Exposure, a Dark Fic!

Koalasco posted a comment on Sunday 10th May 2009 12:07am

Woohoo!! Great fic, lurved it. Really awesome.

Just as a side note, when are you going to be updating Mutant Storm? I've been waiting for the new chapter for quite a while...

No pressure :P

amanda2590 posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 11:13pm

I like it. I always though Dubledore got away with to much.

Snowdove30 posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 10:54pm

Awesome. Simply awesome. As usual this story was wonderfully well-written and entirely believable. I was not surprised at Dumbledore's throwing Harry out the gates while everyone else hid inside Hogwarts. How terrible is it that I wasn't surprised at the depths he and the Ministry would sink to :(
I was disgusted by how easily Hermione turned her back on her parents, her heritage and Harry for the Wizarding world. I would have never imagined she would be a party to the kidnapping of children. Makes her as bad or worse than Lucius in my opinion.
Glad to find that that justice was served all the way around.
Loved this version of Harry!! This now joins my short list of favorite HP fics.
Thanks for writing and sharing this with a very, very grateful fan.

sutenhotep posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 10:32pm

Bob and Alyx,
I enjoyed this piece, as I do all of your work, however this was dim at best, and not dark, or was that meant to be a joke?

Thanks much for the story
sutenhotep

BaltaineShadow posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 10:29pm

This was sooo cool!
Just what I expected of one of your stories!

morriganscrow posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 10:27pm

BLOODY F*&$%ING BRILLIANT!!!

PATRICIA ELSEY posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 10:23pm

Very cool. I like the fact that you use a realistic method of defeating the wizards. A bullet in the head is always going to be faster than an Avadra kedavra curse. Great read as usual thanks. ps thanks also for letting our own forces do the fighting.

Peter Clark posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 10:12pm

Wonderful! A great one-shot!

kate19 posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 7:23pm

i always like your stories!!

blinkswish posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 7:20pm

You two are my fave authors ever!

Keep up the great work!

Chris Carter posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 7:03pm

Good story. Liked the shamanism magic, djinns/imps, and the wizarding world kidnapping muggleborns was an interesting idea.

On the complaint-front, there was kinda the "Bobmin fic checklist" lol:

God-like Harry........Check
Evil Dumbledore, or Dumbledore who thinks he's doing good but is actually evil and unrepentant.....Check
One-sided fights.......Check

In this story and in the also very enjoyable 'Wizard's Fall' fic series, we see Harry destroy an evil wizarding world, and I admit, this story in particular made me think of how interesting it would be to see a story where Harry defeats Voldy only to have muggles launch attacks on wizard society and Harry actually have to go to war against muggles having just finished fighting a war to protect them. Hmm, could kinda see Hermione tearfully telling Harry that the real reason she never seems to go home to her parents is that they treat her badly.

Thanks for writing another interesting and enjoyable story.

Jizzle posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 6:42pm

That fic was in no way dark. Also, Dumbledore being both evil and horribly stupid is king of stretching things. Also, giving unbeatable powers to everyone on the good side is kind of unsatisfying. Also unsatisfying is that the bad guys are so unrealistically and two dimensionally bad and, even worse, the good guys are unrealistically and two dimensionally good.

All in all, kind of lame.

TheHard posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 6:08pm

Wow... nice shot. The epilogue was kind of short, what hapenned with Ron and Hermione? and the other weasley's? what about them?

Nice shot! thanks for sharing :)

Owen 77 posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 5:51pm

Interesting

Heiko posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 5:36pm

Cool idea and great short story

UdderPD posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 5:22pm

Excellent story, I really enjoyed the tale and I am glad that it was not Harry who was dark.

I am not sure that this story realy needs any more; however; 'Wizard Falls' could certainly use at least a couple of more chapters.

Thank you for this and looking forward to more from you.

TTFN UdderPD

PamelaC posted a comment on Saturday 9th May 2009 5:16pm

Oh yes I like it! Very neat story. My onmly picky is - how many obliviated parents got arrested and charged over the disappearance of their children? I'm guessing you'd say the informed muggle governments identified them all - but I don't quite believe that.
Anyway, it's a good story and I like the Harry / government interaction. Thanks ... P

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