Exarikun posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 9:52pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

hmmm, well, promising start. while i'm not primarily a h/g fan, i have little against it.
what i'm wondering now is how it will come to pass, as ginny was receiving training as well, like hermione and ron... if harry's going to give her another chance, will he do the same for hermione and ron? although, you can drop ron in my opinion...

i'm a bit confused as to the timeline of the thing... at what approximate date did harry get extracted by the x-men?
i think logan would take a liking to the boy. he's a survivor after all, much like himself. and he's short to boot :)

scott, don't know, i've always seen him as a bit of a stiff... he'd likely be uncertain as to what to do with harry, or how to act around him. tho i'd think he would be honest enough to admit that and try to work out a way to get along with harry.

since you're using the cartoon version of x-men, what with xavier's hoverchair, wich kids are present of around harry's age? i'm not as familiar with that continuity as i'd like to be...

how's the update schedule for this one look like?

Ramos posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 9:49pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

And here I thought my two favorite 'ships were incompatible. You proved me wrong! Very nice so far; I can't wait for Logan and Professor Snape to meet. "So, you're the hairy little freak who taught Pot--" SNICK-WHAM-THUD.

Amejisuto posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 9:47pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

WHEE!! I wanna just jump up and down for joy!! I wanna read this chapter again! It's starting out so well! I use too many exclamation points!!!

Seriously, great start. I think you really have a nice mix of cannon and your own little AU. I don't know if the whole Dark Phoenix thing happened in your Universe, but even if it didn't I think Jean will be able to help Harry learn control. Logan will definitely be able to teach him anger control and I'm really looking forward to them forming some sort of relationship. I'm hoping for an Uncle Wolvie thing but that's just cause he's my favorite X-man after Kurt and Kitty.

I also love the telling off Fred and George gave to the Order and Dumbledore. And Harry's anger at Remus is just so right to me. I'm sorry, I have loads of Remus issues and seeing you address them, even if just a little bit in this chapter, made me jump up and down for joy. This is looking to be a great story! I can't wait to read more! Thank you so much for this!

Sonicdale posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 9:26pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

I don't care about the ship.
I don't care about the angst. You haven't made this too over the top.

I like the way things came together. Harry's reaction to all the things are coming out well.

Ron's a git. Check.
Hermione gets it. Check.
The twins are cool, and not Dumblepuppets. Check.

Harry has cool powers? Check. I hope we'll get a good inventory of what he can really do. Magic, teleporting, phasing. And telepathy as well? Nice.

I hope we'll get some great Logan scenes. Wolverine is one of my faves, so I hope to see some of him.

A great start. Here's to hoping for more!

Charles Slone posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 9:24pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Very Nicely done, this is a rare story to find a decently put together crossover. can't wait to see more :D

Crazy posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 9:24pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

This sounds good, and it's not horribly cliched like i've seen some other XMen/HP fics.
Plus, I like H/G.
All up, looking forward to reading the next chapter.

rmcclain124 posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 9:13pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Love the story so far. I'm not thrilled about the pairing, but being forewarned is forearmed. Plus, the fact that you generally keep the level of intimacy below my nauseau threshold is appreciated, so I will deal with it in return for getting a good read.

You've already revealed that twins will be on Harry's side. Given the pairing warning, ickle Gin-Gin will be as well. I am curious about Hermione though. She's neither stupid nor emotionally shallow, so her taking a side will reveal a lot about her character. You've shown some doubt in her, but she is still up in the air at the moment.

As far as Ron goes, whatever.... Really don't care.

Best regards and post again soon,
Shaz

_Moony_ posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 9:06pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

I applaud you for not falling into the cliche of Lily=Jean. I knew you two were to smart for that, but I nearly had an stroke while reading about the "familiarity" of Harry to Jean. Thank you for not falling into the cliche.

Entilzah posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 9:05pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Oh well done! This lived up to my already heightened expectations about your new project. Keep up the already excellent work in true Bob & Alyx fashion!

joseph3103 posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 9:03pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

that was great cant wait to read more.

Kris posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 8:59pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Hello!

Totally loved the first chapter! I laughed, I cried, and I wanted to beat the hell out of Harry's horrid family. I'm glad he was able to get in a little retaliation before their memories were whipped.

Little request... could you please have Dumbledork get pooped on by the llama, or have harry remove his marbles with his totally new power? It would be fun to see him loose his marbles!

Great chapter and I eagerly await your next extraordinary literary masterpiece!

es posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 8:58pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

badassery is howi describe it.

goddessa39 posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 8:55pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Hmm... unlike a lot of people, I am fond of H/G, though how u r gonna work it, im not sure. Yep, Ron is a real prat. Pay him back! And Dumbledore... what can I say about that old man... KILL HIM TORTURE HIM PAY HIM BACK 3 by 3!!!

But I love this.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 8:43pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Jeez, now the only thing I can carp about in this review is the fact that something about your special notice broke Jeconais's system as it always appears there is a hidden "next" chapter!

Great start so far.

smog2187 posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 8:42pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

An interesting crossover you have coming along here. Even though I think that the whole careless!Dumbledore bit was pretty OOC, I think I can get over it and enjoy the story if he doesn't continue to make an ass of himself.

Great first chapter!

james27 posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 8:32pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

As strange as it sounds, I find myself looking forward to your disclaimers as much as I do the actual chapter! They always leave me laughing.

Since I've now actually read the chapter I can only beg you to post another soon.

Good luck!

Dave McCombs posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 8:28pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

I'm glad to see a new story from the pair of you; it was something nice to read while waiting for the AC repair tech (as I type, it's 91 in my office).

I've been reading you since your early days in ff.net, watching your writing style evolve, and I must say this looks like this is going to be your best story yet. It's too early to tell, but the setup in Chapter One has a lot of promise. I'm looking forward to more.

clt_71 posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 8:16pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

I haven't been disappointed in the past with your stories...and I don't feel disappointed now. I have tried to read HP/X-Men crossover stories before, but have thought them to be...undesirable at best, hideous at worse. This looks like the best shot to date. Can't wait to see more.

Erik GL posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 8:11pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

A good start and I am looking forward to reading more =) I was just rereading Sunset again when this came out, thanks for brightening my morning.

Aaron2 posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 7:49pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Another story from Bullet Bob and the 5 time Llama Riding/Racing champion Alyx. I've been a fan since the Dumbledore's Army series. and I like the other stories you have the Sunshine/Sunset series.(I still think the Draco/Luna was the most unusual Pairing in fic history, but it works) the POTP, which was good too.

Now you put yourself into the HP/X-Men crossover this will be interesting. Love to see how Xavier and the X-men help heal Harry. Is he going to visit to new mutants, and the other members. I think Harry will get along the best besides Jean and Scott are Logan, Rogue, and Kurt. I love to see what you get next. keep it up