Parallels

That was a very well written piece of lituriture.

I really love this story. I read it long ago when I first found it and it is in my printed stories in Pride of Place. All of your stories are. I can't thank you enough for stories that are great to read the first time and for me are great friends I can return to later. Thanks for writing and adding to the Potterverse. I look forward to everything you write with equal pleasure. Thanks again. Patches

corny but cute comes to mind

I don’t generally like the “superhero – all power full” type Harry but you did it in a manner that was quite enjoyable. Just wanted to say … GREAT job.

Awesome! Thank you so much! I have been describing fanfic to friends who are not computer literate. The best I could come up with was, "Take a story that you really enjoy and stick a 'what if...' into it. Now write the rest of the story as if that took place."
This was an excellent example of the genre. Thanks again.

Awesome! Thank you so much! I have been describing fanfic to friends who are not computer literate. The best I could come up with was, "Take a story that you really enjoy and stick a 'what if...' into it. Now write the rest of the story as if that took place."
This was an excellent example of the genre. Thanks again.

Awesome! Thank you so much! I have been describing fanfic to friends who are not computer literate. The best I could come up with was, "Take a story that you really enjoy and stick a 'what if...' into it. Now write the rest of the story as if that took place."
This was an excellent example of the genre. Thanks again.

Awesome! Thank you so much! I have been describing fanfic to friends who are not computer literate. The best I could come up with was, "Take a story that you really enjoy and stick a 'what if...' into it. Now write the rest of the story as if that took place."
This was an excellent example of the genre. Thanks again.

Awesome! Thank you so much! I have been describing fanfic to friends who are not computer literate. The best I could come up with was, "Take a story that you really enjoy and stick a 'what if...' into it. Now write the rest of the story as if that took place."
This was an excellent example of the genre. Thanks again.

Awesome! Thank you so much! I have been describing fanfic to friends who are not computer literate. The best I could come up with was, "Take a story that you really enjoy and stick a 'what if...' into it. Now write the rest of the story as if that took place."
This was an excellent example of the genre. Thanks again.

I read this story for the first a while back, and loved it. My only complaint is a minor point, really: The "Lust of Athena" potion? Athena was a virgin goddess who never married... as far as I know she never used her sexuality as a weapon either, preferring to use her intellect or battle skills. Aphrodite would have been a better choice of godddess, as she's Love and Beauty. It's a minor point, really, and it in no way detracted from my enjoyment of the story, but it did cause a moment or two of confusion on my part.

Damm. Suckered again.
It's late. A one shot before bed. A single chapter to nod off to.

DUH! What the hell was think'in??
One chapter?
Huh!

Now it's amost 1am.

Great story. Nice spin on life without Harry. (but one chapter ???)

Thanksss
Ed

Thankssss
Ed.

God what a story the way that you are able to write is phenomenal please continue your writing

"I think our Miss Weasley would probably be stronger and more suitable for him, but he must be allowed to make his own choices. Miss Granger is a very strong witch, but not very strongly willed, although that might change, with his friendship to help guide her. I will watch them and see where this goes"

One assumes that all Bumbles, everywhere, can not resist sticking their overly large and crooked noses into things they have no business being concerned about, even with warnings.

Was he most upset at what Ginny did or that he couldn't redeem her?

Then, even at the end, he is still sticking his nose into things he has no business being involved in.

Another good one, yep, absolutely. I do find it sad that Ginevra's thoughts and ideas didn't mellow, but that's life, isn't it?

Bravo.

Did Harry manage to get back the money the relatives took by James' will?

One of my favorite stories. This and Sunset/Sunrise Over Britain are perhaps the best works of HP fan fiction I've read in many years. I hope you continue the Wizard's Fall series as well, it's very entertaining :-)

Great story.

Would love a sequel; about their apprenticeship, wedding and marriage... as well as how the world changes -- perhaps from the pov of their children, when they start Hogwarts.

I would also love a prequel set in "other-world", about what happened to James and Lilly marriage, and how she coped... about the world (bigotry) in general... and about Hermione's time at Hogwarts, upon until Harry arrive -- perhaps especially about a first-year Hermione deals with the wonders of magic, coupled with the bigotry of purebloods.

YES! One of your best stories. You do have a way with words.

most excellent work