Canon Derailed
Chapter 1
By Bobmin
Reviews
DJ posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:25am for Chapter 1
I am impressed that you hit all the high points and finshed it as a oneshot. Nice job this was fun to read.
kls1960 posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:17am for Chapter 1
Succinct, yet interesting and without gimmicks. Very nicely done. Now can you do the same story line in 250,000 words?
Srikanth posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:15am for Chapter 1
Awsome!!
Fimbulvintr posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:12am for Chapter 1
Just one complaint, the Supreme Mugwump is the head of the International Confederation of Wizards, I don't think Britain has the authority to appoint a leader for an international organization.
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:11am for Chapter 1
I rather liked this, an interesting take on the consequences of the Dursleys' giving Harry more information. Dumbledore certainly reaped what he'd sown in this one. Outstanding story, glad to see you back writing.
Infin1x posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:07am for Chapter 1
See that's how you should deal with every situation like that snip it in the bud early on and don't let them get going. A little poison in the right place at the right time will solve most problems.
morriganscrow posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 11:47pm for Chapter 1
I do enjoy a story where Dumbledore gets shafted. Well done!
tangentsferret posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 11:41pm for Chapter 1
You guys are marvelous. Twisted and deranged, but marvelous.
Well done.
DukeBrymin posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 11:35pm for Chapter 1
Fun, nice to see an intelligent Harry.
Of course, my only complaint was a lack of Harry/Ginny, but that's standard for me.
Thanks for sharing the plot bunny with us!
katrina posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 11:16pm for Chapter 1
Well you done it, what a read. Loved every word.
James Barber posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 11:09pm for Chapter 1
oooh that was great, but what about his father's invisiblity cloak, or what ever happened to hedwig? these and other famous examples of the ongoing series called harry potter fanfiction will be answered or not by the incredble team of bob and alyx that is if bob survived his wife's new toy...!
aengus posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 11:00pm for Chapter 1
I swear...
Only the you two could bring the world a story as interesting as that, and not turn this into an epic length story like the "Sunset/Sunrise" series.
you know, if you did...
The whole of your fan base would lap it up like a dehydrated dog.
Thanks
ginners posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 10:58pm for Chapter 1
Wow! Now THAT was better than anything JK wrote lol.
Good work!
tntornado posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 10:57pm for Chapter 1
aw man its too bad this is complete - I would love to read this story fleshed out - with more interaction between Harry and Ling, and how everything happened, maybe some stories from after school.
The whole thing is an awesome story, and I very much enjoyed it.
TnTornado
Charles Slone posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 10:44pm for Chapter 1
*chuckles* Oh this is good *claps for Bob and Alyx*
Panaka posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 10:42pm for Chapter 1
Not as good as the other one you released today, but readable.
To be honest, that's al I can say about it.
DrT posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 10:38pm for Chapter 1
What a cute little bunny!
John Conner posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 10:36pm for Chapter 1
Excellent story. Do you have any plans to expand on it at some point in the future? I would love to see some of the details that are only briefly touched on in this.
alec_potter posted a comment on Monday 13th April 2009 10:35pm for Chapter 1
Nice...found it to be very funny.
wiredwizard posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 12:27am for Chapter 1