Parallels

Steven Pesserillo posted a comment on Sunday 27th November 2005 4:51am

Sequel Please ASAP Please

Terry Chang posted a comment on Sunday 27th November 2005 4:43am

thank you for a great read.

Schokki posted a comment on Sunday 27th November 2005 4:05am

A wonderful oneshot!

I may say the longest and the best oneshot I've ever read! I love stories with this pairing, especially when they are so well written and I look up to you and admire your writing style!!!!!!!!
And above all I want to thank you^^! It's only my second year that I learn English and I must admit that I've learnt a lot about the way how to write it correctly since that I 've read this story!;-) My teacher is hooked! XDDD

So I hope I can now manage to read "Sunset over Britain"!^_____^ It's quite big, isn't it? *ggg*

Bye then,
Schokki

darkslifer posted a comment on Sunday 27th November 2005 3:11am

well that was definitely...interesting, still it was excellent, if not a little long for a one chapter story, still please start posting sunrise soon

Kyle Bissett posted a comment on Sunday 27th November 2005 12:02am

A very nice one-shot fanfic.

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 11:34pm

An interesting AU story there. I've seen the various components in various forms in other stories (Evil!Ron, Bitch!Ginny and Introvert!Hermione are fairly common themes in AU H/Hr stories). Howeever, you have given this story your own usual touch and flare.

I particularly liked the slant you gave your Bad Ginny's personality. Too often, AU Bitch!Ginny characters are little more than one-dimensional sluts. You managed to create a believable Slytherin version of the character with the requisite ambition and cunning for that house. The AU Ron is still a red-headed Crabbe/Goyle-style thug, though.

What I found interesting was that you made this a subtly different society too, with far more ingrained Blood Supremicist attitudes that have affected even the Weasleys. Congratulations for not making Arther and Molly too harsh though. It seems that Ron and Ginny's choices were their own, not a result of childhool programming, as with Draco Malfoy.

A nice little concept. I look forward to seeing more from you.

BenRG's Rating: 8/10

nurray posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 11:29pm

An interesting story, I seen this concept done before, but not quite this way. I liked Ron and Ginny being in Slytherin with the pureblood divide being manifested so clearly.

Strangely I found Ginny in Slytherin very believable as a match to her character. Ron less so due to characteristic, but of course he matches the pureblood criteria and to be fair, Marcus Flint was a Ron like character in the books and he was in Slytherin.

Ginny as a villian was different, I have seen her played stupidly, jealous, and selfish but never out-right as evil as you depicted her here. The fact that it jives quite well with her background as given in the books (1-5) is intriguing.

All in all a very good example of Harry Potter in a parallel Harry Potter world story.

patricc posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 11:14pm

Marvellous piece of fanfiction.

Isabelle posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 9:15pm

thats a really sweet story. i also enjoyed you parodys ^^. your really great writers and i cant wait till sunrise over brittan is put up.

e shaw posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 8:15pm

WELL DONE!!!!!!!!!

Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 6:28pm

Great story!!

Olafr posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 5:51pm

Lovely.

wana10 posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 4:12pm

when i want fanfiction, i go to the internet...
when i want the best of the best, however, i go to fanficauthors.net
this fic only reinforces that statement, easily one of the best fics ive found and i love how even though its cliche harry it still fits in, without really bashing you in the head with how cliche it is...brilliant work, all i can say now is, when is more coming?

Debby Smith posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 3:47pm

Wonderful, Fantastic and
all of the above! Once I started reading it I couldn't stop untill all of it had been read!
Debby

sempracaveas03 posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 3:45pm

There must be a sequel, showing children from H/HR, L/S, and Ally/OC! Please!!!!!!

Happy Snorkack Hunting (don't you just love Luna?),
Sempra

rhibrew posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 3:36pm

Curse you for sending me the link for this when I have work the next morning!!
Oh, wait I signed up for that option didn't I?Nevermind.
This is a terrific story!! (I guess we like a super powered Harry now don't we?)
I can hardly wait for Sunrise over Britain!!

merf425 posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 2:28pm

That was great! Took me a while to read, but still fab. I'm looking forward to Sunrise Over Britain!

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