infinity2x0 posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 5:08pm

I for one hope that there is more, perhaps another chapter or two to finish up? I loved to idea and think it's very original. Well done, very well done. If you were to do more chapters, maybe something on how Snape does or does not Die painfully? If he took easy way out and used the pill and died a painful week later, or if Snape stuck it out where he is also one Hundred and seventy or so years old, really old. Was there something funny in Snapes ' bread that day? Or how about when the time lines meet up again with Norman Cay and the wizarding world, will some of them have left words for Harry and his 'Avalonian' world? Were they good or bad words? Pensieve memories of the end of days for the Wizarding World perhaps? I look forward to the next piece that will be submitted.

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 5:06pm

Woo! Brilliant!

Only Luna could come up with such a plan. I've seen this basic story idea used in various forms on various archives but this is one of the best realisations of that idea.

What makes it particularly good? Harry hasn't gone Dark. He has chosen to enact a deadly and horrible revenge but regrets every bit of pain and death that it has caused. He has really worked out the difference between "easy" and "right".

And, as many writers have foretold, the phrase "for the greater good" finally returned to haunt Dumbledore to his dying day. I am also glad that Snape appreciated the brilliance of Harry, Luna and Hermione's scheme.

BenRG's Rating: 9/10

Rufus posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 4:58pm

Finis ? I don't think so... You can't finish it there... There is so much more to tell about this universe. This is only the beginning of something as great as the other stories you wrote :-)

Beside, more stories from you means more hilarious disclaimer... Although, there was no blood in this one ;-)

I can only hope that your rabid plot bunny will cause some more damages in the future. And don't you try to shoot it down. I've never seen a more productive rabid plot bunny :-)

Thanks for the good work and continue with it...

Rufus

kenny posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 4:58pm

as usual your discalmers are a hoot and this story is awsome grr but i always have hated the or is its gahhh

ThunderGod posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 4:46pm

I have to say, I liked this....as I had unfortunatley lost interest in your other story... I'll get back into one of these days..but this one has great promise..nanotechnology..hmmmmm..woohoo ..lol..I wonder what the world will be like when they get back....

ThunderGod

draregerreip posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 4:44pm

wow wow ... nice, very nice ... You really opened up possibilities here ... you were not exagerating when you wrote that you had opened up a new universe. I hope someone will take advantage of it.

morriganscrow posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 4:38pm

IT BETTER BLOODY NOT BE!!

That was excellent! The punishment was precise, specific and totally ruthless. Brilliant!
Please write more in this AUverse.

FenrisWolf posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 4:21pm

Me again.

I thought of one fairly major quibble after I left my last review. All the negative, post-war anti-muggle backlash is being committed by the British Ministry for Magic, but Harry and company are taking vengeance on the whole Wizarding world. Some explanation needs to be made as to why every witch and wizard the world over has to pay for the sins of a single magical community, and not a very large one either in terms of land mass or population.

Now, if post-Voldemort the International Confederation of Wizards passed new laws to 'keep another Dark Lord from rising', and Wizard Ministries all over the world adopted them, that would be different, but that's not explained in the story as it stands.

phineas posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 4:20pm

I like the idea, but to continue? there is no adversity left.

Splunge posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 4:19pm

...nerf herders....NERF HERDERS?!?!?! Of all the things you could throw in there... I almost choked when I read that.
Anyways, a good read, and an interesting end (or is that beginning?) to the story. Reminds me a bit of The Quiet Place by Ruskbyte.

Meg posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 4:06pm

You two are evil.

You're also awesome.

'Bout all I can say.

Thanks!

Meg

Leen posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 3:56pm

Oh MY GOD That was just too good. That has to be the most orignial story i have ever read on harry potter. The justice was just perfect.

wolfey posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 3:48pm

Man what a great story. Are you going to write a follow up?

Amamama posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 3:43pm

Oh, wonderful! Glorious Bobmin brand story. About time those bigots started reaping what they sow. Sad, but wonderful. Loved the Avalon equations - I so hope you'll post another not-so-very-stand-alone, as I'd love to see Harry & the Gang rebuild magic society. A thousand years from now... Sci Fi Fantasy.

Luna's omniscience, coupled with her complete lack of linear thinking is rather endearing.

And Harry is a gem, as always.

Thanks!

Sheepstamper posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 3:40pm

Oh wow! Another terrific story from two of the greatest authors ever to write fanfiction, bit dramatic isn't it?

Well I have to say that I enjoyed this story and hope that you continue with this to see where it leads. I just loved the part Harry James Potter, Big Kahuna of Norman's Cay and official Luau Starter, keeper of the Pretty Seashells, what No Order of Merlin - First Class?

Loved it. keep going with this story - Please..

knightsbridge posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 3:29pm

Poor old Charlie...always bets on the wrong horse. He did it in Sunrise, and he did it again. I've spoken my piece about DD before, and my opinion hasn't changed. My opinion of harry HAS changed though...good on him! Wizards seems to be like children, and if you can't reason with them, you take their toys away. If you continue this, great...if not, it was the perfect one shot; complete from start to finish.

Jimbocous posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 3:26pm

AS always, count on you for a wicked read! Not sure where you would take this from here; somehow I think it deserves to stand as it is ... Thanks!

thumper posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 3:25pm

Outstanding

Rob Clark posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 3:20pm

Another great little story. Just love these stories of yours when the wizard world gets a bit of justice.

Rob

tw posted a comment on Monday 2nd July 2007 3:16pm

Oh my GOd!!!!!!!!!!!! this is soooooo good. please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, continue. i have to find out how they will restore the wizarding world...and what about the magical places around the world that were not governed by england? how will continental europe, america, canada, asia, and other places recover if the only people who went with harry were english or british fugatives?