Joris Windels posted a comment on Monday 12th January 2009 8:14pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

although the author note forbade this stricktly, I will ask you for updates. Only because I like the story and would like to see it continued. I have no idea whether it is discontinued or abandonned atm, but hope that it is just waiting for an update due to you working on other stories first.

I know this isn't much of a review but it is what I'm thinking/hoping after reading this tale.

madmanhg posted a comment on Monday 12th January 2009 4:25pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

awesome story

johnny_bravo posted a comment on Monday 12th January 2009 1:29pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

lol.....i liked the thing you said about update soon. It's a great story. I'm just wondering how often do you update this story?

Thanks,
Johnny

Roozette posted a comment on Monday 12th January 2009 11:36am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

I LOVE this! Must say Harry/Ginny is not my cup of tea, but, being the slightly educated individual I pretend to be, I read your warnings and read on. I am so glad I did, as this is interesting and fun.

You do a great job of keeping people in character, as well as allowing believable time for grief and recovery. Don't worry about not addin "so-and-so," your detail is rich enough to keep me happy :)

Lots of Love!
Roo

blade2688 posted a comment on Monday 12th January 2009 10:01am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Hey when is the story going to be updated, i am on the edge of my seat!

Sandra Smith posted a comment on Monday 12th January 2009 4:51am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

This crossover is very good and I'm going to enjoy reading more

AgRose001 posted a comment on Monday 12th January 2009 2:33am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

This is great. Please update soon.

KSK posted a comment on Sunday 11th January 2009 10:44pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Great story! I wonder if you guys are alright! We haven't heard from you in a while, and I just wanted to make sure that you guys didn't get the Winter Blues, or coughs/ sneezes, flu, etc. Write when you can, but hopefully you will let us know that you are alright.

Have a great new year!!

DAUFahnder posted a comment on Saturday 10th January 2009 10:39pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Hi!

Hope you get your health back soon, so you can update this great fic!

Malchior posted a comment on Monday 5th January 2009 8:13pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

I've glanced over and read a few X-men/HP cross overs and I'm glad to say yours is the best so far. The handful of others I've come across tend to make Harry either some super mutant and ignore magic as if it doesn't effect them, or he and the X-men practically dominate the whole Wizarding world because they can't fight back. Yours is leaning a little toward the second kind, but that is more because the Wizarding world has little or no experience with them and don't know what they can or cannot do.

I loved your idea of the runic magic and how any one can use it. It always seems when people start thinking of things like runes or arithmancy, they think it's only used for wards, in the case of runes, or in some strange way using something like the Quadratic formula would give you the wand movements and incantation of a spell (I firmly believe they weren't thinking when they came up with that part).

I wonder if Harry and Hank will ever develop a true science/magic invention? For instance, using Harry's runic battery ideas and other runes on the X-men gear so that they no longer require maintenance. I'd imagine an ever lasting battery in the Blackbird and runes to magically repair the ship when damaged and even runes for magical stealth would be much appreciated. Or even some automated defenses spelled to fire Stunners, Recutors, Tickling Hexs (Can't fight well when laughing uncontrollably) etc. depending on the situation would be very good for the X-men. I mean they have a new untapped power here that I'm sure Harry would be all too willing to provide for his new family. Another possibility is portable Protego Shield generators, again powered by Runic magic. I'd imagine some of these would be impossible (in your world), but then again, it may be possible with the True Silver Harry has.

Oh ya, update soon and $10 please.

Lordamnesia posted a comment on Sunday 4th January 2009 9:56pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

I have always been extremely leery of any X-men/HP xovers, because frankly, with all the different X-Men they often get ridiculous and make Harry move entirely into that universe, and give him god powers. That being said, FANTASTIC JOB! You have kept it simplistic in form, the mutant contact limited in scope (not that they are a bad thing, but like I said, its easy to get carried away), and didn't give Harry mutant god powers! Very enjoyable, likable, and easy to sympathize with characters! Keep up the fantastic work!

And just because i love the AN at the end of the 4th chapter, Update SOOOOOOON! (Oh, and I would like my 5$ sent to the Suicide Bombers Retirement Fund, if there is a distinction on where you send them).

C. Harris posted a comment on Friday 2nd January 2009 4:52pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

But if I say, "Update soon please!" does that get me off the hook? I look forward to seeing where the mark of the dragons will go in this story. I don't think I've ever read about that before.

Robert Robinson posted a comment on Thursday 1st January 2009 10:37am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Hi Bob and Alyx. I folloed your Sunset series, and absolutely loved it. I have always been an avid X-men fan, right from my mid teenage years until now. There haven't been many stories that have successfully been able to mix Harry Potter and the X-men, and do it well. Thankfully, you 2 have managed to do what many others have only tried to accomplish. My congradulations to you both. Now, I'm not gonna inquire as to when the next update will be, because I do know how real life and writers block can quickly put the kibosh on a story. I will say though that I hope that the long wait since the last update isn't because of Bob's health. I seem to remember something about that from the Sunset series. Once again, love your stories..., and keep up the great work!

Shadalarion2 posted a comment on Tuesday 30th December 2008 4:46am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Decided to reread this again. Looking forward to seeing more interesting chapters.

Happy New Year

marb_66854 posted a comment on Friday 26th December 2008 11:33pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

I hope to see where your muse takes you with this. I have realy enjoyed your stories and hope you coninue

Xyverz posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd December 2008 10:10pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

This is a FANTASTIC story! I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. :-D

mulligan posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd December 2008 3:19am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

I'm conflicted. Part of me was the 15 min of fame achieved by Generic Reader 6 in PotP, while another part doesn't want to be hacked to pieces.

What the hell, I can always be put back together...

Great Cahpter, rite more! Upd8 soon!

coronal posted a comment on Saturday 20th December 2008 6:35am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

"update soon!"

just kidding.

I've just gone back for a re-read of this story, and really find I enjoy it, as I have with the rest of your works. This Harry seems a bit more emotionally traumatized, and psychologically unstable than many stories show, which I think adds realism and vulnerability to a character who is already powerful and will become more so.

I'm really looking forward to seeing what will happen next, especially with Jean teaching muggle studies, and, although I know you've mentioned that the other juvenile x-men won't really be taking part in this tale, I still hope you may decide to change your minds and open up the world a little bit more...eventually. AFter all, Harry may end up fighting both wars, in which case, his relationship to the other x-men may prove important.

Anyways, you two have a good holiday, if you can.

wolfey posted a comment on Thursday 18th December 2008 1:33am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

um I love the story but is the next chapter coming out soon?

ladyimmortal posted a comment on Wednesday 17th December 2008 10:45am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Any chance of an update anytime this millenia?