Dervish posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 7:02am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Wow of all the things i was not expecting today. Thank you for making my workday better. I liked wolverines message to dumbledore and personally i think Jean should have turned severus inside out god forbid should Wolverine meet the man.

I will say i am most disappointed with being left with only the thought of ginny finding a wand. i want to read the scene where she destroys her brother for being stupid.

Keep up the good work

Marie2 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 6:55am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

I am really enjoying this story. How much longer till Harry interacts with old friends fireworks???? Anyway great writing as usual can't wait to read more. Thank you both for relieving the boring nights whilst my hubby is out.

redjacobson posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 6:52am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Wonderful Chapter! I'll admit, I would have been absolutely thrilled to see Jean turn Snape's brain to tapioca, but it probably would have caused more problems than the momentary satisfaction would be worth *GRIN*

Correct me if I'm wrong, but Harry isn't aware that Umbitch is still teaching, is he? Can I get front row tickets for that fight? I'll even open a popcorn stand!

Also, I don't know if this was deliberate, but Grindelwald's first name, at least according to the books was Gellert. Not a major issue, but I was curious why the change.

Looking forward to the next installment, and hope you two are having good days.

red

smhalcyon posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 6:36am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Another excellent addition to the story and I am enjoying it greatly. Keep up the good work and don't let the nay-sayers get to you.

Michael63 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 6:34am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Loved, absolutely LOVED Hermione's and Ginny's reaction to Ron. I hope Hermione sticks to her guns about Ron.

I have read very few stories where Dumbledore can actually except that Snape's hatred of Harry is genuine and that Snape is not to be trusted. I'm very interested in seeing how this plot point develops. This version of Dumbledore appears to not be evil, merely very misguided. Of course it's still early, so we will see if that holds true. Your Dumbledore in Sunset/Sunrise ended up very differently from how he began.

I love the focus on Harry and Harry Potter characters with just a few X-Men in starring roles. If you had to pick just a few X-Men, than Jean, Scott, Logan and Xavier are definitely the ones to focus on.

Thanks for sharing, and I look forward to the next chapter. I've recently been re-reading Sunrise, so I suppose that will have to tide me over until then.

Kimr posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 6:24am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Like all your stories, I eagerly await each new update. Your stories are definitely worth the wait!

The interactions between the characters and backgrounds of both worlds is excellently handled in my opinion. You have introduced a small select group of X-Men which does not overload the story and keeps it HP-centric.

With regards to Harry's slander in the wizarding press, couldn't you have something done in this regard, maybe Harry buying up and then shutting down the prophet or perhaps getting International wizarding publications in to condemn the British government and people.

Also the development of the Harry/Ginny relationship is excellently handled, whereby Ginny has to make a supreme effort to earn Harry's trust again.

Kruste posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 6:09am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Very good, the more I read, the more I like it. Just a little Correction: I'm from Germany(this is why you'll find that my English isn't that good), and I can tell you that Adolf Hitler was written with an 'f' at the End of 'Adolf'. Just to bring it back to the genuine state.

(If someone comes to the Idea that I'm a Nazi or something: Back off. I'm a strictly Antifascist being.)

Orion posted a comment on Wednesday 27th August 2008 5:57am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Great! After the first two posts were on the same day of consecutive months, I was a little disappointed (no fault of yours, I was the one silly enough to see a pattern when there was none). Now not just one, but two updates this month? Wonderful.

I'm thrilled with how Hermione reacted to Ron, and I look forward to Harry slowly starting to understand that not everyone is out to get him.