Mutant Storm
Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
By Bobmin
Reviews
Shayne Rich posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 9:35am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Excellent story! I am never disappointed in your writing. Thanks very much for sharing.
ryan reliford posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 9:31am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
I have read and love all your books. You have a great talent and I thank you for sharing it.
Anois posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 9:11am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Normally I don’t leave reviews. I’m not into the mechanics of English and grammar, and so I can’t review on that basis, that leaves only "Nice/Good/Great…. (you get the idea) chapter to say.
However your last comment of "And finally to all those people that leave reviews that simply say "Update soon!" Knock it off. We know where you live and have sent five dollars in your names to the International Terrorist Retirement fund, then we sent that information to the department of homeland defense. Don't bother trying to run, they are coming for you.’ Caused me to laugh so hard, I had to write something.
Let them come, I’ll simply have them read the story also and then they be back after you for more updates also. Lol.
Seriously, I really enjoy your story and look forward to new chapters. Thanks.
Jujuberry posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 9:10am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Great chapter- I'm pleased to find out that Dumbledore isn't quite as malicious as I thought he'd be at the beginning of the story (merely naive and perhaps a bit incompetent). Thanks for the fun surprise! I can't wait to see how the students of Hogwarts react to Harry (negatively I'm guessing) when he returns. Also excited for a reconciliation with Hermione and Ginny.
Great chapter, thanks for another great update!
BJH posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 8:56am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
You know, I think Dumbledore's entire mindset can be summed up in one line from this chapter: "While he would allow Snape some liberties, he would never condone the man hurting a student, even Harry." "...even Harry" not "especially Harry." He sees Harry not as more special than other students but, in fact, less. Harry is less human to Dumbledore possibly because DD focuses so intently on the Prophecy that it dominates his view of Harry. He said that it is only important that V believes in the Prophecy; WRONG! The most important thing is that Dumbledore believes in the Prophecy and Harry isn't a human being, he is merely a vehicle of that Prophecy. Less than human.
BJH
Mary Morley posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 8:31am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
I am sincerely hoping that something very nasty happens to Umbitch. This is shaping up nicely, you two always do such a wonderful job.
Illusia posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 7:43am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
I loved this. Absolutely a good choice putting this in HP world rather than x-men. Snape surprised me a bit and Jean as well. I didn't think she would be this... outspoken about Harry.
MIrifleman posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 7:21am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
I constantly re-read all your stories and look forward to when you post. Amazingly, I anticipate your author notes as much as the stories themselves! Keep up the excellent work!
xohorsegal752ox posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 7:17am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Great story so far.
Keep it up!!!
jgkitarel posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 7:01am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
I see that you have found the biggest headache of a crossover, which is why I never tried to write one.
My writing is bad enough without adding in that, especially when you combine two series that don't work too well together for anything to allow for a suspension of disbelief.
Anyway, nice chapter, and having Harry see things in a not so positive light is highly believable. I've dealt with mental trauma before, and I know from personal experience that it takes a bit of time to recover.
Ginny's reaction to Ron's indescretion is interesting. We know she has a temper, and she was in full Witch mode here. Ron may survive, but when she's done with him, he's going to wish she had done something more permanent.
Heh, Harry and Umbridge again. Add Jean into the mix and the poor woman might as well commit suicide. Neither of them will be that merciful.
Well, keep it up, and update it when you decide to. ^^
Damon Ring posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 6:24am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Brilliant as usual, one of the best cross-overs of any genre. As a long term X-Men fan (oh so long before HP) i love any story that can do such honour to my two favourite bunch of characters.
What type of Dragon did Harry discover, as all dragons in canon are winged (not a dig, just curious for the extra info).
Update when the hell you want if the chapters are all gonna be this good, i can wait.
