texasranger_10 posted a comment on Saturday 17th November 2007 10:53pm

i don't care how many times i read this i get a great big kick out of it. sometimes i think they are that stupid in the books when i read them again. you are by far one of the best fanfic writers on the net.

vasilis01 posted a comment on Saturday 17th November 2007 10:52am

Excellent, funny story. Good work.

Peregrine829 posted a comment on Monday 12th November 2007 6:14pm

I haven't laughed this hard in weeks! Absolutely brilliant!

Alex Austin posted a comment on Friday 9th November 2007 1:37pm

You need a sequel to explain where the Cake went. That could certainly make for an interesting story.

Otherwise, I loved the one-shot. Short, cute, and very effective in its implications.

Renzo7 posted a comment on Monday 5th November 2007 11:17am

That was AWESOME!!! hilarious, thanks for sharing it. Keep up the good work, I hope to see more of your work soon.

Papa MidNite posted a comment on Monday 5th November 2007 4:32am

Great story guys

GinnyLover posted a comment on Sunday 28th October 2007 7:35am

Very nice story and unlike the TA one doesnt have any potential for a sequel really :)

Phoenix_Joey posted a comment on Thursday 25th October 2007 9:36am

That was the greatest thing since... well thats just the greatest EVER! I was laughing my ruddy arse off...

Agramahad posted a comment on Tuesday 16th October 2007 12:32pm

Sheer. Bloody. Genius.

Anneila posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 10:13pm

I haven't had this much fun reading a fic in a loooooong time. I very nearly choked on the candy i was eating at one point.
Absolutely wonderful is all i can say.
More fics like this!

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Monday 15th October 2007 5:06pm

LOL at the disclaimer, which as usual set the tone for the story. Somehow I suspected as soon as I read the letter reached the Order that Harry had written it to get a response from them rather than to contact LV. Bellatrix being almost as amusing as a box of puppies was a great line. Using kitchen utensils as murder weapons was also excellent.

I giggled my head off at the Snape Dumbledore Mcgonagall trysts and leather bustier. I laughed even harder at Harry as king of north America and wanting a redhead. This is a riot. Great story.

jdcox61 posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 10:50am

Nice, but what's with the Llamas?

loneravenwolf posted a comment on Monday 8th October 2007 4:48am

Fantastic. Shows exactly how cunning and manipulative harry can be.

Malehorntaildragon posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 9:29pm

This really needs a follow up. It's a great fic, and a follow up could be hilarious.

Tommy posted a comment on Sunday 7th October 2007 11:49am

... you must love Monty Python with all those Llama jokes... :P Great work by the way! Looking forward to your next updates.

Sincerely,

Tommy A.L.
aka
Fanfix

candibabydoll posted a comment on Sunday 30th September 2007 3:02am

hi! i've been reading your stories for awhile now; although i didn't review, and i just have one tiny little question for you both:
what on earth is with all the llamas?????

yours llama-ingly,
candibabydolll. x

gorilla 53 posted a comment on Monday 24th September 2007 10:25am

Hilarious

slickrcbd posted a comment on Wednesday 19th September 2007 11:05am

This was a really funny piece of work, but I did spot an anachronism. You mentioned "googling". If this is suppost to be a post-fifth year fic, set in the summer of '96, Google wouldn't have existed. It didn't become popular until around 2000. Infoseek, Yahoo, Lycos, ALtavista, Webcrawler, and Excite were the major search engines. Furthermore, the internet was not as widely available in homes in '96. It was starting to get there, especially when AOL offered it, but not the everyday tool it is today.

Also, given what happened with Umbridge, I can't believe the kids didn't try to break the vial of veritaserum.

slickrcbd posted a comment on Wednesday 19th September 2007 11:03am

This was a really funny piece of work, but I did spot an anachronism. You mentioned "googling". If this is suppost to be a post-fifth year fic, set in the summer of '96, Google wouldn't have existed. It didn't become popular until around 2000. Infoseek, Yahoo, Lycos, ALtavista, Webcrawler, and Excite were the major search engines. Furthermore, the internet was not as widely available in homes in '96. It was starting to get there, especially when AOL offered it, but not the everyday tool it is today.

KenF posted a comment on Saturday 15th September 2007 9:22pm

I knew he was up to something. I just knew it. And there it was.

I keep rereading this one and laughing harder each time.

Thanks!