The Seeker posted a comment on Wednesday 4th April 2018 7:28pm for Chapter 1

Thank you for this rollicking trip through one of the ways Harry's life should have turned out. Loved how you had Albus stymied and steamrolled on each of his attempts to recapture Harry. Best of all, you ended this wonderful fic with Harry getting the type of life he should have had from the beginning.

Ldysabella posted a comment on Monday 17th July 2017 6:19pm for Chapter 1

I really liked this whimsical little 'what if'. Voldemort as a paper weight is just the perfect touch.

sylvelle posted a comment on Saturday 15th February 2014 11:42pm for Chapter 1

Fun story, wow just a couple of things and the whoke canon comes apart. Wow...

Thanks

Tricia

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd December 2013 11:30pm for Chapter 1

Terrific! I like Harry getting away, knowing about his heritage and albus getting his just desserts!

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Thursday 28th November 2013 9:02pm for Chapter 1

Terrific idea!

adafrog posted a comment on Sunday 7th July 2013 4:20pm for Chapter 1

This was great!! I love the AU versions of HP.

keichan2 posted a comment on Tuesday 24th July 2012 11:39am for Chapter 1

Whooo! Reading Harry's letter was was very funny! I will confess that I would have loved to have this story to be a longer one, maybe detailing each years... Thanks for sharing!

vicare posted a comment on Tuesday 10th April 2012 6:32pm for Chapter 1

Why, oh why is this story not longer... like 60k or more... this could be epic

magister negi posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2012 4:18pm for Chapter 1

unusual but pleasant ^^

darridle posted a comment on Wednesday 14th December 2011 3:30pm for Chapter 1

niiice

Shows that Dumbles is just too deep into his own agendas :))

noylj posted a comment on Sunday 6th November 2011 3:20pm for Chapter 1

Very good. Would make an excellent multi-chapter story.
Glad that Hermy was only nearly killed.

WBH21C posted a comment on Sunday 6th November 2011 7:56am for Chapter 1

So very well done! A nice twist.

Feno3000 posted a comment on Thursday 8th September 2011 4:05pm for Chapter 1

Quite a fetching story idea, but the final execution reminds more of an exposition than of a proper story. The abbreviated narrative feels almost sterile and emotionless, something a story like this shouldn't feel like as in the end it's all about emotions and reactions thereto...
But you DID manage your goal as it is stated in the story's title... the canon was thorougly derailed. I'm just wondering if not 400,000 thousand words would have been more worthy and useful to a plot like this than 4,000.

cyclone1969 posted a comment on Wednesday 7th September 2011 2:45am for Chapter 1

hehe simple and the way JKR should have done it lol

noreenklose posted a comment on Thursday 1st September 2011 10:01pm for Chapter 1

Great story!
I liked it a lot.
Thank you for writing it.
I really loved that you "saved" Hermione at the end.

KUTGW,

Noreen

Addlcove posted a comment on Sunday 7th August 2011 8:03am for Chapter 1

I would love to read a story that used this as a broad overview of what was planned to happen :)

Crys posted a comment on Monday 17th January 2011 7:03am for Chapter 1

Huh. Wonder how I managed not to read this when it was posted.

Great story. Believable actions and reactions by all the players we know.

Only 1 question: if pulling the diary out of Malfoy manor crashed the wards (and the house), what did pulling the cup out of Gringotts do?

While I would like to read a longer story based on this premise, you've already hit all the relevant points and anything more would be bordering on original fic with almost completely new characters.

Good story. Thanks for posting it.

PS: 14 foot bionic gerbil?

darksidhe posted a comment on Thursday 23rd September 2010 7:14am for Chapter 1

That's kind of a neat idea. Sorry, I'd leave a better review, but I'm still on my first cup of coffee.

jedielfsorcerer posted a comment on Tuesday 24th August 2010 9:07pm for Chapter 1

This is a good one! ;p
It would be even more interesting if it was written out as a epic story! ;p
just an idea.

Dahlias posted a comment on Saturday 3rd July 2010 4:36pm for Chapter 1

lol, voldy a paperweight :) that gave me a chuckle.