By Bobmin
Reviews
Harriverse posted a comment on Friday 5th December 2008 9:35am
Personally I think everyone should just bow down and worship you two. The advantage of reading someone else's completed work is that you get to see the whole with all the foreshadowing explained and red herrings triggered. I love crossovers and I think you show an amazing knowledge of the X-verse. You have such a wonderfully blended balance of dialog and exposition that I couldn't imagine more characters because it would detract from the focus on Harry. Please don't make a donation in my name and understand that plea's for updates are just another form of worship from those of us who like your 'verse better than the one we usually have to hang around in. It's also the easiest form of review for those who want to let you know they love your work but were so enraptured by your golden prose and lyrical conversations that they had absolutely nothing to complain/remark/or question after reading your updates. It's also hard to hold details in your head when updates are so far apart and the Potterverse is so big to play in. I hope RL is going well and I think I've read everything you two have currently published. Arggg--Your endnote made me loose my compliments on parts of your story.....P.S. to Alyx--Do you really want to see two old, out of shape men mud wrestle??? Personally when reading I replace the current Alan Rickman with the version from Robin Hood--minus the gotee!!!!
Harriverse posted a comment on Friday 5th December 2008 7:56am
I love all you guy's! I would send you butterscotch oatmeal cookies if I could! I loved that scene with the Aurors! Too bad Shacklbot behaved more like a ministry lackey than an Order member!!! It was great the way the Goblin's came through. I can't wait for Ron to get his butt spanked--does he have any idea the mess he has caused? Knowing you wonderful author's, there will be no end of trouble ahead for the Scoobies! Has anyone noticed that the TV show Hero's is like a realistic X-Men? I sincerely hope you continue writing this story!!!
Harriverse posted a comment on Friday 5th December 2008 6:35am
O.K. One double word ("Would would you be able to return the jet to normal size...") and one place you used an before a word beginning with a consonant. I was wondering why no one thought of Harry as entering his own house, but they are thinking like wizards and not aware of his mutant powers. I think Harry is going to blow a gasket whey he finds his books gone! Is there no Gringotts branch in the U.S.? Did I say your story is perfect? And your intro blurb was LOL funny (as usual)!!! Do you guys do parties?
Harriverse posted a comment on Friday 5th December 2008 5:30am
You guys are incredibly talented!!! I teach, and I did not find one grammatical error or anything else that might have blipped on my radar in this writing! Not only that, but the characters are vivid and the story is fascinating. Your opening blurbs are also funny as all heck!!! Thanks so much for sharing your writing with all of us out in the electronic world!
Tammy Driver posted a comment on Monday 1st December 2008 9:24pm
I normally don't read cross-overs, but this one is really good. I can't wait to see what happens next...<G>
wolfey posted a comment on Friday 28th November 2008 8:46pm
um I really like this story and am kinda not above begging for the next update. There arent many viable, believeable xmen/potter crossovers. (now if only you could do a yugioh gx/harry potter crossover lol jk jk, dont want to push you like that and make you stop writing all together)
nth_x posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2008 5:56pm
Oh boy, I was going to grade papers this evening and go to bed early...then I opened this story :(. Very brilliant! I'm amazed that Umbridge's return to Hogwarts hasn't been brought to Harry/X-men's attention. I suppose Dumbledore may be holding it as some sort of ace in the hole, but it would seem like McGonnagal would have mentioned it in her talk with Jean, or Poppy. If the Welcome feast is the first Time Jean hears about it, I'm wondering what fireworks will follow ;) Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
makieus posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2008 7:14am
I hope the two of you are doing well. Short of homemade doughnuts, there isn't anything that I can do to help out. (Lovely economy right now isn't it)
As for this chapter, just going to say great job. Your grammar is great, no ms-spelled words that I could tell (Product of public education system) and the writing clear, concise, and very entertaining. (Most important) Looking forward to your next chapter, but won't pressure you. (Although if you want, I have access to a Hyperbolic chamber where you can apply high pressure....)
Milarqui posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2008 4:36am
There is something I just realised about the comment McGonagall makes about the blood quill Harry was forced to use: she says that Harry had tried to tell her about it, but in the books there is no mention about Harry telling her that Umbridge has been forcing him to use one of those quills, the only conversation between both of them that is related to it is the one they have right after the first class with the Toad, when she sends Harry to McGonagall with a note.
solar1 posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2008 12:55am
Hi Guys,
You haven't updated for quite a while which is really not like you at all... I really hope that you are both okay. All the best
Brady1 posted a comment on Friday 21st November 2008 10:34pm
whens the next chapter comin
fountaam posted a comment on Friday 21st November 2008 2:04pm
Hoping you guys are okay.
I'm interested in seeing what Neville and Luna say to Harry, and am also hoping that Jean discovers Umbridge before Harry shows up in a Defense class.
:)
Mark Armitage posted a comment on Friday 21st November 2008 1:22am
Just want to say that I really like this new story of yours, as well as some of the others such as the Sunset/Sunrise Over Britain series, Parallels and The Power of the Press etc. I was wondering however, is there going to be any more to the Wizards Fall series, as it would be interesting to see what happens after the thousand years is up, as well as what happens on the island in the century they spend there. Cheers. Mark Armitage.
Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Thursday 20th November 2008 10:37pm
I really like this story so far.
It is truly amazing.
However, it is a shame that it has not been updated in a while.
Grace Cole posted a comment on Wednesday 19th November 2008 7:32pm
Is there a way to find out a timeline as to how the next chapter is coming? You combined two of my favorite series and I want to know what happens. Thank you for writing this.
runnerman87 posted a comment on Friday 14th November 2008 4:15am
I've been enjoying this story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. In fact, I have been for a while now, and I'm wondering if there's an estimated timeline. I understand that there are always things that crop up in real life, especially around this time of year, but I'm curious when I might see more from this universe.
xyvortex posted a comment on Friday 14th November 2008 4:10am
I like it, quite alot. I started reading sunset a year or so ago and thoroughly enjoyed it. I skipped the sequel because, frankly, the first one kind of stood on its own.
I love what you've done with Harry here and how complex his relationship with his friends has become. As i started this final chapter, I was going to review and ask if there would be any hints of the canon Snape who was forced to play the role of villain to the only child of a woman he held so dear. Suffice it to say, I hold no illusions now... he remains a greasy git as always.
until the next chapter, good day!
Karanbir Singh posted a comment on Friday 14th November 2008 1:25am
79 days since last update. Read this story many time now. Getting bored, when are you going to update. UPDATE SOON PPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ..................................
Ian Morgan posted a comment on Monday 10th November 2008 11:52pm
how much longer untill your next update
Larry Lansday posted a comment on Friday 5th December 2008 1:25pm