By Bobmin
Reviews
riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 3:47am
It sad that Ministry of Magic would want to take Harry just to control Him, It funny that Percy is one of the people that have to pay Harry back and got lucky that was got off the hook. It sad that Ron is acting like his cousin Draco but I am not really surprise, It be nice that Ron would get better. But I wonder if by the time Ron grow up that he cause to much damage to fix, there always a price to pay for a person action and sometimes the price is higher then one could pay.
gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 3:38am
Oh my, WizBritain is as unified as always,I see. I get the feeling that Rita might be building Harry as the reviled hero, the unlikely champion, much like you appear to be building Ron. The Percy stunt was brilliant, and Ron's drunken fall from grace was a lot better thought out than most pratifications I've read. I'd like some more Ginny in the next chapter, please. I'm looking forward to see how you'll convince me of that pairing.
Thanks.
g
Tabi posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 3:33am
Oh Shite.
I know I'm just asking for Murphy's Law to work on this but I'll say it anyway: How much more bollocks up will this get?
Orion posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 3:14am
Great! I really like the direction you are taking this.
smog2187 posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 3:06am
Great chapter but how could you end it right there? As always I know I'll be eagerly awaiting the next update.
I also noticed a couple of errors that slid under the spellcheck radar, during the scene with Ron and Skeeter you wrote "the mother lode" instead of "the mother load" and at the part when they arrived at the Leaky Cauldron you wrote "diner for four" instead of "dinner for four".
Bobmin356 replied:
While I will concede the second spelling error, the first you pointed out is not in fact an error. A lode is a mining term, and the "mother lode" is a mining phrase meaning you've hit the source of the ore you've been extracting.
Look it up. :)
Jim_xinu posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 3:06am
I'm really enjoying this story--it's probably my favorite of the WIPs I'm following right now. Many thanks for sharing it with us.
Albus Brian Dumbledore posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 3:03am
please update soon!!
great chap
James16 posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 3:03am
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MonCappy posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 2:56am
This comment is in response to the authors' note. The best way for Ron to get better is to become a corpse.
redquail posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 2:55am
Another fine chapter I want to know just what you have in mind for fudge and the minestry as well as the order since harry has just declaired war on the english athourities. and how bad is he going to hurt dumbles when he catches upn with him.
Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 2:42am
Of simple misunderstandings are great catastrophes born. It doesn't help that Rita had to choose the day of Harry's homecoming to do her little bit of fire-setting. Oh, things are not beyond fixing but it is going to take a lot to even convince Harry to let a member of the Order nearto him, let alone talk to him.
BenRG's Rating: 8/10
cwejr posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 2:36am
As Artie Shaw would probably have said, "Very upfront, but Egocentric."
mathiasgranger posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 2:22am
The question that needs to be asked in relation to Ron is: Does he even deserve the chance to be redeemed?
The things he has done now go beyond the pale of forgiveness. Of course, saving for the fact that fanfic authors seem to have this fascination with divine forgiveness in too many cases. The other option often being a fic solely about bashing characters.
Why can't the stories fall somewhere in the middle, where real human beings most often fall?
Thanks for writing,
Matt
Bobmin356 replied:
In this case Ron will be redeemed, that doesn't mean Harry and Ron will be bosom buddies, it just means what it says. Harry won't be out for Ron's blood.
I have a particular form of torment in mind for Ron, but he's being relegated to the back of the pack. His actions are not without consequence and he will come to understand that.
agouraki posted a comment on Saturday 9th August 2008 11:39am
I hope that you wont do it"harry leaves for train ing and comes back ready to forgive them" cliché thought the ron bashing and the sentimental stuff about he abuse and if he forgive them is getting boring after the 100th fiction
Mmm after the masterpiece sunrise over Britain and its prequel I expected better from you guys oh well its bot slash or harry/wolverine father figure that gives it its 3.5/5 from me till now
LDA posted a comment on Wednesday 6th August 2008 11:06pm
Loving the new fic and all I just wish it wasn't going to be a Harry/Ginny ship... with the mutants and hundreds of other witches around ahh the missed opertunitiesand all oh well maybe next time lol
keep up the great work though I can't wait to see what is coming next..
mwinter posted a comment on Wednesday 6th August 2008 4:53pm
hoping you'll update soon
Carol Layland posted a comment on Tuesday 5th August 2008 3:12am
When will you post the next chapter to this fic.
Rae Hazelbaker posted a comment on Sunday 3rd August 2008 1:59am
I really like this story!
Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Thursday 31st July 2008 5:03pm
I did not really like the first chapter that much.
You made the story much more fascinating in this one. I will keep on reading.
Darak1 posted a comment on Sunday 10th August 2008 4:06am