Alex00 posted a comment on Sunday 14th December 2008 2:16pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Awesome story so far.

thughes_99 posted a comment on Saturday 13th December 2008 9:40am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

i just have to say that im impressed with this story. Most of the xovers ive read that mix HP/whatever pull too much from one side or the other but you have a very nice balance and a good story going. Looking forward to the next post!!!

qwikshot posted a comment on Wednesday 10th December 2008 11:25am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

i LOVE this crossing of the potter & x-men universes and can hardly wait for an update

so, the creepy brothers have a mutant sister? this promises to be quite interesting, as well as the reactions of snape and the death nibblers

viva la mutants!

(thanx for sharing your wonderful tale thus far ... qwik)

Rage and Light posted a comment on Monday 8th December 2008 3:48am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Hey this has been quite a good start to the fisrt harry potter x man crossover I've seen and it's very good, I've been very impressed with how you're joined the two worlds and I hope you will continue this story soon

david

Ossindie posted a comment on Saturday 6th December 2008 10:01pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Well. Normally, I don't read crossovers. It would take a lot to convince me to actually start reading one, and in this case, it was only because I love most of your other stories that I even thought about giving this one a shot. And I'm glad I did.

The lines between the two universes are blurred just enough for the 'transaction' of Mutants into the Wizarding World to be possible, and yet defined enough for the WW not to lose any of its original charm and slip into something as obscure as the multiple crossovers I've seen some people do. *shudders* I've actually witnessed a Potter/Buffy/LOTR/Mutant crossover... I still have nightmares from just skimming through the monstrosity.

I do hope the girls in the disclaimer were properly paid and that you ensure all your employees have their basic needs covered. Other than that, I find your disclaimers to be quite entertaining, although my fiance is horrified. Then again, he was horrified at reading through two passages of Candide, so I knew I shouldn't expect much... philistine. *scowls*

Larry Lansday posted a comment on Saturday 6th December 2008 8:38am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Very nice chapter, I really enjoyed the Dragon scenes. Hagrid is quite the key player isn't he? (I haven't seen that in many fics, he's often overlooked and a very background character.)
This is a very well written cross over and I will be pleased when more comes out, but please take your time and enjoy the writing. :)

So long and thanks for all the fish.

-Larry

Harriverse posted a comment on Friday 5th December 2008 9:35am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Personally I think everyone should just bow down and worship you two. The advantage of reading someone else's completed work is that you get to see the whole with all the foreshadowing explained and red herrings triggered. I love crossovers and I think you show an amazing knowledge of the X-verse. You have such a wonderfully blended balance of dialog and exposition that I couldn't imagine more characters because it would detract from the focus on Harry. Please don't make a donation in my name and understand that plea's for updates are just another form of worship from those of us who like your 'verse better than the one we usually have to hang around in. It's also the easiest form of review for those who want to let you know they love your work but were so enraptured by your golden prose and lyrical conversations that they had absolutely nothing to complain/remark/or question after reading your updates. It's also hard to hold details in your head when updates are so far apart and the Potterverse is so big to play in. I hope RL is going well and I think I've read everything you two have currently published. Arggg--Your endnote made me loose my compliments on parts of your story.....P.S. to Alyx--Do you really want to see two old, out of shape men mud wrestle??? Personally when reading I replace the current Alan Rickman with the version from Robin Hood--minus the gotee!!!!

Tammy Driver posted a comment on Monday 1st December 2008 9:24pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

I normally don't read cross-overs, but this one is really good. I can't wait to see what happens next...<G>

wolfey posted a comment on Friday 28th November 2008 8:46pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

um I really like this story and am kinda not above begging for the next update. There arent many viable, believeable xmen/potter crossovers. (now if only you could do a yugioh gx/harry potter crossover lol jk jk, dont want to push you like that and make you stop writing all together)

nth_x posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2008 5:56pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Oh boy, I was going to grade papers this evening and go to bed early...then I opened this story :(. Very brilliant! I'm amazed that Umbridge's return to Hogwarts hasn't been brought to Harry/X-men's attention. I suppose Dumbledore may be holding it as some sort of ace in the hole, but it would seem like McGonnagal would have mentioned it in her talk with Jean, or Poppy. If the Welcome feast is the first Time Jean hears about it, I'm wondering what fireworks will follow ;) Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.

makieus posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2008 7:14am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

I hope the two of you are doing well. Short of homemade doughnuts, there isn't anything that I can do to help out. (Lovely economy right now isn't it)
As for this chapter, just going to say great job. Your grammar is great, no ms-spelled words that I could tell (Product of public education system) and the writing clear, concise, and very entertaining. (Most important) Looking forward to your next chapter, but won't pressure you. (Although if you want, I have access to a Hyperbolic chamber where you can apply high pressure....)

solar1 posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2008 12:55am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Hi Guys,
You haven't updated for quite a while which is really not like you at all... I really hope that you are both okay. All the best

Brady1 posted a comment on Friday 21st November 2008 10:34pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

whens the next chapter comin

fountaam posted a comment on Friday 21st November 2008 2:04pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Hoping you guys are okay.

I'm interested in seeing what Neville and Luna say to Harry, and am also hoping that Jean discovers Umbridge before Harry shows up in a Defense class.

:)

Mark Armitage posted a comment on Friday 21st November 2008 1:22am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Just want to say that I really like this new story of yours, as well as some of the others such as the Sunset/Sunrise Over Britain series, Parallels and The Power of the Press etc. I was wondering however, is there going to be any more to the Wizards Fall series, as it would be interesting to see what happens after the thousand years is up, as well as what happens on the island in the century they spend there. Cheers. Mark Armitage.

Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Thursday 20th November 2008 10:37pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

I really like this story so far.

It is truly amazing.

However, it is a shame that it has not been updated in a while.

Grace Cole posted a comment on Wednesday 19th November 2008 7:32pm for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

Is there a way to find out a timeline as to how the next chapter is coming? You combined two of my favorite series and I want to know what happens. Thank you for writing this.

runnerman87 posted a comment on Friday 14th November 2008 4:15am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

I've been enjoying this story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. In fact, I have been for a while now, and I'm wondering if there's an estimated timeline. I understand that there are always things that crop up in real life, especially around this time of year, but I'm curious when I might see more from this universe.

xyvortex posted a comment on Friday 14th November 2008 4:10am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

I like it, quite alot. I started reading sunset a year or so ago and thoroughly enjoyed it. I skipped the sequel because, frankly, the first one kind of stood on its own.

I love what you've done with Harry here and how complex his relationship with his friends has become. As i started this final chapter, I was going to review and ask if there would be any hints of the canon Snape who was forced to play the role of villain to the only child of a woman he held so dear. Suffice it to say, I hold no illusions now... he remains a greasy git as always.

until the next chapter, good day!

Karanbir Singh posted a comment on Friday 14th November 2008 1:25am for Chapter 04 - The Mutants are coming!

79 days since last update. Read this story many time now. Getting bored, when are you going to update. UPDATE SOON PPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ..................................