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newton1392@yahoo.com posted a comment on Friday 16th November 2018 8:22pm

I don't even know if you read these anymore for this story, but I just discovered this story and it has become one of my all time favorites, thank you for writing this, looking forward to starting the in a few minutes!

paganlady2016 posted a comment on Tuesday 30th October 2018 6:35am

I could feel the danger coming closer and closer. Very good chapter

Jces999 posted a comment on Saturday 29th September 2018 3:39am

Thank you so much for that last Pet Peeves” - incomplete stories! It breaks my heart when I’ve become so invested in a story, only to find it’s a WIP that hasn’t been updated for the last 5 years! Also, thank you for your writing and even more so for the Author’s Notes- it’s a pleasure to get a flavour of the Authors.

Brady66 posted a comment on Thursday 20th September 2018 6:10am

this was such a beautiful story!!! Now, onto the sequel

Fraulein Takoor posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2018 12:42pm

Mmmmmhh... Hermione's a Seer!

Fraulein Takoor posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2018 11:09am

I love how all Dumbledore's actions are thwarted xDDD

Fraulein Takoor posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2018 10:12am

I really like your format, the way in which you separate different situations/people/time reminds me a lot of Dan Brown's style!

I absolutely love the t-shirts by the way, they are hilarious xDD

Fraulein Takoor posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2018 6:39am

I wonder why you use the term "full blood" instead of "pureblood", is it because of the term "half-blood"?

Can't help but stress out how much Dumbledore is a MASSIVE PRICK

Fraulein Takoor posted a comment on Thursday 19th July 2018 5:20am

Damn Ron is such an arsehole

Fraulein Takoor posted a comment on Wednesday 18th July 2018 2:26pm

Yep, that kick in the balls was definitely deserved *evil grin*

Fraulein Takoor posted a comment on Tuesday 17th July 2018 3:08pm

This is quite exciting!! And I love a good Dumbledore/Ron bashing ;)

StillHagrid posted a comment on Monday 5th March 2018 4:16pm

O I got Som'mat ta say ter you two. I enjoy yer standard disclaimy things, and I truly luve yer stories, but yer Pet Peeves make me snort Romerta's finenst oak matured mead thru me nose! Me old wand were oak, do yer think that's why I like her mead so much? Don't mind any spelly mistakes, I'm 'aving a few gallon cups o' mead now. Me Interwhat connection may be a bit slow though, Turns our dragon dung don't make the fastest connection. It's sticky ya see, and makes the number kinda hard ta dial up. Weather's horrible, hope ye're feeling well

mysuv1 posted a comment on Friday 5th January 2018 9:20pm

I am Loving this story I sm sad we lost madam Pomfrey. Couldnt the giant fall on dumbledoor and Snanep?

mysuv1 posted a comment on Thursday 4th January 2018 3:30pm

I am loving this story ty so much

mysuv1 posted a comment on Thursday 4th January 2018 2:30pm

I am enjoying this fic BAD RON he lost best friends

mysuv1 posted a comment on Thursday 4th January 2018 1:06am

so far i like oit Dumbledoor getting the bad end

Marcikyle posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2017 7:17am

Im just going to comment on your disclaimer... that was the funniest and most unexpected shit i have ever read. i spit out coffee on my keyboard. That was fucking awesome!!!

docholiday024 posted a comment on Wednesday 31st May 2017 12:29am

First and foremost I want anybody reading this review to understand that it is their story and they can do whatever they want in the context of this story. Now on to the review. The thing that has made this story so good is the fact that it's believable you can see everything happening in this story happening in the Harry Potter World. Up until now. Let me start with the obvious Harry's leg. Ever seen a show called house then you'll understand this next part of the review. I had a friend who had something similar happened to him only it was his calf. Knowing the struggles that he went through he got to the point where he could walk without a walker or a cane but if he had any strenuous activity his leg would give out on him. So in that context pretty much you Limited at least as far as keeping it real Harry and Voldemort's fight. 30 seconds into the duel and Harry's leg is going to be so bad that he's barely a going to be able to move, a minute into the fight and Harry's going to be laying on the ground in so much pain that he's not really going to be able to move much. Therefore minute-and-a-half and then we'll be over Voldemort will win Harry will be dead. Again it is your story and you can do anything you wish to do. But unfortunately unless you magically heal his leg somehow later on in the Fic it just won't seem real which will take away from your story. Again this is my opinion and has no actual bearing on the story. Now II pet peeve I have about this story is with all the preparing that Harry and the rest of them have done but her parents didn't have an emergency portkey? It just don't make sense to me but as I said that's just my pet peeve.

uvarunr posted a comment on Monday 1st May 2017 9:26pm

It's a good story; by now I'd even call it a classic that most people in the fandom have read, at least the older readers.

There are some plot holes and inconsistencies here and there, but on the whole the world-building is immersive and satisfying. I think it's the third time I've read this story in 10 years, and I still like it.

The only thing that actually bugs me is this...why didn't Harry kill Lucius Malfoy when he captured him with his cousin? It just doesn't make sense, given Harry's goal of saving lives. That single death would have saved thousands and pushed back Voldemort's plans for months, if not derailing them entirely. Harry doesn't even let the student death eaters he caught go free, but he lets Lucius go with a warning? Sorry, but that's beyond silly.

Gojin posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd March 2017 1:41am

I personally think even the retaining all the spells he reads a bit farfetched but still believeable to an etent. there is one REALLY good story where harry basically specializes in runes. he is MEDIOCRE at best in pretty much anything else. i LIKE that. it makes harry believable. yet people complained how weak he was in other skills. its like harry could set up some runes and DESTROY dementors with them, and people moaned because his spellcasting wasn't epically powerful. EVEN while not the best with a wand he still came out fairly well.