Virtutis Fortuna Comes (Fortune is the companion of valour).
the madcap magician
mjames42 posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 6:18am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Yet again, another fantastic chapter. I'm kinda disappointed that Dumbledore won't be recieving a good old fashioned country butt-whoopin at the hands of Harry and co., but hey, can't have everything. Brilliant work!
ridgeback77 posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 6:00am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Another excellent chapter you two.
pav posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 5:57am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Another great and mighty chapter.
Liked and loved everything except the dragon part - a bit too much of Earthsea there.
I am too busy watching that internationally televised fanfic where Kingsley Shacklebolt and Mad-Eye Moody compete for the American Ministry of Magic so no call for an update from me.Not yet.
larry freshour posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 5:50am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Great,Great,Great.The best story out there in a very lon time.Keep up the good work.A very decaded reader.
jdcox61 posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 5:50am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Good work guys. I want to say bravo for not going all crazy and taking that whole box of super-powered harry cliches and setting it in Harry's lap saying "Here you go, pick which ones you'd like, take 'em all if you want!" I try to read some of those and by about the third chapter I'm saying this is so ridiculous, I can't even read it. I must say about the only X-men knowledge I have comes from the movies, so what you're working with is just fine. I think this story is great. You're work is always well written, and this is something new so I eagerly read each new chapter when I get to work. Good job you two!
RNCybergate posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 5:45am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
All right...this is looking great...as usual...
I see Harry has made preparations to 'protect' himself from professors like Snape and rightly so, but what about Umbitch?
I take it he has no idea that she will be returning for the next year (strange, since with the curse on the DADA post I thought the curse wouldn't allow the same professor to teach the subject for two years in a row.)...
Anyway...
I take it Harry has no idea that Umbridge it teaching this year...otherwise I'd have expected him to drop that class too.
Or at the very least have a plan ready to combat her.
Now that Harry is officially a dark creature she will be against him even more.
We all know how much Umby hates half breeds, Dark creatures etc...
I can hardly wait to see/read what will happen when these two enemies meet each others again in class.
I really hope though that Harry won’t let her use the Blood quills again...if she does please do us all (and the world) a favor and take her out.
Preferably in an effective and gory way.
*smiles* :)
Personally I wouldn't be against a full scale ministry mutiny or a wizzarding civil war.
"Hell hath no fury than a mutant scorned"
(especially when that mutant is called Harry Potter)
I'd love to see the wizarding worlds reactions if they were to hear Harry tell them 'to bugger off and that he won't help them against Voldemort because they really aren't worth saving and so hardly worth his time'... (Just as long as Voldy leaves him alone of that is of course)
Might be a good way to get them to all swear binding wizzarding oaths to change all those stupid laws and be nice to muggles/muggleborns and all magical creatures/half breeds etc etc in exchange for Harry's help.
If Voldemort is clever he would simply leave him and his family alone and concentrate on the rest of the wizzarding world.
Besides since Harry is the only one who can defeat him, if Harry doesn't fight him then old Voldy can't be defeated and is in all scenes completely immortal.
As far as I see it the so called light side is doing a far greater job at destroying them selves than Voldemort could ever do by losing their only real weapon.
I wouldn't sabotage their efforts if I where Voldemort...I'd simply let them continue and keep out of Harry's way altogether.
Dustin Johannes posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 4:42am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
And finally to all those people that leave reviews that simply say "Update soon!" Knock it off. We know where you live and have sent five dollars in your names to the International Terrorist Retirement fund, then we sent that information to the department of homeland defense. Don't bother trying to run, they are coming for you.<--Subtle. Nice and subtle.
Great chapter, Alyx and Bob. Favorite part here was when Molly and Hermione realized Ginny had 'found' a wand. Was almost hoping to find out what happened in the ensuing confrontaion between Ginny and Ron.
Thanks for this chapter, and here's looking to your next.
mercurydreams posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 4:19am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
As always, an awsome chapter and i can't wait until the next one! Thanks
agouraki posted a comment on Thursday 28th August 2008 9:37am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!