hptrump posted a comment on Thursday 8th April 2010 7:49pm

I like the story more and more as I read it. Glad Ginny dumped Dean.

hptrump posted a comment on Thursday 8th April 2010 7:09pm

Good story but one thing. Ginny at the end of book 5 only mention about starting to date Dean. So if Ginny got to check out Dean's member you making her out to get a slut. If you would have left that part out this would be a Great chapter. I am a die hard Harry & Ginny pairing bu this is a good story so far.

kyuubi08 posted a comment on Monday 22nd March 2010 1:32pm

nice shot at twitter there

Jennianne posted a comment on Monday 8th March 2010 2:18am

This is a completely amazing and fantastic story. It was realistic and completely drew me in. I'm hooked on your writing, I wonder is there a support group for this? A Bobmin Addicts Anonymous group?

SoccerQueen237 posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd March 2010 6:32pm

I LOVE THE T-SHIRTS!! How do you come up with them?

WorldOfLilyEvans posted a comment on Monday 1st March 2010 4:44pm

Hi! I haven't reviewed in a while, sorry about that.
Anyway just wanted to say, I laugh every time V-v-voldemort cackles evilly. Really, is that part of the evil gene villains carry, or did he read too many comic books when he was younger?
-XXX- Malou

SoccerQueen237 posted a comment on Sunday 28th February 2010 7:35pm

This gets definitely better as it goes.

WorldOfLilyEvans posted a comment on Sunday 28th February 2010 6:29pm

And what's with people using 'text' spelling? 'U' isn't a word, it's 'you'!
Anyway, I love this story!
-xxx- Malou

SoccerQueen237 posted a comment on Sunday 28th February 2010 3:54pm

I liked the end! It was quite funny. The part with the Ron and Snape bashing.. bloody amazing!

SoccerQueen237 posted a comment on Saturday 27th February 2010 10:16pm

Great... I'll keep reading. I really don't want to stop.

SoccerQueen237 posted a comment on Saturday 27th February 2010 8:50pm

This is an excellent chapter. I like how you showed the different POVs. I'll keep reading this and am excited to read what happens.

WorldOfLilyEvans posted a comment on Saturday 27th February 2010 6:15pm

Wow. This must be one ofyour earliest stories; the authors' notes aren't nearly as psychotic as I'm used to from you two.
I hope I can keep up this reviewing thing (I've reviewed the first chapter as well).
Anyway, I'll be reading you later!
-xxx- Malou

WorldOfLilyEvans posted a comment on Saturday 27th February 2010 4:29pm

This story has started out great, I can't believe I never read this before!

And you're absolutely write about those begging authors (most times they aren't even good writers or stories.)

-xxx- Malou

Jdnokc posted a comment on Saturday 20th February 2010 12:20pm

That really doesn't make much sense. If Harry put up all those wards around his bed as you say he did the spider should not have been able to get to him while under a dark curse.

Paul Blay posted a comment on Thursday 18th February 2010 11:47am

"I know that, Hermione. Mum wasn’t an Animagus and neither am I."

Congratulations on having a story where Harry tries to become an Animagus, but can't. In every either story either he doesn't look into it, or Harry (and generally three quarters of the light-side cast) end up as animagi.

Paul Blay posted a comment on Thursday 18th February 2010 10:42am

"Do not cross our path again. If thou dost, thy life will be forfeit."

That's all very well, but I'd estimate at least a 70% chance that Lucius will end up killing someone else before the story is over.

vander posted a comment on Wednesday 17th February 2010 11:18pm

Super Harry stories are fine, but only if other people are also super as well. Otherwise Harry ends up becoming Harry Stu with no discernible flaws and everyone else is essentially completely useless and not needed.

At this point, Harry could destroy the entire British Magical world with a wave of his hand so exactly why is he hiding? I mean he can freaking absorb books through near osmosis, has a photographic memory, can sense and directly manipulate magic. Who could possibly be a threat to him? Why even bother with allies at all when they will only slow him down? Just go kill Voldemort, Dumbledore and everyone else before they even know what's going on. That's the main problem with Super!Harry stories, they have no where to go once he becomes super.

