Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Wednesday 1st April 2009 5:52pm for Chapter 1

What a brilliant fic. I was a little shocked by Percy, the way you were building up, I figured the Weasley's down fall would have been orchestrated by Dumbledore either as punishment for taking Harry's side, or simply as another move to further whatever game he's playing. Percy doing the betraying just never occurred to me. I wonder what his 30 pieces of silver were?

Lionsgate posted a comment on Wednesday 1st April 2009 5:14pm for Chapter 1

Welcome back Bob & Alix .
My luck i think ( fate is a bitch ) .
Finely my favorit autors are back and it had to be with a H/G story and even worse a MOron/Herm. coupling , the one thing i just can't stand ... Why allmost all autors who do a H/G story add that secodary MOron coupling i will never understand ( cant you just kill the carrot ... ) Well it is your story and you can't please everyone .
So no coment on the story . ( sorry i only read the first few lines )
Maybe next time i have more luck so please keep writing ...
And all the best i can wish you both .
Regards Rudy