Matthew Sands posted a comment on Friday 8th May 2009 11:40pm for Chapter 1

Yeah, blowing up the prison holding anyone that might have acted against the Ministry doesn't exactly endear the non-magical government to me. Especially when they have a Magus to deal with the defenses.

Chiyo posted a comment on Friday 8th May 2009 11:15pm for Chapter 1

Nice twist indeed.

10/10 would read again. =)

Dagaz posted a comment on Friday 8th May 2009 11:11pm for Chapter 1

Excellent

Amejisuto posted a comment on Friday 8th May 2009 11:10pm for Chapter 1

HOLY WOW! I was reading some of your other one-shots on the site this morning when I found this little nugget of fictiony goodness! This is so great! What a unique plot bunny! I love Marie's faith that her Daddy would come for her no matter what, and her pet Djinn was so cute! For some reason I had that big Monster from the Bugs Bunny cartoons in mind when I pictured him. Then again I'm weird.

Anyhoo, thank you for yet another wonderfully twisted story! They're so much fun!

mwinter posted a comment on Friday 8th May 2009 11:06pm for Chapter 1

I would have like to find out what happened to dumbledore and the weasleys. Great short. keep them coming as well as Mutant storm.

Jonathan Neihengen posted a comment on Friday 8th May 2009 10:45pm for Chapter 1

OMG! That was AWESOME!! Another great story you two.

Dareycow posted a comment on Friday 8th May 2009 10:43pm for Chapter 1

I think this calls for a Bartemius Triology / Harry Potter crossover!

coronal posted a comment on Friday 8th May 2009 10:16pm for Chapter 1

sweeeeeeet


*drools and passes out*