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azrael3 posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 7:48pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Nice one looking forward to the next chapter

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 7:41pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

That was a very interesting start. I like how you had Jean be Harry's Aunt.

TFW
MPF

darktail posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 7:36pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

for mathiasgranger:

"---along with the Weasley pair." -Snape

This is the first mention (I think),and both Dumbledore and Snape refeer (refear?) to three people a couple times. Ginny hasn't fully appeared nor directly mentioned, yet, but she will when it's the right time, I think. ^_^

...I hope bobmin won't be angry for this non-review. ;_;

jenks posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 7:32pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

LOVE it

darktail posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 7:30pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

...There's only one thing wrong in this story, in my humble opinion. Ron's "dislike" of mutants. Every HP\X-MEN crossover I've read has Ron "dislike" mutants. Maybe there are some in which he doesn't, but I never found one. I just hope he'll grow out of it soon enough. Thankfully, seeing the reactions of Molly and Dumbledore has given me some hope.

...Now, with that out of the way, I can truthfully say that I look forward to the next chapters of this story. Keep up the good work, but take all the time you need, eh? See ya.

mathiasgranger posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 7:23pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Interesting start, but unless I missed something I never saw a mention of Ginny getting training.

It will be interesting to see if Dumbledore ends up paying the piper on someone else's terms than his own.

Snape = evil, and part of me believes that Dumbledore is aware of it, and allows it to continue so that he can control the information flow to Voldemort. Seems to be a rather Machiavellian move to make.

~Matt

katelyn posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 6:58pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

I love this story! also when r u going to put another wizards falls out?

Chris1 posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 6:52pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Wow. Some of the scenes here remind me of Tim's Abyss and Despair fics, only not quite as dark. :D

I really love the Harry&Jean interaction. You do Abused!Harry really well.

The Order meeting seemed a bit off, though. I mean, the twins accuse and rant, and then they sit down. This is probably the result of too much fanfic, but I always pictured them as the sort of get physical when riled up enough. Not attack Dumbledore, of course, but smash something, or go out and slam the door. Stuff like that. But it's probably the result of too much fanfic. ^_^

Really looking forward to where the next chapter takes us. Do you have an update schedule? Or are you going to post the chapters as they get betaed?

Chris, who wouldn't mind if there were two FFA Chapturdays a week. :D

the_mean_marine posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 6:23pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Nice job with the crossover, no blatantly obvious plot holes.

Anyway enjoyed the first chapter good work keep it up.

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 6:16pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

/\/\Y re\/iew is better than HIS I SQUEE'd


*stiks his tongue out at Rakhasa and blows a big squishy raspberry*

Rakhasa posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 6:06pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

It is back! Baaack!! You know how long have I waited for my fix? Every day I checked ~sobs~ Don't take too long again. ~grabs Alyx waist until she gets her Vorpal Cleaver of Arm Chopping~


A wonderful tale ~ponders if he should actually read the chapter _before_ posting a review~

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 6:01pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

SQUEEEEEEEEEEE


AGAIN

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 6:01pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

OH GOODNESS I WUB YALL hella good story and lub the way its going so far although i think they shoulda beat down the dursleys

OH OH OH AN FIRST ONE TO READ AND RE\/IEW NE\/er before has it happened thati got first read on a story i so happy i /\/\ight hafta squee again sorry bout so/\/\e of /\/\y typing keyboard funky and not got new one yet

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 5:26pm for Chapter 01 - Aftermath and Consequences

Squeeeeeeeee