By Bobmin
Reviews
nelgraf posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 1:15pm
adopt me ?
skribbleglii posted a comment on Thursday 22nd May 2008 11:24am
Aww. this chapter was both action filled and cute simultaneously. you guys are awesome!:P
Mot70 posted a comment on Tuesday 20th May 2008 4:33am
*rereading what I still consider to be an excellent story*
So having said that, this chapter’s pet peeve is awarded to all those authors that make a super powered Harry, then load him up with more gear than an M1A2 Abrams Battle Tank.
I'm assuming that this includes any ability to shapechange into the magical equivalent of an M1A2 Abrams... *grin*
AntmanReed posted a comment on Thursday 15th May 2008 4:06am
Arc one was great!
If your bored, I found a Super power Harry book,
Very long, Not yet finished but is close to it. Its called Harry Potter and the 5th element. Very good read. I also found it very very dark and a bit romantically frustrating but in a good way.
jedjones posted a comment on Tuesday 13th May 2008 11:56pm
for ppl who are nit picky over the nuke, just say that the abnormal damage was cuz' of the magic =P.
AntmanReed posted a comment on Tuesday 13th May 2008 6:00am
Listen to Different World by Iron maiden.
When I was reading "Lessons in the Room of Requirement" Section. Its like the musical form of that section.
It was crazy that it was planning just as I happened to be reading that chapter.
jedjones posted a comment on Tuesday 13th May 2008 1:17am
for your pet peeves - i ABSOLUTELY agree. actually, your pet peeve from the last chapter was spot on as well.
thanks for not being idiots =P.
PS: love the writing
AntmanReed posted a comment on Monday 12th May 2008 12:50pm
Excessively long update periods.
Why pray tell does seem to take some authors MONTHS to write a 3K word chapter? I don’t get that at all.
I can beat you there. Fan fiction that was released after 4th book. Was going strong just like yours. VERY good plot. a H/Hr (All I read)
Middle of the 3rd arc the lad went 3 years with out update in middle of a VERY suspenseful moment and then updated a 1.5k chapter telling where she had hoped the story would go and that she was abandoning it.
AntmanReed posted a comment on Monday 12th May 2008 7:45am
Pet Peeve of my own.
People who bomb Luna.
Some people over do her "imagination"
She doesn't have a new magical creature ever sentence like just about ever fan fic here has her doing.
In fact through all 7 books I think she comes up with less than 6 magic creatures no has heard of.
azrael91 posted a comment on Wednesday 7th May 2008 11:56am
My bad on the last review, I accidentally posted it on the wrong chapter, before I had read this one and seen your A/N.
azrael91 posted a comment on Wednesday 7th May 2008 11:29am
I love your story, it is very well written. However, I must point out one mistake. Hermione actually saw Harry naked in Chapter 1, the Matura Magicus
h4hr posted a comment on Thursday 1st May 2008 11:10am
I loved the story. I agree with your idea of a super Harry as him not being blessed with all the super heroes powers. I look forward to reading the Sunrise over Britain next.
Prongs1977 posted a comment on Tuesday 29th April 2008 1:49pm
WOW! Bleeding wonderful! I've ready Sunset in only three days (which is actually less time than HBP too, though HPatDH was 8 hours, but I was sick and in bed, so I don't count it. I'm going to start Sunrise soon, but for now, sleep calls, and I'm hope I can get upstairs without falling out. Again, WONDERFUL! And, BTW, what ever happened to Molly?
Prongs1977 posted a comment on Monday 28th April 2008 12:44pm
OK, please tell me there won't be a 200 foot tall stay puffed marshmellow man in this story!
Prongs1977 posted a comment on Monday 28th April 2008 10:08am
BLAME CANADA! BLAME CANADA! With their beady little eyes and flapping heads so full of lies!
Prongs1977 posted a comment on Monday 28th April 2008 1:46am
Good start, and just so you know, I normally review seldomly too, as the story is a whole, not parts. I also agree with the "i only write to get reviews" thing, I do hint that I like getting suggestions and such, but it's not why I write. Only one question, what site is black-phoenix-warrior on?
call-uncle posted a comment on Monday 21st April 2008 9:02pm
Hmmm.... so far (and this is terribly sad, in the 'where did I go wrong with her' kind of way) I have only read up to Plans Revealed. BUT I have a perfectly good reason.
I love your Pet Peeves section. Most are very true, and a couple apply to me. (*looks innocent* Me? Not updating? Never!)
So I skipped a chapter ahead to read the peeves, and it became like an addiction. Pokies for Fanfic writers. Before I know it, I'm at the end of the story, and theres no more peeves!
Although I would like to give you one. When you beta for someone, then go and read their chapter, and it's full of mistakes that you got rid of.
I'm going back, to read the fic, but I think you should quit your day jobs, and become a married duo of Jeremy Clarkson.
Oh, and the fic is wonderful, by the way. Not too super-powered, because I can't stand that, and not too 'Harry hates the World'. The H/Hr pairing (which usually makes me cringe) is beautifully written, and your talent is like that of pro authors.
So in awe am I of your Peeves & chapters so far, I will sell my sister, and her dog and his kennel, for you to come to Australia (QLD, the Sunshine State!!!) and teach me how to write. Alternatively, you could sell me your souls...
Before my review gets long enough to become a peeve, thankyou, for providing me with three afternoons of entertainment.
call-uncle
nan adams posted a comment on Saturday 19th April 2008 5:54am
Excellent! I am going to start on "Sunrise" tomorrow. Very well written and a great plot. Thanks for sharing this.
bookaholic_au posted a comment on Thursday 17th April 2008 9:34am
You killed Stonehenge! I know I've said this before, but please think before you have your 'heiritage theives' ignore it!
cpd6000 posted a comment on Saturday 31st May 2008 7:06am