By Bobmin
Reviews
NuitTombee posted a comment on Wednesday 31st March 2010 4:38pm
Nothing to critique 'cept your criminal use of Alan Rickman...Nah I'm just kiddin torture him all you want...if you want...yes. Well that concludes todays...lesson? Kids?...Right I'll just leave now...bye!
beauty0102 posted a comment on Tuesday 30th March 2010 10:31pm
yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.
elizablaine posted a comment on Monday 29th March 2010 6:17pm
Oh we like it, would have loved to have been able to be a mouse in the corner or a fly on the wall (with a gas mask of course) to see Snivellus and Ferret Boy's reactions to thier little gifts.
More soon Pretty Pwease
Cynrom posted a comment on Monday 29th March 2010 4:54pm
Nice!
I've got to say that I really enjoyed this chapter. It's good to see Harry opening up to his friends and taking a more active role in the war.
Bravo!
Chris :)
ps. iPhones really hate the review window, but I really liked his chapter, so it was worth the hassle. :)
muggledad posted a comment on Monday 29th March 2010 4:54am
Thanks for the update, I really love this story. Good to see Harry reaching out of his shell. It seems that the 'easier, softer' Ginny of this fic fits better with your traumatized Harry. Interesting with the blossoming Hermione/Neville romance. You've toned down her bossiness & stridency which (i'd think) utterly quash a relationship with the insecure Longbottom of Longbottom.
Very much like Scott's emerging 'dad-ness' and have liked Wolverine since I was 10 and got the first X-Men comic with his appearance (yep, in the yellow/black/blue outfit. Wondered at the time why they didn't call him the bumblebee).
I HATE the reviews/PMs that whine 'when're you gonna update?' so I shan't utter the foul vulgarities, merely offer my congratulations for the best crossover since 'Browncoat, Green Eyes'. Good job guys
Sean
mdavis71 posted a comment on Sunday 28th March 2010 9:55pm
Awesome story. I've never quite found a story I like reading as much as this one. Great work!
mjbrown268 posted a comment on Sunday 28th March 2010 12:02pm
Liked the prank at the end of this chapter. One thing that I will say is that I am getting tired of waiting for the students to do something about the Death Eaters.
As much as you might not want to admit it, one of the students who now knows about the Death Eaters would attack and kill the marked students. In situations were someone losses their families, is raped, or other extreme trauma; one of the common responses is to try to get revenge.
Update again soon!
mjbrown268 posted a comment on Sunday 28th March 2010 9:04am
I have never really liked the Harry/Ginny pairing and I am really hoping that you do not use it here.
Post Voldemort stories are really interesting and I am looking forward to seeing what happens in this story post voldie, if you choose to continue it.
mjbrown268 posted a comment on Sunday 28th March 2010 8:36am
Still upset that Harry hasn't got those books back.
I really don't like the idea of Jean and Dumbledore keeping secrets from Harry. After she witnessed Harry's life, I cannot see how she was willing to do so.
The hospital healers excuses were just down right pitiful. No child should be abused.
mjbrown268 posted a comment on Sunday 28th March 2010 7:37am
I must say that I have always hated this chapter. Those books belong to Harry and he should have taken them all. I do not like that idea that Dumbledore has them and so far hasn't done anything to get them back. I know that I probably would have been a Ravenclaw, due to my views on knowledge, but he should forcefully take those books back. (Maybe raiding Hogwarts, Dumbeldore's library, and the Malfoys while he's at it).
00_Knight posted a comment on Sunday 28th March 2010 7:18am
Out-Fuckin'-Standing!
Great update, though not nearly as hilarious as "Sphere of Influence." Oh well, can't complain even if I wanted to!
Can't really say which is my favorite part, since I enjoyed all of it. Though any bye play with Logan is always welcome! "What do you have in mind Twinkly?"- ~smirk~ That one was pretty funny!
Well until the next update, have fun tormenting those who would dare rush your perfection!
Fresh posted a comment on Saturday 27th March 2010 10:39pm
Fantastic story... I'm torn between devouring the next few chapters in one sitting or spreading them out so I can savour them slowly.
nothnagel123 posted a comment on Saturday 27th March 2010 8:44pm
Another amazing chapter!
I have read all of your stories so far, and they are both incredibly entertaining and very well-written.
I LOVE how you have been writing Logan. AMAZING. For that matter, all of your characters are written very well, in my opinion. I guess Logan's just become a favorite of mine in this story.
Can't wait to read more!
Jimbocous posted a comment on Saturday 27th March 2010 4:13pm
Thanks for the update! Definitely some fun potential in this one and, as always, nicely written. Great read so far!
jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Saturday 27th March 2010 12:23pm
Outstanding chapter!!!! I was hoping Harry would of used the second one on Dumbledore!!!! Will we see Ginny and Harry doing more pranks???? Will Hermione and Neville eventually get married???? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please!!!!:):):):)
Iarann posted a comment on Saturday 27th March 2010 11:58am
Why, oh why, did I have to read this? Well written, funny, serious, engaging and infuriatingly unfinished stories are the bane of my existence! How will they take out Voldemonkey? Will Dumbledoofus get his comeuppance? Will Harry and Ginny dance the horizontal mambo? And what about Ninja Pirate Llamas?
Thanks for an awesome tale and I look forward to future chapters!
Renzo7 posted a comment on Saturday 27th March 2010 10:10am
Very good work, as usual. I particularly liked the "something in my eye" line and scene.
Keep up the good work, guys. I hope you update soon.
Patches posted a comment on Saturday 27th March 2010 1:53am
This is an excellent chapter. I am glad that Harry worked it out with Ginny's, Jean's and Xavier's help. Dumbledore seems determined to drive Harry away from him. I'm glad that Harry told him straight out that he didn't plan on "saving" a bunch of murdering bigots. He is trying to survive. Of course Dumbledore "thinks he is right and everyone should listen to him." That isn't going to happen now. I'm glad Xavier was able to take the hard road and ordered the Carrows demise. They were the worst if they were anything like "the book of fan fiction passed off as JKR's"! It is great that Harry is sharing more with his closest friends. Expecially Ginny! I was surprised he shared as much as his did wtih Daphne and Tracy but I'm sure it helped them to feel better about their decision to share the Slytherin girls' feelings about Voldemort and their father's abuses toward their mothers and themselves. Is Pansy going to be saved or sacrificed to Voldemort? I look forward to how you work that out. The prank on Snape and Draco was great. I sure Snape is going to demand punnishment but how can he prove who did it? There was no sign of entry! Thanks so much for continuing this story. I'm sure you know how much we fans like this story. Thank you for writing. I'll keep a lookout for your next update. pms
dorodrigo posted a comment on Friday 26th March 2010 8:49pm
Loving it. Hope you update it soon...
Ricky Gene Thompson posted a comment on Wednesday 31st March 2010 5:13pm