mathmans posted a comment on Sunday 15th June 2008 4:32am for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

I like where this is going I hope you write more soon.

Mihir posted a comment on Sunday 15th June 2008 4:28am for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

great chapter! It lives up to your standards (as usual) as good as sunrise ... and sunset ... (just finished reading both of them)
so when's the next chapter? I can't wait. I want to know what will happen to Hermione and Ron ... i hope you don't redeem them ... it would be nice for a change to have Hermione in the wrong ... so far, you guys have been doing Ron a lot. I also want to find out how Ginny will factor in this. Finally, I am curious as to what will be Draco Malfoy's and Snape's standing in this story ... Hope you update soon!
cheers,
Mihir

fyrecat posted a comment on Sunday 15th June 2008 3:56am for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

AArgh! You evil b@5t@rd5!
How can you post ONLY ONE CHAPTER of a story this good?!?!?

Samantha posted a comment on Saturday 14th June 2008 12:44pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Good to see you guys are back with an even better story. So far am enjoying the story but since I don't actually know anything about this Xmen thing I can't really comment on how well you are portraying that side of the cross-over. To me this is a whole new take on Harry Potter so am prepared to give you full points for creativity. One concern however - will there be any mutant Llamas harmed in the making of this story?

liquidfyre posted a comment on Saturday 14th June 2008 9:15am for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

UPDAAAAAAATE *falls to the floor shuddering and crying as withdrawal pains wrack his broken and twisted body*

StarrySkies posted a comment on Saturday 14th June 2008 2:11am for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

This is a wonderful idea. I've seen Harry Potter/X-Men crossovers before, but they've been poorly done. I think I've read perhaps one other decent one, and it had been abandoned. I have to admit, after looking at the summary for this I wasn't going to read it because it was a HP/X-Men crossover. But the I realized who it was by, and decided to give it a try.

I really loved it! The feelings and emotions that your characters feel really come through in the writing. I always enjoy reading what you two write, but this was spectacular! Thank you for giving this to us.

lilly_kris@yahoo.com posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 5:41am for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

It is OFFICIAL, a fan fiction story brought me to tears. You wrote Jean beautifully so far and I can not wait for Logans appearance.

makieus posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 11:50pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Well going on my last review, again WOW. (And I don't mean by my 70 Feral Horde Druid either) Like any true writer, the two of you seem to get better and better. I can only hope that Ron doesn't turn into a complete douche, but this is your story, and I am more than sure you have planned out, and are not writing by the seat of your pants. Looking forward to the next update!

(Oh no cannon Nazi from me, I am not a big fan of cannon fics, although I will let you borrow my
AK-57 Uzi Radar Laser triple-barrel Double-Scope Heat sneaking shotgun should you run into any... Or dumbldore, snape etc....

thewisesirivanthes posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 1:57am for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

At the very last line they finally own up to the fact that it is yours not their story.

thewisesirivanthes posted a comment on Thursday 12th June 2008 1:55am for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Someone has copied the first chapter of Sunset over at fanfiction.net. Here is the URL to the stolen work: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4311242/1/Britains_Darkest_Hour

Steve's Place posted a comment on Wednesday 11th June 2008 2:46pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Oh you two are good. I don't much care anymore what sort of pairing you two come up with, I will read anything you two grant us with.

Hey, still got the Lamas? LOL

Steve

liquidfyre posted a comment on Wednesday 11th June 2008 1:14pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

*makes an evil eye at yall* UPDATE

*makes puppy dog eyes and sniffles* update?

*makes his eyes wide and cute and innocent then sniffles slightly as they start to glisten and asks in a pitiful tone* Update?

rosiegirl posted a comment on Wednesday 11th June 2008 5:16am for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Very good story so far.

madmanhg posted a comment on Wednesday 11th June 2008 2:37am for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

i'll start by saying that i have finished all of your stories within the past week and now started to read this one and i have one thing to say -

you guys ROCK in writing these stories. i have to rank your stories as the best i have ever read and your disclaimers are freaking sweet.
gonna be waiting anxiously for the next update =D

hpfirecracker posted a comment on Wednesday 11th June 2008 1:17am for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

I don't know what I like the best. Your stories or disclaimers. Both are very entertaining. Wonderful chapter. Can't wait to read the next. I hope DD gets his arse blown off. Or at least handed to him on a log. Something tells me Dumbledore is up to no good and will not be leaving Harry alone. Until next time.

sparrownightmare posted a comment on Wednesday 11th June 2008 12:20am for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Yet another wonderful alternate universe story.

I can't wait to see more. I think I'm looking forward to Jean taking issue with Snape for his 'teaching' of occlumency to Harry :)

Ravnos posted a comment on Tuesday 10th June 2008 10:18pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Wow, that is certainly a different take on the story. I really like the fact that Harry has other family, creating another betrayal in a long line from Dumbles. The characters haven't had a chance to be well developed yet but you are certainly getting there. Please continue soon!

Heir of Gryffindor posted a comment on Tuesday 10th June 2008 2:06pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

this story is amazing. i had read something similar, but it had nowhere near the depth that this one has. great job. write a new chapter soon.

agouraki posted a comment on Tuesday 10th June 2008 1:12pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

nice just if you could forget hogwarts for some years, its getting boring all the stories about it.

beauty01021 posted a comment on Monday 9th June 2008 2:45pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

yeah this sounds great so far can't wait for more so please update agian and soon.