Canon Derailed
Chapter 1
By Bobmin
Reviews
Anansii posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 7:43am for Chapter 1
Applause! I think that's a record.
Dethryl posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 7:22am for Chapter 1
Completely cracked. I love it. The easy disposition of the Horcruxes doesn't jive, but no fic is perfect. Keep up the good work.
freshwater posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 7:19am for Chapter 1
Voldie encased in a lucite paperweight! That 's the best line in the entire fic! Well done!
PamelaC posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 6:59am for Chapter 1
Luverly plot - when are you going to write it?
joeBob posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 6:56am for Chapter 1
This story started out so good and oh so satisfying. But then it turned into just a plot outline that definitely needed much more "show" rather than "tell". (It was a great outline, though.)
The only thing that rang a little false was the idea that Draco was placed into an orphanage for just the reasons stated. In truth, plenty of dark families would love to get their hooks into the last Malfoy scion.
willyjoeshow posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 6:26am for Chapter 1
Great plot. This would make a great novel length story or series.Great work (as usual)
~willyjoeshowâ„¢
Ruth Smith posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 6:03am for Chapter 1
Excellent! enjoyed the worsening reports from Britain and opposite from Harry.
lazypr posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 5:31am for Chapter 1
Well...that was certainly to the point! I personally do like it when fanfiction stories point out all the glaringly obvious plot holes and use them towards Harry's betterment. Thank you!
BaltaineShadow posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 5:06am for Chapter 1
Great!
I almost laughed myself silly regarding Voldies end^^
You don't think you'll write another story centering Ling and Harry at RMI, do you?
Steve's Place posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 4:35am for Chapter 1
As always, another great effort from Bobmin. It is also really good to have you back in the saddle, you have been missed.
Looking forward to "Mutant Storm" being updated as the Lama butt kicks you with more inspiration. (lol)
Steve
Houseki posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 4:26am for Chapter 1
dude this was hilarious, only you two would think shite like this up oh man i am laughing my arse of reading this.
Treck posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 4:22am for Chapter 1
Have you ever thought of doing a Dumbles at the pearly gates?
Trunks_01 posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 4:16am for Chapter 1
Wonderful :) You answered this challenge and made a story that I really loved :)
Babs posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 3:21am for Chapter 1
A fun read.
David Najarian posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 3:07am for Chapter 1
Great story. Compelling and rich.
Good work as always, and may the Llama be with you.
tw posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 3:01am for Chapter 1
This is a very wonderful example of an alternate school Harry. It reminds me of the Guerilla Potter from Dissobediencewriter on FF.net.
I think that you two are a great force in the multiverse, without equal. Thank you for your efforts, and I hope you know that we enjoy your work so much it is hard to describe it.
Wonderful ficlet, I can't wait for this to turn into Wizard's Fall...(a series :P)
rosiegirl posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 2:53am for Chapter 1
That was great!
Lee Dickie posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 2:20am for Chapter 1
Great one-shot, but so much happened it was almost a highlights review rather than a story.
Mickey posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 2:17am for Chapter 1
Very nice outline, I'd really like to read this whenever you get around to fleshing out the outline you've posted here into a full story.
The Unicorn
Shadalarion2 posted a comment on Tuesday 14th April 2009 8:03am for Chapter 1