Anime Monster posted a comment on Monday 8th February 2010 3:58am

Wow... I think that's the best word to use to sum up what I'm feeling after this...and also state that I'm going to be forced to the grocery store tomorrow to buy some bacon... I started reading this two days ago and I only now finished it, on day one I found the link late and ended up staying up past a new dawn and well into the morning before I could tear myself away to sleep. It's now 3:30 in the morning on the third day and I'm going to bed before reading the sequel.

Before I do, though, I wanted to say a few things about this. A question first, have you read "V for Vendetta"? Not seen the movie, read the book. This, especially in the chapters after the new minister is elected, reminds me of that comic. The confusion and share terror of the unknown and now a totalitarian government in charge of England, I'm eager to see what you do in the sequel, but I know I need to wait until after I wake up later this morning to read it.

I must say, this is probably the best sixth year fic I've read, and I've read a lot of them. This is realistic, I could see some of what you were planning before it happened (as soon as I read the first of Hermione's prophecies I knew early May and then as an afterthought, mid to late April, then again, my mum is a Taurus, so I sorta cheated). The nuclear bomb? There's only one other story I've ever read that involved a nuclear bomb going off in England, so I felt refreshed seeing such an underused idea rather then all the cliche ones that I always see.

Funny, I think this is going to be one of my longest reviews, and normally I have a thing about reviewing stories older than a year, but for truly exceptional works, I make exceptions.

You've truly astounded me and renewed my faith in HP fanfic writers (maybe after the sequel I can get back to some of my works). I know I repeat myself, but I can't find the correct words to drive home to you what I want to say. This was so believable it was scary. Actually, shuddered today as real news broke from Connecticut, it reminded me of the scene with the the refinery (I think that's what it was) being blown up. I know this is a work of fiction, but only truly astounding works cause that sort of reaction to me.

There were so many scenes that made me gasp and others that made me pause and take a walk to digest them. There were some points were I just couldn't stop laughing. And perhaps that is the best thing about this, even though the theme of this is so dark and (I don't have the correct word for it, disturbing is close, but not quite what I mean), you managed to remember that every storm cloud has a silver lining and keep a supply of humor going.

I like the people you kept alive, and I cried when our favorite nurse died. I like the twist you put on Dumbledore (yes, manipulative, evil Dumbledore has been done to death, but you've managed to do it in a way that is rather original) and the rather Yin Yang concept you've seem to have weaved in (that even light hides a bit of darkness and darkness can have a bit of light). On the note of the way you did Dumbledore, another thing I really liked, was how Voldemort wasn't excessively quite and allowing one conflict to be worked out. That's probably the most original thing about that particular plot. That and the redemption of Arthur with the divorce and the death of Ron. The evacuation of Hogwarts was done rather originally, too. I've seen it done where everyone went through the Humpback Witch on the third floor to Honeydukes, but that one never made sense (and J.K.R.'s in the Deathly Hallows didn't make much sense, either).

Anyways, it's time for me to wrap this up, even though there are so many more things I could say. I'm so tired that I barely caught myself before I said "third flour" rather than "third floor" and turned Hogwarts into some odd bakery or confectionery good.

May the muses always shine on you as they have for this story. And please excuse any bad grammar, spelling, etc. as I know better than write into 4AM (which it just turned), but felt the need to do so while this was still fresh in my mind.

delrusant posted a comment on Monday 8th February 2010 1:30am

I have only one word : WOW

You wroteadventures, drama, comedies and tragedies into a flowing sagathat mix them seamlessly. Thank you for this great story which made me dream.

The only really big black dot is the judgement spell in saint mungo, it does not seem to take harry much to cast and as such is an ultimate weapon that he never use afterward. The introduction of such a spell should not have been done because it makes us wonder why it is never used again and why it is not used to reduce woldemort and its forces to nothing before anything goes too wrong.

I can't wait to go on reading the sequel. ;-)

Anime Monster posted a comment on Saturday 6th February 2010 7:26pm

Question: What does a person using a laptop do to prove they're sober? Or with one of those new-fangle opti-laser mice? Then again, if your peeing on any part of your computer, you probably should go to the hospital to check for alcohol poisoning...as that's way too much to drink.