Sunset Over Britain
Actions and Reactions
By Bobmin
Reviews
Johnny posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 11:46am for Actions and Reactions
I absolutely love all of your stories. I was worried when one day I checked up on Sunset Over Britain and it wasn't there. Alas I was elated to have found it. It definatly is one of my all time favorites. It amazing how much effort you guys put into this story. I'm a writer that is progressing so when I read your stories it left me in awe at how talented you are. Thank you for writing Sunset Over Britain and your other stories.
Johnny
James Barber posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 11:31am for Actions and Reactions
Hey went to check on one of my favorite stories on fanfiction.net and found to my horror that the administrators of that site pulled your story! What gives with that site there have been quite a few great stories and authors that I have noticed been pulled in the last 6 months or so? Its like they dont really want people to leave fanfiction on thier site. Hell take the last crap about the lyrics people were putting in their fics, hell all the ones I saw had the name of the writer or band under it, what gives?
anyway thanks for finding another place to put this great story.
P.S. did you know that fanfiction used to accept NC 17 stories but not anymore even though they have the M rating on thier site, but that is really only for mild "R" rating sex scenes that aren't graphic at all.
Nathan Swift posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 11:09am for Actions and Reactions
I was told about your story in a review of one of my stories, and I just had to come here ans read it. Very very good story so far. I find it interesting that you have made Harry super powerful like many others, but you actually made him powerful enough that he wasn't Voldemort's equal anymore, so he couldn't fight him. I had never considered that before, but it is a very interesting idea. Good luck with the next chapters. I really look forward to reading them.
dave posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 10:34am for Actions and Reactions
kool story... benn keeping up with it ever since like... ferever
update soon k?
Mark posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 10:13am for Actions and Reactions
Hmm, things are speeding up. The global implications of Voldemort's takeover of Britain will be profound.
Poor Terry, another subject to the cowardly attacks. I'm beginning to get a sneaky suspicion as to who is actually perpetrating the attacks. And I think that when Harry does learn the their identities, all hell is going to break loose.
Interesting that Harry's powers have spiked and not dropped, like he's not hiding his higher level of magical potential anymore. Bet this makes a few of his detractors catch a case of the squirts. Of course, someone (Dumbledore?) will inevitably point to this as proof he's doing dark rituals to build his power. Dingbats.
Keep up the great work! Oh saw, when are we going to see Ron pulled to bits by Monster Trucks in a disclaimer? ;)
MarinePotterFan posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 9:57am for Actions and Reactions
Well after all of the craziness, what do you do you give us a cliffie. I wonder if anyone is going to have the guts to stand up to Harry. NOT!!!. Just let you know I'm glad you found a new home. Keep up the wonderful writing. I await the next installment.
Marine Potter Fan
Semper Fi
Harley posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 9:49am for Actions and Reactions
Excellent chapter its FF.net's loss of a very good story. I have enjoyed this story so far and look forward to the next chapter.
Yogert posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 9:39am for Actions and Reactions
I'm impressed by how you continue to make the story consistent and interesting. I've seen fewer spelling and grammar mistakes in this story than I have in many published novels. The fact that you knew and included CINCLANT and STU has shown you either read Tom Clancy or really do your research. Either way, two thumbs up IMO!
Coranth posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 9:35am for Actions and Reactions
Great to see this story again folks! When I saw that it'd been banished from fanfiction.net by the sites administrators, well... to put it mildly, I was PISSED! Those idiots at fanfic.net took this story down, and they took down another great story called, "Harry Potter and the Quest of Light", as well. Good on you for taking a stand and posting this story here, where everyone can read it in its full uncut glory, without the fear of it being taken down for... obscure (stupid) reasons! Keep up the great work!
Syrup posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 9:05am for Actions and Reactions
Love your story and fanfiction.net sucks for kicking u off . Been reading since begining keep posting
dobbiessweetie29 posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 8:51am for Actions and Reactions
I love your story, and if I could figure out how in the world one complains to the administrators of ff you bet I'd be bombarding them with notes to reinstate your story. There are so many crappy stories out there that should be deleted, and what do they take off but your fantastic work of fiction. I can't think of one story that I've read recently that didn't have authors notes. In fact some of them seem to be almost entirely note and only a few hundered words of actual story. It makes me crazy. If you'd like to post instructions on how to email them, or what I should do to reach the right people or would like to email them to me....Please do! I can't wait for chapter 18. I've read your other two stories several times each. They are such a facinating read. I love your long chapters. Don't ever change. I love you guys.
Chthonius posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 8:05am for Actions and Reactions
Hmm, I was hoping to see Harry at least blow up something to get rid of his anger, but I suppose that really would be out of character for him, given his more mature response to things these days...
Hopefully there will be some beating-up-ons next chapter though.
soup posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 7:27am for Actions and Reactions
hmmmm...what are you peeved about?....hmmm oh i know! i know! it's so darn obvious...
Skullera posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 4:46am for Actions and Reactions
Another great chapter! Loved it and can't wait for the next one.
Honestly, what was fanfiction.net thinking? Grrrr.... They can be so annoying! I'm glad i managed to find your fic otherwise i would ahve cried myself silly over the loss.
Until next time!
Jim posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 3:43am for Actions and Reactions
Glad to see you're continuing in the face adversity. Keep up the great writing! Thanks.
fairyp80 posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 3:26am for Actions and Reactions
hehe...newport nudist colony....hahahahaha
ok that's out of my system. stupid FF.net. I am glad that you found another site to use quickly because your writing is too good to miss. keep up the creativity!
verahsa posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 3:25am for Actions and Reactions
Hey guys, great job so far!
Downfalls & Accolades, as apporpriate:
Harry/Hermione. I've never been a big fan of H/Hr, but you seem to be managing it almost as well as Jeconais' "Like A Sister," which tells you I'm enjoying it and it's believable. I love Dumbledore's methods so far, they portray him as truly manipulative but not quite a bastard, which is difficult.
The modified Fidelius is good & bad. Good in that it provided a simple solution to a problem. Bad in that it seems to possibly pave the way for an overly superpowered Harry.
I'm glad to see you on fanficauthors.net. =) I'm also very pleased to see you use the same standard html pages that most of the other authors here have used, it's clean & simple.
I miss your detailed author's notes, the humor factor has always been great. =)
I am also enjoying the Draco/Luna mix. While I don't quite like Draco by any means, and seeing him redeemable irritates me, you've done it well enough for me to be happy with it, and IF he's going to be redeemed, Luna as a match is quite well suited.
Thanks for your efforts, and thanks for not giving up in the face of adversity.
Riven posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 2:49am for Actions and Reactions
well another wonderful chapter. dont really know what to say bout it other than it was awsome. a deffinet O
it seemed shorter thn the others but i supose that just me because the word count is similar to other chapters. i would make a suggestion however concerning the layout of your chapter on your new page/site.
they all go by title but i would find it immensley helpful if you included an actual chapter number. i cannot wait for the next chapter. keep up the awsome writeing.
John
BeckiSoup posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 1:51am for Actions and Reactions
boo hiss to fanfiction.net! they just lost their best story! this was an awsome chapter! hee hee...just how romantic will harry's proposal be? i can't wait for the next chapter!
Jessie posted a comment on Thursday 15th September 2005 12:14pm for Actions and Reactions