sometimes I think that one of the reasons for their disdain of the Muggle world is jealously. After all, most of what they can do magically can be done mundanely. It doesn't make one culture better than the other, just different. It's possible that once Harry reenters the public view that other muggleborns and halfbloods, and those sympathetic to their positions will start leaving Britian for more magical education if nothing else. Anyway, the prank war was great, as was Sirus's proposal and watching him give Harry the talk was wild....... I'll bet that Cindy and Remus wished that they had at least supervised him! (snicker) On the other hand, they have a story that will go down in family history, along with Harry's brief dedication to the monastic life! Not that he'd have kept that resolution very long if Hermione had heard about it......she's very focused and he'd have been forgoing the monestary within an hour or less. I'm glad that McGonagall and Harry worked things out, I always felt that she regretted what happened to him but had believed too much to Dumbledore in his position as elder statesman of the wizarding world. Sigh, I can see that confromtation between Harry and the Weasleys coming, and I wonder if any of them will recall what they said about Harry being worthless because he'd lost his magic. Odds are they'll rant more about his tricking them then think about their attitudes. After all, if they were so concerned about him they could have tried to find him, and/or discussed the matter with Sirius and Remus. Anyway, thanks for another great chapter, and I look forward to seeing Remus getting together with Tonks! Enjoy an extral large package of cyber donuts!

coulsdoneagle posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2007 4:09am for Chapter 4 - Year Five Continued

Actually I thoroughly agree with your A/N. My preference is for character-driven fics (as long as they do head somewhere) & agree that both Harry & Hermione are a mix of insecurities. You've proven you can do the all action blockbuster, now its something of a slower pace, but no less enjoyable.