By Bobmin
Reviews
Sean Hennessey posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 2:02pm
Oh man,
I love this story. I'm sorry to see that it's ended. Hopefully Sunrise won't be long in coming.
I have one nitpick--yes, it is a canon nitpick, but it really bugs me--it's Department of Magical Law Enforcement, or DMLE, not MLE. That's been bugging me for a while now.
Anyway, you guys are great writers and I've been quite impressed with the quality of your writing. I've noticed minor grammatical things here and there (nothing comes to mind at the moment), but overall, you are definitely one of the better fanfiction authors out there. I don't need to tell you the number of great story ideas out there that are ruined by poor grammar and spelling. Here's an example for the Pet Peeves list: I was re-reading Marietsy's Flames of Betrayal today (great story in general) and I realized that Harry and Ron sounded like a couple of American teenagers--she actually had Ron say "coolies" as in describing something as cool. Great story, but poor execution. Admittedly, I don't have anybody Brit-pick my stories (they're on Portkey under SeanWH, if you're interested), and I may have used Americanisms, but I don't think I ever used something so blatant as "coolies."
Thomas Light posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 2:01pm
This is the coolest fanfiction. Great job, I can't wait for Sunrise over Britian. Well good luck.
hyper_swain posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 1:41pm
loved the story anxously awaiting sunrise over britian
Re Nee posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 1:34pm
not only is this story reat but it was even better than the sucky HBP you should give writing lessons to JKR i love the story and cant wait to readf the rest thank you for giving all of us readers such a wonderful gift
xwingrox posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 1:24pm
YOU ROCK!!!
KEEP YOUR STORIES UP, I LIVE TO READ THEM
well, not really, but still!
i think that you two are the best fan fic writers out there
did you know that this is the onli fan fic that i still read?
TALY HO!
Hood posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 1:05pm
Bob and Alyx,
This has been another of your great works and i have enjoyed it greatly. Look forward to sunrise and the fight of a life time. thank you for such great stories. and keep up the good work
Andrew hansen posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 12:57pm
"According to western literature, the coven would probably engage in an orgy at this point," he said with a wink. "And while I hate to disappoint people, that’s not going to happen here. Instead, I’ve asked Dobby to prepare us a bit of desert in the dinning room.
Desert in the dinning room? sounds like something the twins would set up. or was that dessert?
other then that dont see any problems with it. hope to see the next part to your story soon.
Olafr posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 12:43pm
Wow.
That's all. Wow.
- Olafr.
Manatheron posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 12:08pm
you have both done a wonderful job with this Fic, Yes I admist that it is more than a little dark, but then, much of history is. I look foreward to the start of 'sunrise' and the (Sadly) inevitable end of the series.
Keep up the wonderful work!
PS. Don't bother reading HBP if you havn't. it's just not really worth the effort.
Lia posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 11:57am
An incredible story. I just loved it - definately left me wanting more!
thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Al posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 11:45am
I must I have enjoyed this story, I can not wait until Sunrise comes.
MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 11:31am
A wonderful finnish to a great story. I can't wait for Sunrise to start. Time to start kicking some Death Eater Butt. I also can't wait to see what Bumbledore is going to do next.
MPF
Jayy posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 11:00am
This has been a great fic and I wait with excitement for Sunrise over Britian. Keep up the great work and quick posts!
Jayy
Peter Clark posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 10:38am
Very, very cool. So glad I followed the link that someone sent me and I could continue reading Sunset.
You two are superb authors, and I can't wait to read Sunrise.
alwrighto posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 10:38am
Wow. Seriously. That was really good. I've read the whole thing from the beginning without leaving a review but I think it's about time I did. That was seriously good and it's hard for me to say that considering that I hate Ron bashing, Harry/Hermione ships, and AU...and I think you'll find that Alan Rickman and Snape in actual fact are the same person. They're both one guy who has a really bad case of schizophrenia.
kelvin posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 10:36am
Wow, A wonderful ending. great story as always, i hope you get to finish your ficlet soon and return to sunrise.
Hagrid posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 10:26am
Yes, it has been one hell of a trip, as you put it. From the witty babble in the form of Disclaimers, to the well thought out plot twists and turns. A wonderful story. Keep up the good work and don't let the muggles get yer down.
Crys posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 10:25am
Excellent chapter.
I picked out what Harry was up to early (I've seen him try to do it in other fics) but you kept the accidental magic vague enough that the poltergeist theory was plausible.
One nit: In the oval office, aren't they mess stewards (naval servicemen) instead of civilian butlers?
Nice to see that the Irish are on top of things. The DEs coming in and the strange magical flares in Cork, I think. Hmm, wonder where AD is currently hiding.
Good idea to use the ghosts. I can't believe there isn't SOMETHING Voldy could do to a poltergeist, though. Necromancy, exorcisms, ritual of binding, something? Peeves and the ghosts had better be careful.
Looking forward to Sunrise!
Giovanni posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 10:22am
I liked most of the story, it was a bit fluffy at times but overall it was pretty good.
Keep up the good work.
-Giovanni
knightout posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 2:05pm