Mutant Storm
Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
By Bobmin
Reviews
makotochi posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 3:26pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Update soon and make my donation $10.
Excellent story so far and I have a lot of questions that I look forward to being answered in future chapters.
Amamama posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 3:18pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Weehee! Gods, this is a magnificent ride. Unlike some of your other readers, I have absolutely no knowledge of the X-men. I've seen the logo, that's it. And wen I last hit a games/comics store I found an issue of X-files with Jean on the front cover and understood why you had her as Lily's twin sister. Which is a brilliant idea. And her abilities are perfect for helping Harry.
I look forward to finding out what Ginny did to Ron, but I do wonder - why doesn't she (or Hermione) write to Harry? If I were her (which I'm obviously not) I would've been rather quick to tell this good friend and object of my fancy that my brother is a sodding idiot, and begged he not put me in the same group. Well, you have your reasons I suppose, and I look forward to seeing the story unravel.
Thanks for sharing, I loved every minute of this. A great way to start the day!
Wolfric posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 3:12pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
While I share the update soon sentiment to some extent, most people are anxious to increase pleasurable experiences, I consider it quite rude to make demands of people who are providing those pleasurable experiences solely for our mutual benefit and recieving no remuneration for their considerable efforts. That being said this is another marvelous effort on your part. I find your characterization of Harry to be spot on; powerful, inteligent but not wise beyond his years and struggling to overcome the damage from his horrible past, quite believable. Also believable is that slimey bastard Snape, I do hope a suitable end is in the offing. As for Ron I think that his immaturity is his most prominant characteristic and it is believable for him to self destruct as you have portrayed or for him to have some formative experience and grow up a bit being more the stalwart friend as he is sometimes portrayed elswhere. Now that I have excised this pedantic impulse for a while. Thank you so much for your efforts in writing great stories and sharing them with us. W.
James13 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 2:43pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Wow, so obviously not canon, but still, a lot of very interesting possibilities.
I'm very much looking forward to seeing how Harry deals with his friends.
Enough action to be interesting and enough characterization to be worthwhile...well done!
PS: update soon!
Soothingmadness posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 2:20pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Wow, you two are odd. Good story I like the way you have blended the two worlds together without dragging every obscure marvel character you could think of, like some authors who have tried this crossover.
Michael Powers posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 2:18pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Excellent chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Could Logan recover from the killing curse? It'd be funny if Wormtail used the AK on Wolverine, step over the body, and then get three claws through the back of the head. Just a thought. :)
Ronnie McMains posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 2:04pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
You know and I know that even if Harry doesn't have a single lesson or any other reason to be around Snape, Snape won't let it alone. He'll find Harry at some point when he thinks Harry's alone, just to twist the knife.
At which point Harry will spread Snape over several non-contiguous countries.
And Umbridge, of course. Has anyone mentioned to Jean or the others that she's teaching Defense again? The Defense curse is about to strike a little late (or would you consider it early?). Somehow I doubt she'll get the second 'hem' out before Harry nails her.
For a minute, I thought that perhaps Harry wouldn't be so hasty, not wanting to be considered 'Dark'. But the wizarding world already considers him 'Dark', just because he's a mutant, and he's not really caring what they think anymore, is he?
Anyway, keep up the good work, and if you have to donate money to a terrorist retirement fund in my name, make sure it's one that insures they're permanently retired, yeah?
dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 2:00pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Update soon! *snicker* Sorry, but the International Terrorist Retirement fund is a seriously neglected charity and they really do deserve your support! For just dollars a day you can provide an aged terrorist strychnine for his daily pigeon feeding at the park.
I know you have to send Harry back to England (or think up a completely original plotline) but you really need to work on the reasons for doing so. As is the reasons are rather crappy and read like telling a young Anne Frank that she needs to return to Nazi occupied Germany to face her fears!
timbits200 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 1:56pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
I have to say that so far the story is going great. I can't wait to see what happens next when I reach the end of an update. Also, I may just not remember, but have Harry's mutant powers been explained and will there be any interaction between Logan and characters like Snape or the Malfoys?
ladyimmortal posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 1:44pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Woot!
I was so excited to see another chapter of this story. It's very nice to see Dumbledore being more reasonable - and to see Jean getting to the heart of the matter with Snape. YAY JEAN!
I'm wondering how much trouble Umbridge is going to be causing - or allowed to cause... methinks she's not going to get along so well with Jean....
Ezra'eil posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 1:43pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
After reading the AN many of the questions I had are now not needed :P
Though I would like to know when HG starts coming into play...
Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 12:49pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Ah, wonderful. I like that you are taking a realistic approach to the reactions of the core people, on both sides of the story thus far. unfortunately, that is a rather rare thing in the catalog of stories out there, and I'm not just talking fanfiction. Man, what would I give for Batman to have just killed the Joker, or just allowed him to die, in the last movie. No one should be that terminally stupid.
I'm sitting back, waiting for September 2nd when Harry learns that Umbridge will, once again, be his defense teacher. I'll pop open a beer and enjoy the fireworks. Will she even last the day? Of course, Jean will learn of the toad's posting on September 1st or earlier, so we'll see what happens before Harry even gets there. Maybe Hermione will gain some points in Harry's books through independent action to remove the menace. Of course, I have to contemplate that she will still be around for the ripe plot she offers. I can imagine her reaction to having Harry, a mutant wizard, in her class. Although, I can also imagine the breaking point might be her treatment of the other mutant, the witch Creevy. I think Harry would react more strongly to verbal attacks against someone so innocent more fervently than attacks against himself.
Thank you for writing.
Mike (MoA)
redhandgrunt posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 12:47pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Good chapter. I wonder what Little Creevey's powers will be.
flar posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 12:30pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Great story, I am really enjoying it. I like how you have addressed some issues that most authors ignore(Harrys abusive past and Snape mind raping him. Keep up the good work.
Jason9 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 12:14pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
oh, yea, I forgot to "give" you all the metophorical stuff you seem to like. So if you need a mechanical engineer for any reason, "world domination, injection molding, kicking ass" just let me know, I'm all over it.
-J
ClaudiaLilly posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 12:13pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
I'm really enjoying this story and look forward to each chapter as it comes! Now I'm looking forward to Logan meeting Snape and Umbridge, considering what each of them did to Harry I'm sure Logan with a little help from Jean, Scott, and Charles will show them the error of their ways. ESPECIALLY once Snape and Umbridge open their nasty mouths, Logan is the type to remove the offending tongues and not care about it.
Jason9 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 12:12pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Hey, awesome story so far! I'm blasted outta my mind and I'm still up reading your fanfic knowing I'm gonna be hungover as hell tomorrow at work, how much more of a glowing review do you want? Keep up the good work, and take your time and all that shit. AWESOME STORY!!!
-J
p.s. I'm kinda known for drunk reviews, just take the good outta it. :-)
morriganscrow posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 12:06pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Another wonderful chapter - very Harry-centric, with a much clearer image of his mind{and heart}set.
Loved the scene with the dragon - how that unfolds will be interesting.
Hermione rocks!
So, and I can hardly believe I'm saying this, does Ginny.
As for the $5 thing - knock yourselves out...but only after you UPDATE!!
Dagaz posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 11:55am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!
Excellent. This is on par with your other stories. I would love to see a major magical showdown with Dumbledore before he and Harry agree to work together if that can ever happen.
Dagaz
jakjakattk posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 3:31pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!