The Boy Who Wasn't
By Bobmin
Reviews
Sheepstamper posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 7:42pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
Nice one......Sheeps
vl100butch posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 7:41pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
ROFLAMO.............................
I wish I had half as much imagination....
iluvchocs posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 7:37pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
*cracks up* Great idea here - I love the way Harry acted, and his 'wives' too xD
redjacobson posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 7:10pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
funny. you did have a lot of fun with the cliche's didn't you? The only thing I would like to see expanded on; was the Temporal Authority thing; that could be really interesting.
Anyway; thanks for sharing this with us
red
Michael Foerster posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 6:58pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
Wooooo, this one is gooood (It took some time time to get back from the floor). Dumb-as-a-door is definitly unenviable.
Thanks for sharing this bunny.
ReaderX99 posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 6:21pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
ROFL
now thas short and sweet.. chock full of cliches and whatnot, but still funny to think about albus's facial expression with neville and flowers (evil grin).
thanks for writing!
ridgeback77 posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 6:20pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
Excellent. I just wish there was more of the Harry/Tracey/Susan interaction.
Viridian posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 6:17pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
Bwahahahaha!
Thank you for curing my headache! (Just wrote a five thousand word fight scene, so yeah, I really needed a laugh.)
Best line: Tracey giggled. "I do believe I saw your Boy-Who-Lived out in the field picking daisies, Headmaster."
Enjoy the holiday!
skulLXeon posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 6:02pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
the only thing i might have to ask, what's the TA for? i read the bit about training, but is it just for that? or is there more to it? cause it got me curious... feel free to ignore the question though... good fic, lol...
kinda sad that nevilla was pickin daisies lol...
adios for now... nad keep up the good work... =D
Donald Deutsch posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 5:39pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
Ok so no sequal, can I take your idea and run with it then. I love the idea of the Temporal Authority, and it could make an interesting idea for a story where Harry comes back after his training to find a small band of witches and wizards fighting in the background to try to defeat Voldemort, and he comes to help them for some reason. Just an Idea.
Bob6 posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 5:38pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
A good one. Your fictions are always enjoyable. Can't wait for the next one
Minerva Granger posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 5:12pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
Yes, Albie. Definitely bugger!
Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 5:10pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
Oh, this is great! I can't wait until you continue it!
*ducks flying shoe*
Hey, no need to throw things, Bob! Ooo...hey this is a nice one. Size 13, perfect. Can you throw the other one?
Not even if I thew a couple of my rabid plot bunnies into your yard?
Come on...I have this great one that includes Harry/Hermione/Winkie and Interspecies Pregnancies.
No? Well, thanks for sharing this story anyway. Here's your shoe back. I'd offer you doughnuts, but I fear Alyx much more than you, boB.
Great story, you two.
Mike (MoA)
Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 5:07pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
*Giggles madly* I always wondered what would happen if Dumbledore had really screwed up with Harry. A pity about Hermione and Ginny but, as Harry pointed out, it was Dumbledore's fault and no one else's that they were put in peril.
I think that Neville will fight - The events from OotP through DH show that, if pushed, he has a reserve of Gryffindor courage in him. However, he is not The Chosen One and it is doubtful that he will be able to fight Tom effectively (especially as Dumbledore does not even seem to have started moving against the Horacruxes - the failure with the Chamber may have prevented him from learning about them). Fully trained, Neville might be a match for Lucius and Bella, possibly, but not Tom himself.
A nice little exploration of the world of 'what if...?' Well done.
BenRG's Rating: 8/10
CootiePatootie posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 5:06pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
<chuckling>
Very funny. I love the casual mention of the abilities that Harry possesses (I am falling over laughing here) and the three way marriage is great. I *would* be interested in knowing more about this "temporal authority" thing which sounds really neat, but I understand about no sequels. Have you used it in another fic?
Neville is SO funny and so clueless. You've pretty much nailed him if Harry was not around to encourage him, Hermione to help him/teach him, and Ginny around for him to crush on. Since Harry was in Slytherin and the others were gone "on to the next great adventure," he is still shy, bumbling Neville. Flowers for Dumbledore's office - priceless.
I only wonder how long it was before Harry killed Malfoy. Ha ha.
anyway, great start to my morning. Happy Labor Day!
ta,
Cassie
ps. Be careful of Alyx's llama; they spit you know. ;-)
morriganscrow posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 5:06pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
Excellent!
I do so love stories where Dumbledore gets his comeuppance.
I'm curious - what did the two of you think of "Deathly Hallows" and why?
Tarkas posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 5:04pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
Hilarious! You realise, I hope, that your firm statement that there will be no sequel will just inspire more requests for one... B-D
Ah, yes, a pack of cliches in search of a plot... and they found one, and a good one, too, which is the mark of a good author (or two ;-)). I'm almost tempted to ask why some of their friends weren't there, but it's not important. Very good stuff.
Finally, one minor pet peeve of mine: there's no E in "lightning"!
Rufus posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 5:02pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
Excellent... But again, which one of your works isn't...
I know you said no sequel... But this calls for more... As always, you started a universe with a huge potential. It would be a shame to let it drop. But hey, I'm not the one writing in it ;-)
Good work as always...
Rufus.
Stygius posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 4:49pm for The Boy Who Wasn't
funny... and i always did like susan and tracey
Dragon posted a comment on Sunday 2nd September 2007 7:47pm for The Boy Who Wasn't